❧ The Challengers

d r a g o n r i d e r s ❧ l o s t s o u l s (d i s c o n t i n u e d)
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Statuses: Rejected || Pending... || Accepted || Chosen

      Choi Sooyeon (Umma/Soul) + Gong Chanshik (B1A4)

Moon Jinjung (OC) + Wang Feifei (Miss A)

KoreanGal5 || Park Jihyun || Chosen

author: The author's application. Not entirely filled out and quite boring over all. I don't think she should be chosen but I suppose she'll have to do. And two OCs? This'll be...entertaining to write about. Well, this plotline is taken so I suppose there's not much to do. Well, this area will be where I review your applications. Oh, and just to warn the applicants, I'm probably the meanest reviewer of all time. (Onion is too nice and Fishy's in between.)

     

Park Eunyoung (Onion) + Zhang Yixing (EXO)
Park Eunyeon (Fishy) + Lee Changsun (MBLAQ)

Lee Sanghoon (100%) + ??? || Kim Minseok (EXO) + ???

duixing + LoveDonghae || Park Shinyeong || Chosen

author: Double the work for the twins, eh? Well, nice job in doing so. Choose your dragon's love interests soon. (And no, they can't be boys.)
[Note: Their example application has flaws and is not 100% completed. Do not reference until completed.]

      Park Sung (Bana) + Ahn Daniel

Bang Yongguk (B.A.P) + Song Jieun (Secret)

BanaWarrior || Kim Bobae || Accepted [ ] [ ] [ ]

author: My fifth applicant! Over two years since I first started! I could cry. So to start with, thank you so much. I'll just be reading down and telling you what does not fit with the storyline or anything you might want to change because that means everything else works. First, if you have a crush on the son of King Orik, I must warn you that you are also one of his descendants so you will be crushing on your like seventh cousin or something to that effect. At this point in time, we are not assuming that any of the Inheritance characters are alive since it has been that long and the Witch is not your childhood friend alongside Yongguk or anyone since everyone begins in different towns. (You befriend her later although the relationship may not be exactly as you picture.) Your father's name is chosen (first and last). Your dragon shall be one color (White I'm assuming). Warning that Jieun will not be a wild dragon. Daniel will not be a wereanimal; he will be a dwarf (if you wish to change to fit your tastes.) You are tall for a dwarf so I will be shrinking you. I'm assuming around 120 cm is maximum for dwarves but I didn't tell you so my fault. I believe I covered everything. Thank you for applying and sorry for being mean about it. Oh, and her odd eye color was a nice touch. At first I paused and debated but then they never did mention dwarf eye colors too much so I'll accept it.

      Lin Jiao Ling (Lin) + Wu Yifan (EXO)

Liu Josephine (f(x)) + Sorceress's dragon

exo_lover666 || Lee Dasom || Rejected [x] [ ] [ ]

author: Hey Lin thanks for being my second applicant! I'll get straight into the review if you don't mind. So I'd like your personality to be longer. They aren't quite "paragraphs." Also, rather than simply stating how she is with each trait, explain her more; make her come alive. Also, the language trivia is completely unnecessary as there is no reason for you to speak four languages (no matter how cool) so I shall be ignoring that. Shades also aren't common and therefore, Bora will not be a

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BanaWarrior
#1
Chapter 11: The idea was really good, and if you one day come back with it again, or at least something along these lines, I would be happy to participate again -as an applicant or just a reader-.
Until a next time and good luck on your other projects.
Sé onr sverdar sitja hvass. May your swords stay sharp!
-glimmeron
#2
Chapter 3: hello there! so i just realized (when going back and seeing all my blog posts) that i started to apply for the dwarf position... but ended up losing inspiration when my computer had failed to save my process, but the majority of the work is still there--
if i finish it off... is this story still accepting apps? i'll hate to see it go to waste as this story has a unique flavor to it...
BanaWarrior
#3
Chapter 3: Hi! Can I reply here? x3
First of all, I didn't know how long it was after the original story, so I'm sorry if somethings I wrote turned complicated. :p
If her crush will be like her seventh cousin, I believe it's more like crushing for someone from the same clan than for someone that's actually from your family. LOL xD So if you want, I have no problems with keeping it. :3 (but wow, LOT of time has passed if not even the dwarves and the elves we got to know are still alive. xD)
Oh yeah. I didn't mean the Witch to be a childhood friend. Just that the two could get friends after meeting each other. And everything I wrote about Yongguk is what I imagine that they relationship will be after he hatched.
About Jieun, that's ok. x3 And about Niel, I think I got a little too far really. xD hahahahaha But it would be interesting xD But that's ok. Change for what it will be better to the plot. :3
And yeah. The height. I always get confused of what's supposed to be normal height fot the different kinds. @-@ So that's ok if you shrunk her. xD haha
Thank you for being patient and so detailed.
Do you need me to really change something on the app, or that's ok?
BanaWarrior
#4
Hi!!! I'm really sorry for taking so so so sooooooooooooo long to finish this app. I really got stuck in how to develop her personality and background. And then university was a b*tch. ;-;
I hope you can still consider it.
http://www.asianfanfics.com/blog/view/1054813
BanaWarrior
#5
Chapter 11: Awwnnn man!!!
Eragon references! Eragon references everywhere!!!!! <3 <3 <3
Why I haven't found this sooner?? ;w;
jadefix
#6
Chapter 3: wow you started this so long ago. is this something you're going to keep writing?
spontaneity
#7
Chapter 11: yay story is gunna start soon!
which reminds me, i needa comment on the teasers soon LOL