Adrenaline

The Black Fear
Chapter 11
Adrenalina
 
The back ended up crashing to the ground, slamming so hard, so much to tear over the tank, provoking a slight scrubbing.
Because of the strike, i felt a burning sensation in the impacted part, whispering a frosty cry, that enclosed my suffering
My hands tried to break my fall, but unfortunately they were too fragile to hold all my weight
In fact, the palms became completely bloodshot, making them more sensitive to the touch
The burning was constantly present
I was in the same position for a few minutes, hoping it would fade quickly
Instead, it began to join the upper and lower limbs
I felt the beat of my heart increase speed once again, my lips dry, thanks to the warm climate of hell, which dried up my saliva and fatigue that came over me repeatedly, trying to make me lose my patience
But with poor results
Soon after I realized that the worst was passing
The inflammation seemed to be falling
The blazing hot that I felt in those moments it was restoring, starting to get the situation under control
Even managed to get up from the ground, to check my current status
I turned my neck, head towards the most serious wounds on the back, noting that they were not damaged
There was not even a need to treat them
They would heal quickly
Those small abrasions that they were going to train, left me only a slight bother, a little irritating but it could easily accommodate
A sigh of relief was heard, reassuring me immediately
So I decided to continue with the journey, standing up, hold me on the corners of the cave
I raised my eyes, gazing beyond the tuft of blond hair that covered an eye,  looking for the last time the door behind me.
Before me, the same image that I had had previously:
The maze covered with mirrors, which gradually ended, with microscopic pieces of glass, which marked the end of that terrifying experience
Each frame appeared to be in its place, creating a wonderful vision.
In front of me, I had the dream of every woman
Being surrounded by a layer of micro glass that glowed, creating an enchanting atmosphere, giving a fairy effect
Unfortunately, a pinch of imagination disappeared quickly
The great fear came to mind with images that I could only set aside, letting my thoughts eliminate them
The vision of his shaken hand, that moved nervously, persistently, trying to destroy the mirrors in his side, hoping that the anxiety to take control over me, made me fear, but not enough to make me lose my mind
I understood his trick
Even if unconsciously, he showed it to me
The silence began to reign, when he was surprised by my instinctive choice
I did not hear anything
I did not see anything
But the focus became a priority
He was shocked by my determination and my courage to have faced that fear
Precisely for this reason, he did not try to follow me more
At least that was what I had quickly developed
I did not feel the emotions that i had previously shown
The adrenaline that i had accumulated during the journey
The irrational and instinctive attitude that aded my mood
For some reason, the fear vanished, no longer able to get hold of me
I do not put more negative pressure, examine the hole from which it came out of his fingers violently
I was accustomed psychologically
Among other things, there was nothing but broken stripes and mirrors
There was no trace of him
At that point, I turned my back, abandoning what had happened, not forgetting what had happened
For us humans it’s impossible to forgot
 
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The road became very impetuous and distressing
The air turned into something cold and anxious, that froze my bones
My look grew heavy, showing the first signs of fatigue:
My feet began to crawl with the little energy i had left, hoping to find a bit of relief
But that was not the only clue, it was a need of the whole body
The mind does not take it anymore
I absolutely want to rest
After that statement, I decided to check the time, cleaning up the watch from the dirt that covered it
"9:30 am"
I whispered to myself, looking upwards
It had been two and a half hours from when I started to run into this damn hole
But what I still had to stay there?
This disgusting and more narrow way seemed interminable
It was infinite
But above all, became more and more stressful and exhausting cross
By now I was really destroyed
I had a desperate need to catch my breath and get lost the strength to continue
I did not even realize that I collapsed on the floor, resting her face in my knees, with my arms holding me
I considered the ideal location to recharge
I waited a lot to be in that posture
More precisely, since I was dispersed
In fact I was totally worried for the worst
If I had been considered dead?
That question was literally left in suspance
 
With ease, i let fall my skull down, standing still, as if I was turned off by someone
The memories, feelings and emotions flowed quickly in my mind t, as the projected images over a period of 2 seconds
Too short to remember, but not so intense as to forget
Lost even the condition of everything that was around me
All my senses tried to orientate and find the correct time
Before they found it, a powerful light dazzled my sight, making me back into reality
I lifted my hand, covering most of that ray, so as to see something
My eyes widened, surprised by the sight of two gray eyes, a little stretched that were staring at me curiously
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shawol2408
#1
Wow..this story is so....(out of words)....I don't know what to say...
Keep up with the good work...
amalily #2
Chapter 1: I think you have done a great job with this story so far! I like how the characters each have their specific personality traits and how it influences the way they view the excursion. I can see you've thought a lot about this story! ^^ Good work and good luck in the future too!! ^^
iblackstar12
#3
Chapter 1: this looks good^^~ you did a good job writing this one...I know how it feels to write a story when you're not using your first language so...i salute you for the nice chap!~ i'll be waiting for your next chaps~ *subscribes*
PandaChux3
#4
Chapter 1: I think this story definitely has potential - so far, it seems pretty interesting to me :D. I know that English isn't your first language, but you've done well~! There's still some tenses/grammatical errors here and there (eg: you don't put a comma after a quotation mark), but practice makes perfect~! Try finding a reliable beta-tester/proof-reader just to make sure that everything flows well :3. Oh, and personally, I think it'll be easier to read if you don't position the texts in the center~ Again, good job! Good luck with the story! ^ ^
BlingBlingTiger
#5
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Crazefan4eve
#6
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Cherry_Drops
#7
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T0T0mato
#8
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