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ScreamingMidget  *

Hi guys! I'm totally proficient in English: I've taken AP English classes and am taking AP Lit right now. I've been reviewing since forever and have worked in three shops before this. My portfolio is down below!  My bias groups are probably Big Bang, Infinite, EXO (KRIS WU ERMERGERD ANYONE WITH ME ON THIS?), and SNSD. I'm also seriously obsessing over BTS, Block B, B.A.P., BtoB and other things that start with 'B'. I think I just...listed too many. But I'm not partial to groups! Anyway, I will do my best! I...love you (O u O).

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Classsic  *

YO WADDUP EVERYONE! I managed a bookreview blog before it got abandoned because of a whole lot of school load. But I am baack with reviewing fanfictions. I never expected to like reading FF's, so i owe this one to a friend of mine. One thing I can't say no to is a good book to read, so if you know any good stories(especially dystopian and fantasy), let me know! ^^   I am a total EXO group biased along with SuJu, f(x), and SHINee. I am a KRISBER, KAISTAL, LUNEW & KHUNTORIA SHIPPER. Sehun is my legal husband and Kris is my lover, and 10 other guys are lining up to date me. Jstkdding.  You're weird? I like you. Let's be friends!!! :) 사랑해

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chocobella2  *

Ahem, ahem. Is this thing on? /cues deep Batman voice/ I'm Batman. Jokes, let's move on. I speak fluent English 'cause, well I'm Canadian. You know, the place with beavers and maple syrup, and SuJu Henry and EXO Kris' home? Continuing on, I would say I'm good at reviews. Well, I do it in my head, but that is beyond the point. I love K-Pop, although I mostly listen to SMent groups. (Luv EXO, f(x), SNSD, Super Junior, SHINee, etc.) I sheep (that's right, SHEEP) f(exo) and Super Generation. But just because your fic is one, doesn't mean I'll go any easier on you, 'kay? I love all of you, even if I haven't talked to you before XD Batman-I mean chocobella2-away! /throws smoke bomb and flies to EXO Planet/

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chimerically *

 

Haahlouhh! (Well... that marcus butler attempt didnt work out so well.) Call me Dreamy. I'm currently taking AP English in my second year of middle college (I'm sixteen~). I use to co-own a review shop a year ago. My bias bands are EXO and SNSD. They just make my feels to unff. Those y es. Especially that greasy bacon. And that gorJess ice princess. Why does life have to be so complicated. Anyway, stay y. Less-than-three.

 

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seob_fire*

Well hello there people of earth! I would just like to inform you all that I can be a serious social idiot! I like food, and the arts (you know, music, dance, art, writing, stuffs). I will not put my age out there but I can admit that I am probably younger than most of you peoples!! Well, I'm Hispanic but English was my first language!! Currently I'm learning Korean and Japanese 'cause I'm too lazy to do homework so I spend my time on that instead. Yay! I am a big tomboy!! I like sports and hip hop dancing and video games so please don't insult me on that!! I'm a bit of an outsider in school because I'm weird and random and crap like that. But despite that, I can be a pretty strict reviewer. My bias list can go on forever but my ultimate is B.A.P's one and only giant baby Choi Junhong a.k.a Zelo!!!! But that isn't gonna affect my reviews. Just a little warning. I LOVE YOU ALL!! GOOD NIGHT!!

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RKP_Yoshi *

Greetings, earthlings. I believe I’m the youngest out of all of the reviewers (Turning thirteen in March), but don’t worry, I am willing to help people out with their fanfiction as much as they already have. Plus, I think I am as much of a crazy person, if not more, as they all seem to be. I tend to focus mainly on grammar since I was born in Australia and English is my first language, along with not-so cliché plots or unexpected twists. I’m more of an angsty, crack/comedy and fantasy type of person and I am one to read boyxboy daily, but I honestly cannot stand arranged marriage and fluff since ‘it’s not my style’ (*cue Kris walking in with a plate of chicken and ddeokkbokki*).
Well then, request away!

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bts_kimtaehyung
#1
a. Story URL : https://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/750795/blind-heirs-angst-romance-tragedy-you-exo-baekhyun-kimwoobin

b. Whatever else you think you need to add.
I really want to improve:3

You can get creative with this.
exoticbabylove
#2
Chapter 13: I would like to thank you for the review! I will try to think more realistically in terms of characterization. Thank you for the advice and this is indeed a eye-opener.

I know that it's a little rushed because I wanted to finish to one-shot as soon as possible so if I have time, I will change the necessary parts. I appreciate the effort for the review, thank you so much!
KawaiiMeansGily
#3
Well, I will be requesting a review, hope you have the time! :D

http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/608518/collide-gdragon-leechaerin-skydragon

It's on going, and I'm taking my time to write it, to avoid grammar horrors, but I will highly appreciate some tips here and there. Thanks so much in advance! Feel free to throw me rocks if it ! ha ha ha!
Slytherinese #4
requesting a review here ^^

url: http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/641675/his-turn-to-cry-oneshot-sad-sliceoflife-suho-exosuho-joonmyeon-suhoandoc


i just posted this right after i wrote it.I feel like there are some missing elements in the story.It would be cool if you can review it :) its a oneshot story btw. :)
taobby
#5
requesting a review :) <3

http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/638397/the-secret-adventure-romance-scifi-supernatural-exo-exok-exom

do use harsh words idc as long as it could improve me it would do great and my english might be bad, not my mother tongue :)
DivineDionne
#6
Hello :) Requesting a review: http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/602267/the-moon-spirit-infinite-myungyeol-woogyu-yadong-4evralonesungjong

Umm okay first off, I don't know if you guys read fics since you really didn't specify it so yeah but no worries! There aren't any M rated scenes whatsoever...and then another. The fic is a subs only fic but you can freely unsubscribe after if you take the review :)Oh and the fic is short, like only 4 chapters and it's complete already so yeah. Yeah...I think that's mostly it.

Thank you in advance~! :D
cozette
#7
Chapter 11: WOW 99%! Thank you so much for your review and your kind words! I am totally going to develop a big head over this haha. Seriously though, thank you for taking the time to read over my fic and you're absolutely right about the title and the Description and I'll work toward fixing that. ^^

Thank you for the comment on what I personally call my "awkward " haha. I appreciate your comment on it because I really tried not to get it to the "" side but I didn't know if I was anywhere close to what I wanted to accomplish until now. ^^

I'm glad that the characters seemed real to you because honestly that was the one thing I wanted to accomplish with writing this fic. Thank you! <3

Thank you for upvoting the story as well! Know that I appreciate it because it was something extra that you didn't have to do. ^^

I said appreciate and thank you a lot haha but that's how I'm feeling right now, appreciative and thankful for your review. ^^
-Tigress-
#8
Chapter 10: Thanks so much for the review! I really apreciate you pointing out the switching of povs breaking up the flow, and that I need to decribe some of the words (like pet) that I use. As for Jinyoung, I agree fully... Zico is definitely easier for me to write haha. So I will work on making him more relatable and understandable.
Again, thanks SO MUCH this is very very helpful!!!
OH and no it wasn't too short at all =)
foxybunny13
#9
hello! May I please have my story reviewed?: http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/589212/a-song-of-hearts-kyuhyun-roleplay-top-you-yunho

uhm... I'm new to this fanfic thing, and I'm not even sure what I'm writing is fanfic. thank you very much for doing this review shop thingy, I think it's a great help, especially to aspiring storytellers. :)