fireworks (and the beauty of it all)

Fragments of Memories
Title: fireworks (and the beauty of it all)
Characters: IU (&implicit Changmin [TVXQ])
Genre: (failed) poetry, short drabble
Inspired by: ...random spontaneity

 
we were young. we were wild. we were reckless.
 
do you remember that moment
in the midst of our crazy life
in which everything became still?
 
our eyes locked into each other’s
shaking knees and awkward chuckles
only ragged breaths in the air
minds blanking and tension rising
 
I swear I heard my heart beating
now, I wonder if yours did, too.
I’d assume so, from your courage
as you inched closer with eyes closed.
 
the moment we were waiting for
when your lips were embracing mine
transferring our warmth back and forth
all I could see were fireworks.
 
from what I recall, I can say
despite the rashness of our youth
at that moment, that short moment
 
we were passionate. we were powerful.
 
we were eternal.
 

author's word vomit

word vomit here, there, err'where all day err'day. lol i don't even know what i wrote, i don't think i'm thinking straight. i felt strangely...artistic, too bad i failed miserably. i was imagining changmin while writing this, but he's not a direct character (really, both aiyu and changmin aren't direct characters lol they're not even mentioned what am i doing). i should sleep now... it was a loooong week.

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Alluring
i'm sorry for the constant title changes.... i can't make up my mind ;A;

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green_teax #1
update pls author nim
10apples
#2
Chapter 14: As I read along, I can't help but to sympathize how Chanyeol felt. It's so real and I know it to be the one compromising and giving in every single time. It's that feeling that you'd hate absolutely. Having to throw away your pride just for that sick love you can't afford losing away.
green_teax #3
Chapter 14: that was indeed beautiful. i like how their relationship is portrayed realistically, like every sentence speaks out chanyeol's desperate and insecure affection towards jieun. because reality isn't some kiss-n-grow fluff and one usually feels like trash around the other but they still cling onto the relationship. oh, the beauty of a loser's heart.
stranded
#4
Chapter 14: As always, thank you! I enjoy reading your writing very much so I'll be looking forward to your next update!
theadorable #5
Chapter 14: I keep liking every oneshot you wrote. I mean, everything is perfect. Every story you wrote is somehow perfect and beautiful. I somehow disliked song-based story, I don't think this one is another type of it. I found this piece to be simple and very honest, sad. This flow very smoothly. I could actually relate without having to experience it. You know sometimes I wonder if you could teach me how to write :D. Your work is really something
hyukkawai #6
Chapter 13: I love all of the oneshots so far, even though many of them were angst hiks. I hope this one gonna have a happy ending keke. Fighting author-nim :D
evanzelina #7
Chapter 13: I totally loved this 1st part. Can't wait for next part.And IU's flower bookmark is daebak. Her voice I just can't get enough
theadorable #8
Chapter 13: I think this chapter could be my favorite! I really like the flow of this story, not too fast or too slow, and it just flow smoothly. And of course, it's myungu! I'm craving for myungu recently. "He found more sound in silence than in loud environment." I really like that line. I can relate <3
green_teax #9
Chapter 13: /breathes
DRAWING? MASTERPIECE? INSTRUCTOR? FOUNTAIN IN THE PARK? OMFG DID YOU TRAVEL MY MIND OR SMT. THEY ARE LIKE MY MOST FAVORITE THINGS EVERRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRR.
I love them already, hahaHAAAAAAA. JOKES. Their meeting was very interesting because Jieun is... interesting and I'm not going to say she's Lilyflower but we'll see. I really like Myungsoo's personality, haha, cocky artists <33
SO I GUESS YOU WIN MY HEART WITH THE THEME AND THE PAIRING AND THEIR CHEMISTRY WOOOOOOOOOOOOOOH. ;;
on the side note, I thought you hated art. /coughcough
I thought you're going to create a new story but it seems like you decided to update the drabble collection... okayy.

p.s. do you want a poster for this story? *u*
Haeysoo #10
Can you make another baekU story