A Downward Spiral, Part I

A Dong Bang Fantasy :)

It happened far too quickly for anyone to stop it-

 

It was the 4 week into their vacation; DBSK were on a beach in Saipan, Changmin eating popcorn and fish sticks on a beach chair, Micky flirting with a few waitresses at the island bar kiosk outside, Junsu was surfing and singing, and Yunho was rubbing suntan lotion onto Jae's back, while he laid on a beach towel-

 

-when the eldest shuddered and fainted, in front of everyone on the beach. "Jae-Jae!!" As Yunho dropped the bottle and put his head to the singer's chest, the wave Junsu was riding on broke suddenly and Junsu was tossed into the water.

 

Yunho quickly smiled and waved away the onlookers as Jae came around, "Looks like he's had enough of the sun, I'll just take him in now, no need to worry people." Jae was clearly dizzy, but he waved a hand as he said, "I'm fine, Yunho; I'll just walk back."

 

Micky came over jsut as Jae tried to smile, but his knees wobbled and the warrior from Gaia barely caught him as Yunho said, "Stop being stubborn, Jaejoong."

 

Jae let out what could only be described as a small "Eep!!" as Yunho picked him up bridal style and strode towards their hotel in long steps as Junsu and Changmin came up, "What's wrong with Jae?" "Nothing-" Jae started to say, but both Micky and Yunho gave him a look, and so he folded his arms until they were in their room, where Yunho gently laid him down on the bed while Micky hurried and got a cold compress for his head.

 

Junsu, who was wrapped in a towel, came and sat next to Jae, "Jae, please- talk to us," Jae sighed before saying, "My feelings are getting stronger-I'm sorry guys,but there's something big coming-"As soon as Jae spoke there was a distant rumble from outside, and the walls of the building shook as Yunho shouted, "What the hell was that?!"-

 

But it was Junsu's cry that had everyone turning around, "Yoochun-YOOCHUN!!!"

 

The baritone held his head and tried to stand still, but failed and fainted, falling to a slump to the floor, and as Changmin went to him he mumbled, going in and out of consciousness, "The earth......Gaia......she calls out to me.......we're in trouble.....must fight..."

 

Micky fainted, this time out cold, and Changmin waved a hand over his closed eyes before looking up at Yunho worriedly, "This is not good- something somewhere is messing with the forces of nature. Yoochun is is trouble."

 

Jae pushed Yunho away and went to sit near Yoochun, "Junsu, bring me water from the bathroom-quick!!" in 5 seconds, Junsu jumped to the bathroom and came back with water, and Yunho said, "But Jae, you aren't well-" the eldest looked at him with determined eyes, "It's the only way, and you know that."

Changmin nodded, and he reached over and held Jae's hand as he knew what the eldest would do next..

 

 

Jae drank some water slowly before leaning over Micky's face and opening his mouth slowly with careful fingers, pouring a little water down the baritone's throat before whispering quickly and fervently:

Living Waters, hear me now, bring back Gaia's noble

I call on you, faithful element, bring him back to his own

And let him not disappear again!!

Everyone held their breaths, and then-

 

Micky coughed as Junsu put his head in his lap, "What-what-" Yunho threw a blanket over him as he said," It's war- it's coming again."

 

There were screams coming in from outside, and Changmin walked quickly over to the hotel window and pulled back the curtain before turning back to the others, "Guys- look!!"

 

 

Everyone came over to the window and saw where Changmin was pointing to; there, across the waters, was the peninsula of Korea-and the country was now ablaze.

 

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i_am_not_here
#1
Chapter 13: Whoa ... Wait ... What ...
I just read it and like ...
Omg
There's two changmins?
Is that a mirage?
STOP CONTROLLING MY BABY
i_am_not_here
#2
Chapter 12: Uh-oh ... O.O
"Our baby wouldn't ..." I love that omg xD
SO MANY MONSTERS
THEY DARE TRY AND HURT MY BABIES
IMMA KILL THEM
This is funny and actiony at the same time, i love it! Good luck with next chapter, it's gonna be great ^^
i_am_not_here
#3
Chapter 11: Jtsitxkgxkhciyditaitslhdljjv omg omg omg omg omg
This is awesome
Ktsiysiepufljvljcoydjtsjlvlj
No save them please
They are alright right
Yay Jaejoong kill that dragon
This is amazing omg I keep squealing xD
Good luck on the next chapter! Hwaiting!
i_am_not_here
#4
Chapter 10: *gasp* I knew it!! And what do you mean?? Jae was just knocked out - he's disappeared?? O.O where id he?? They better not harm him D:<
Nooo!! Yunho and Min and Su you need to save Chun and Jae like RIGHT NOW
authornim, please update! It's been like years T.T even though I only found this now T.T
Authornim hwaiting~~ ^_^
i_am_not_here
#5
Chapter 9: YES!! Die flames of hatred!
I knew it! Chun! Jae! Why you so stupid T.T
Others need to save them - omg, have they run into another of those shadows? Despair maybe? O.O
i_am_not_here
#6
Chapter 8: Omg O.O YES YUNHO PROTECT THEM
KILL THAT HATRED GUY
Where are Chun and Jae >.< And did the flames hurt Changmin at all?? They'd better not O.O
This is so good xD
i_am_not_here
#7
Chapter 7: NOOO YOU IDIOTS THAT IS EXACTLY HOW YOU GET KILLED *sobs*
I love Min and Su's exits xD so cute
OMG though Chun and Jae WHERE ARE YOU TWO GOING YOU'RE GOING TO FAINT ON THE BATTLEFEILD OR SOMETHING AND DIE
i_am_not_here
#8
Chapter 6: AARGH OMG WHAT
AGAIN
I KNEW IT *sobs*
Omg this is >.< I literally need to remind myself every second to comment (because I love commenting xD) because it'd be so good I'd whiz through all the chapters and be done in less than a minite and I'll go over the 1000 word limit for a comment ... Again. XD
i_am_not_here
#9
Chapter 5: AND YOU ARE DEFINITELY N O T HANGING THEIR HEADS UP AS A TROPHY
I'LL EAT YOUR HEAD FIRST LEE SOOMAN (not that i want to, it looks disgusting xD)
i_am_not_here
#10
Chapter 5: GAH I ALWAYS HATED LEE SOOMAN IN REAL LIFE (kinda) AND I THOUGHT SPMETHING WAS DEFINITELY FISHY WHEN HE WAS ALL "OH YOU DONT SO WELL GERE YOU GO FREE MONTH TO DO ANYTHING"
I SEE RIGHT THROUGH YOU LEE SOOMAN
the split ... *gasp*
And darkness? Lol thats scary O.O