Breathtaking

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He watched as the shadows of two figures become a stark contrast to the orange-toned sunset. 

 
He watched Kibum gently tuck back strands of stray hair from the female's perfectly shaped face. 
 
He watched on as she gave him a kiss of gratitude, and him replying with a smile. 
 
A weary smile that had been resided on for two insipid years. 
 
He followed them into their car, occupying the back seat. And through the back view mirrored, he watched. 
 
He simply watched Kibum, missing his own reflection. 
 
Without blinking, he watched Kibum steer effortlessly through the highway, past the bustle of the city, and finally stopping at a lone house at the end of a lane. 
 
He quietly slipped out of the car, entering the house. 
 
He sat beside Kibum at the rectangular dining table, watching him eat then feeling for his own stomach. 
 
He hadn't eaten but he wasn't hungry. 
 
He sat on the toilet bowl as he watched Kibum shower, steam fogging up the mirror. Kibum showered as per normal, as though he wasn't there.   
 
Was that a tear that coursed down Kibum's face? 
 
He watched as Kibum flipped to his side, pulling the covers along with him, fast asleep. 
 
With slow steps, he walked towards Kibum, kneeling beside him. He hesitantly extended his right hand, reaching towards his face. 
 
He couldn't. 
 
He couldn't feel anything. 
 
"Kevin, I miss you." 
 
Kevin watched those 4 words softly spill out of Kibum's mouth, realizing he was just sleep talking. 
 
"I miss you too." Kevin whispered, "Loved you so much it took my breath away." 
 
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Note: Incoherent because I was rather down when writing this. 
 
Feel free to annotate this like a literature text. Lots of literature devices in here. Go figure. 
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inspirit_kissme
#1
Chapter 18: One word to describe the fic, AWWWWWWWW wait... is that even a word? O.o I can't help but have this nagging thought of what happens when Kibum dies? Kevin is going to be so heartbroken since his basically immortal :(

A ball of yarn. I think I can relate to this about love <3 Kibum is such a Kibum towards Kevin :p but it was sweet of him to stay at his uncles farm because he was hoping that Kevin would return to him. That's so AWWWWWWWW :D
KevLene91
#2
Chapter 17: Holy cow.
FML
MY KEMARU FEELS
OMG I'M SO HAPPY
THIS IS PURE AWESOMENESS OMG
MY HEART WAS ALL LIKE BADUMP BADUMP
BC IDK IT WAS THRILLING XD IDRK
LOVE THIS ONESHOTAIKDJKKIKDDE
fishykevinwoo
#3
Chapter 15: I'm quite sure I left a comment on LJ for the previous chapter :)
Hope my memory didn't fail me.
But :O! I don't think I understand!
It's past life? I was thinking Kibum is still alive since he has an annoying phone call from his boyfriend Sunghyun, and then he wished he was dead cause Kibum still wants to have fun, and then when Kibum calls out to Sunghyun half-dead its because Kibum is sad, but he doesn't wanna go around telling people.
No? :/
chocolatefrosty
#4
Chapter 17: whoa angst angst angst.
It's been a while since I read some kemaru fics ):
especially yours.
and this fic reminds me of a song.
katy perry's the one that got away hahaha lmao.
inspirit_kissme
#5
You've updated! *sobs* I was giving up hope that all Kemaru authors are going to update with the exception of fishykevinwoo >//<

*gives you cookies for updating*
purplepeaches
#6
HEEHEHHEEHHE that's nice I wish i had one too
purplepeaches
#7
what........ was the ending.
the whole thing was so poetic hehe i liked it a lot, but the ending............... :(
fishykevinwoo
#8
:( HEY, I thought it was looking so cute AND THEN YOU GAVE ME THIS ENDING!?!?!?!
He should be given a role! BIG BIG ROLE!
You know you want it :D!
chocolatefrosty
#9
HOMG!
I LOVE THIS. Really,I really do! :D
and the ending!
adfrtasgbhacnccudahvnnac !
ok. I'm being incoherent rn. lol
Update soon ^^