Torture

It Can Never Be You
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[CONTENTID2]It Can Never Be You - Torture[/CONTENTID2]

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Things had gone on for a week or two in this manner. Joon was certain he wouldn’t be alive anymore if it weren’t for the overly friendly guard. He wasn’t sure if he was happy or disappointed, or somewhere inbetween, over his lack of dying. But Thunder did make for nice conversation. Learning about this strange new culture was odd, and some parts were too foreign for him to even comprehend. Like little class separation, divorce, and feminism,

 

“So you’re saying a woman can have a position in Court?” Joon asked incredulously over his bowl of soft fluffy rice. He no longer felt the desire to devour the food before him, now that he was being properly fed. He doubted he would ever consume as much as he once did, not with this constant twisting in his belly he knew was heartache and guilt in equal parts. He knew this feeling from when he was a child, having lost a very important book for his family, and blaming it on his older brother. As the baby of the family, with the innocent face, everyone had believed him until two weeks later he’d fairly exploded into tears and wails. He’d felt then just as he felt now, only magnified by several thousand times. Eaten by guilt. 

 

“Of course. Why are women so different than us? Without them we would not exist, we’d die out,” Thunder munched on his own bowl of rice, sitting next to his cell bars. He got closer every day. Joon wondered when the boy would get around to opening the cell and just letting them chat freely. It wasn’t as though he was going anywhere, he had a whole camp of people just waiting for any sign of trouble.


“But they’re weaker – doesn’t the stress of Court fatigue them? Are there not a decrease in childbirths and an increase in deaths?” Joon protested,

 

“You’re country is just weird if they’ve really convinced themselves of that. No. Of course not. My sister was carrying her first child and managed to make some very convincing cases for accused thieves. She kept them from jail,” Thunder snorted from some long past memory and Joon shrugged, knowing by now his country was backwards, and feeling little distress over the fact.

 

“Back home we just chopped off their hands whether they did it or not…,” he hesitated before bringing up the next subject, “Next thing you’ll be telling me is relationships between two men or two women are condoned,” he tried to play it off lightly, but could not deny he was curious. Thunder’s head shot up, pieces of rice stuck about his mouth, eyes wide.

 

“Ugh *cough

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Karenkitty1092 #1
Chapter 10: Yay i`m happy that Thunder found someone that loves him.This was an awesome story.
GenerationX
#2
Chapter 10: yaaahoooooo!^^ I'm so releived you decided to make a happy ending!!! and this was really great: I loved how shocked Thunder was at Tao's manly and over confident behaviour! Tao's caring was really sweet.
what else to say that you don't already know? this story was great, very moving and incredibly well-written. you had me cry and hope and cry again. and though they've all had their happy ending, we know they aren't the persons they were in the first place. war and their own experience of it have changed them. I'm really looking forward to a sequel!^^
whitestallion
#3
Chapter 10: Ha. Ha. i love the ending!! xD and yes, its really good that thunder didn't die! and because Tao is my bias in exo, i'm happy to have more mention of him. him and thunder, though, seems a tad weird. xD HAHA. but i'd love a sequel ^^
GenerationX
#4
Chapter 9: their hopes seem too high to turn out right. I'm afraid Mir will find a stranger that is now going to be eaten alive by guilt and despair. they've both had traumatic experiences. please don't make them suffer anymore...
Joon is so brave. he has to heal for Thunder's sake so he won't be dead for nothing!!!
GenerationX
#5
Chapter 8: what are you doing to my poor heart!?0.0
this was painful... once again it happened and Joon lost his beloved in the most violent way. they were torn apart. and knowing Mir is alive won't subside the pain. I hope he'll be able to find Mir. but then, even if he did, he's changed and can he really love him again? there's always gonna be Thunder's ghost behind them...
you didn't habe to thank me, I should be the one thanking you for writing such a great story. please, update soon!^^
Karenkitty1092 #6
Chapter 8: Joon`s gonna go crazy once he finds out that Mir is alive.Thanks for the update.
GenerationX
#7
Chapter 7: Joon is gonna be such a wreck when he'll realise Mir was never gone... and at the same time, he needs Thunder and his tenderness to survive. and Thunder's determination to get him free is a precious tool too. I'm both angry and grateful at Thunder. His own selfishness is so understandable but it is still despicable. I'm afraid Joon will go insane.
GenerationX
#8
Chapter 6: and I did devoure these chapters! I love the plot and as I already mentionned, your style.
but I can't help but loathe Thundet to be so selfish! is it really love when you think about you first? he should tell Joon. of course he knows that once Joon will know Mir is alive, he'll never ever have a chance to be loved back. but Joon deserve this hope to survive. he needs it to keep on living peacefully instead of having to deal with the guilt he is feeling now.
but I'm glad Thunder is taking care of Joon at least he has now a chance to survive.
GenerationX
#9
Chapter 1: oh my! I just started to read the 1st chapter and this story is so gripping! I love your writing style! It is so moving and accurate! I'm sure I'll devoure the rest.
BlueChaos #10
Chapter 5: Thanks for the update! I like the little conversation about the differences between their countries, and looking forward to reading more. :D