Chapter 9: A hanger on the cliff! Jk! Though it needs an elaboration of Baekhyun meeting Chanyeol, the story is sooooo daeeebbaakkk!!!!!!!

Chapter 9: This is wonderful, no doubt, but what happened to the locations on people's foreheads? Were they soulmates or theplace they died?

Chapter 9: the ending is not complete. its too much of a cliff hanger, it's so incomplete it's just a cliff. why not add the word baekhyun in the end? since this is an alternate ending, at least we would know he found baekhyun. JUST END IT LIKE THIS " Hey what are you- BAEKHYUN!!!!" see at least with the word Baekhyun, the alternate ending will be really different from the real ending. but ending things like that is not really different from what you wrote before. let's say this is disappointing. But that one word could have changed things.

Chapter 8: i need more ;____;

Chapter 8: a alternative ending sounds nice :)

Chapter 8: Id love to see your alternative ending author-nim *U*
i really loved this story even with the really sad ending ;v; ♥

Chapter 8: I guess try to write the au? We are just shocked with the ending and felt like it's too rushed. And worst of all baekyeol didn't end up together which is against our expectations. I am not requesting for a sequel but I am wishing for an ending that is happy. Maybe add one more chapter that is not the alternate ending. I mean after all they saw each other at the end, why not do one more chapter where they talk and become together again? Please? I gave a lot of. Comments in this story because I am hooked up to it but then the ending kinda disappoints me.

Chapter 7: Omg... you cant leave this end like this authornim!!! Please write a sequel!! This is to beautiful to leave behind just like that!!!

Chapter 7: Please do not end things like this. Please? Make then together please, they saw each other even for a glimpse....

Surely this is t completed...