Chapter 1: the ending is so freaking cute~~ kekekeke
I liked the story, it's very--...emm... fluffy! heehhee X//D
some parts I actually blushed along with Jin-ah ! kekeke~ that part where he sujested that idea that Andy would be in the middle - my cheeks were burning! (*╯//≧///ヮ///≦//╰*)
*mutter* the part of the confession in the darkness was a bit TOO kitschy~...*murmur* cus..it's just that...Jin-ah didn't have any courage and than suddenly he has that amount of courage to say that....I just...in that part I just was slightly more like: oh COME ON (ノ￣□￣)ノ彡 - than: awwwWW! KAWAII ･:*:･(´//▽//`ʃƪ)･:*:･♥
Oh and this part here:
" “Jin…”
“Yeah?”
“What took you so long?”
And suddenly a pair of lips butted onto Junjin’s and he could do nothing but become tense.
“EEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEWWWW!”
Junjin blinked his eyes. “What?”
“Appa, we don’t want to hear how our dad’s lips taste like!” Sun Jae said disgusted.
Junjin tsked and set his eyes to the figure in the kitchen. Andy was in his cute apron, preparing the dinner. For the umpteenth time, had Sun Jae and Chung Ho persistently asked if Junjin could tell them how appa and dad got together. After many months of constant asking, Junjin seated the twins to the couch and told the whole story."
Your writing skills are always so superb... Chincharo! the sudden change...WAAHHH... suddenly the present story becomes a story of the past - and we read about the present~~~~~ I was all like: *singing-it-in-high-pitch* GEEEEENIUS!!!! *throwing my hands up in the air* ❤ ･:*:･ヾ(≧//ヮ//≦)/･:*:･ ❤ kekeke
Greet job writing this cute story Sara! FIGHTING! ヾ(≧∇≦)/
Chapter 1: The last line killed me XD
And wow Sara I love this fic to death, this is so adorable and fluffy and I love how it's set in the Eusha Eusha era XD I could just picture Jin and Andy (with those hairstyles lmao)
I adore the way you wrote Jin's struggle, and how you kept hinting throughout that Andy was actually hoping for a confession
Ahh this was all sorts of perfect! Thanks for writing and sharing this with us, Sara.
(I WANT MORE FLUFF FROM YOU NOW XD )
Chapter 1: omg you jindy shippers are killing me with all your fluffy ff!^^ kyaaaaaa! im so happy from yesterday (even if I cried so much but still I was so happy) and today because of this ffics!^^
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