Chapter 20: Thanks for the review! I'll credit soon when I can get to my laptop.
You really helped a lot and I'll make sure to put your tips to good use! ^^
Chapter 18: Thanks for the lovely review I will credit when I get on the computer! The thing about Mira agreeing to live with Luhan has to do with the fact that she's not yet 27 and also the fact that it will be revealed that she doesn't really have anywhere else to go. And I do agree that Luhan is a weak character at this point, but I did want it to seem like he isn't doing anything good for Mira because I wanted him to be portrayed as not knowing what to do to help her and being unable to do so. I was trying to show exactly that he thinks he understands her because they've been through so much together but he really knows nothing. Again, thanks so much for the review!
Chapter 14: Thanks for the review :) I credited you already. Yeah, I agree with the characterisation part of the more insignificant members since it's really hard to write about 12 members, unless i kill some off which may not be that good an idea, but nevertheless, thanks :)
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