a. Story URL : https://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/750795/blind-heirs-angst-romance-tragedy-you-exo-baekhyun-kimwoobin

b. Whatever else you think you need to add.
I really want to improve:3

You can get creative with this.

Chapter 13: I would like to thank you for the review! I will try to think more realistically in terms of characterization. Thank you for the advice and this is indeed a eye-opener.

I know that it's a little rushed because I wanted to finish to one-shot as soon as possible so if I have time, I will change the necessary parts. I appreciate the effort for the review, thank you so much!

Well, I will be requesting a review, hope you have the time! :D

http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/608518/collide-gdragon-leechaerin-skydragon

It's on going, and I'm taking my time to write it, to avoid grammar horrors, but I will highly appreciate some tips here and there. Thanks so much in advance! Feel free to throw me rocks if it ! ha ha ha!

requesting a review here ^^

url: http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/641675/his-turn-to-cry-oneshot-sad-sliceoflife-suho-exosuho-joonmyeon-suhoandoc


i just posted this right after i wrote it.I feel like there are some missing elements in the story.It would be cool if you can review it :) its a oneshot story btw. :)

requesting a review :) <3

http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/638397/the-secret-adventure-romance-scifi-supernatural-exo-exok-exom

do use harsh words idc as long as it could improve me it would do great and my english might be bad, not my mother tongue :)

Hello :) Requesting a review: http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/602267/the-moon-spirit-infinite-myungyeol-woogyu-yadong-4evralonesungjong

Umm okay first off, I don't know if you guys read fics since you really didn't specify it so yeah but no worries! There aren't any M rated scenes whatsoever...and then another. The fic is a subs only fic but you can freely unsubscribe after if you take the review :)Oh and the fic is short, like only 4 chapters and it's complete already so yeah. Yeah...I think that's mostly it.

Thank you in advance~! :D

Chapter 11: WOW 99%! Thank you so much for your review and your kind words! I am totally going to develop a big head over this haha. Seriously though, thank you for taking the time to read over my fic and you're absolutely right about the title and the Description and I'll work toward fixing that. ^^

Thank you for the comment on what I personally call my "awkward " haha. I appreciate your comment on it because I really tried not to get it to the "" side but I didn't know if I was anywhere close to what I wanted to accomplish until now. ^^

I'm glad that the characters seemed real to you because honestly that was the one thing I wanted to accomplish with writing this fic. Thank you! <3

Thank you for upvoting the story as well! Know that I appreciate it because it was something extra that you didn't have to do. ^^

I said appreciate and thank you a lot haha but that's how I'm feeling right now, appreciative and thankful for your review. ^^

Chapter 10: Thanks so much for the review! I really apreciate you pointing out the switching of povs breaking up the flow, and that I need to decribe some of the words (like pet) that I use. As for Jinyoung, I agree fully... Zico is definitely easier for me to write haha. So I will work on making him more relatable and understandable.
Again, thanks SO MUCH this is very very helpful!!!
OH and no it wasn't too short at all =)

hello! May I please have my story reviewed?: http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/589212/a-song-of-hearts-kyuhyun-roleplay-top-you-yunho

uhm... I'm new to this fanfic thing, and I'm not even sure what I'm writing is fanfic. thank you very much for doing this review shop thingy, I think it's a great help, especially to aspiring storytellers. :)