Fear

It Can Never Be You
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[CONTENTID2]It Can Never Be You - Fear[/CONTENTID2]

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Joon moaned as he began to wake, though it took him a few moments to realize why he was . And when he did he could only long for the blessed emptiness his dreams had brought. Pain, sharp but dull, throbbing and aching throughout his body. It hurt. Everything.

He had long been on campaign, he had wounds and scars as much as the next man. But never could he recall quite so…many.

“Joon?” someone’s soft voice questioned and he turned, questing for the owner. Thunder. How was it that in just a few short days he had become used to waking up to Thunder instead of Mir? What had changed? Was he meant to go or stay, move on or let things be? He recalled the traitorous kiss he had allowed the other to bestow upon his forehead. He could have stopped it. But he hadn’t.

He didn’t want to reply, wanted to stay there, as impertinent as ever and just not listen to what anyone else said. But it was Thunder talking, and at some point in all of this, he had started to…like, the other. He could never be Mir, but he wasn’t asking him to be. He was only asking him to be him. The him that had made his time in this dungeon not a living hell. Even these cuts and bruises were bearable, and all because of him. Thunder.

And so he opened his eyes, slowly. He found, at last, that his cell had been unlocked. Door thrown wide open, and it immidiately became apparent as to why Thunder’s v

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Karenkitty1092 #1
Chapter 10: Yay i`m happy that Thunder found someone that loves him.This was an awesome story.
GenerationX
#2
Chapter 10: yaaahoooooo!^^ I'm so releived you decided to make a happy ending!!! and this was really great: I loved how shocked Thunder was at Tao's manly and over confident behaviour! Tao's caring was really sweet.
what else to say that you don't already know? this story was great, very moving and incredibly well-written. you had me cry and hope and cry again. and though they've all had their happy ending, we know they aren't the persons they were in the first place. war and their own experience of it have changed them. I'm really looking forward to a sequel!^^
whitestallion
#3
Chapter 10: Ha. Ha. i love the ending!! xD and yes, its really good that thunder didn't die! and because Tao is my bias in exo, i'm happy to have more mention of him. him and thunder, though, seems a tad weird. xD HAHA. but i'd love a sequel ^^
GenerationX
#4
Chapter 9: their hopes seem too high to turn out right. I'm afraid Mir will find a stranger that is now going to be eaten alive by guilt and despair. they've both had traumatic experiences. please don't make them suffer anymore...
Joon is so brave. he has to heal for Thunder's sake so he won't be dead for nothing!!!
GenerationX
#5
Chapter 8: what are you doing to my poor heart!?0.0
this was painful... once again it happened and Joon lost his beloved in the most violent way. they were torn apart. and knowing Mir is alive won't subside the pain. I hope he'll be able to find Mir. but then, even if he did, he's changed and can he really love him again? there's always gonna be Thunder's ghost behind them...
you didn't habe to thank me, I should be the one thanking you for writing such a great story. please, update soon!^^
Karenkitty1092 #6
Chapter 8: Joon`s gonna go crazy once he finds out that Mir is alive.Thanks for the update.
GenerationX
#7
Chapter 7: Joon is gonna be such a wreck when he'll realise Mir was never gone... and at the same time, he needs Thunder and his tenderness to survive. and Thunder's determination to get him free is a precious tool too. I'm both angry and grateful at Thunder. His own selfishness is so understandable but it is still despicable. I'm afraid Joon will go insane.
GenerationX
#8
Chapter 6: and I did devoure these chapters! I love the plot and as I already mentionned, your style.
but I can't help but loathe Thundet to be so selfish! is it really love when you think about you first? he should tell Joon. of course he knows that once Joon will know Mir is alive, he'll never ever have a chance to be loved back. but Joon deserve this hope to survive. he needs it to keep on living peacefully instead of having to deal with the guilt he is feeling now.
but I'm glad Thunder is taking care of Joon at least he has now a chance to survive.
GenerationX
#9
Chapter 1: oh my! I just started to read the 1st chapter and this story is so gripping! I love your writing style! It is so moving and accurate! I'm sure I'll devoure the rest.
BlueChaos #10
Chapter 5: Thanks for the update! I like the little conversation about the differences between their countries, and looking forward to reading more. :D