Blood

Short Stories.

credit: 100 themes writing challenge, No. 17. Blood

http://pokokihcikisik.livejournal.com/12742.html

--------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------

Jinki I know was brave enough, even though he seems really calm and everything. His delicate smile is the reason I fell in love with him in the first place. Well, I can imagine how his eye smile can help him to get his status as favorite teacher of the year in the elementary school where he works.

When I met him for the first time, it was when I fell on the steps at train station and he happened to be the one who helped me. He even didn’t hesitate to support me to walk and treated my injured bleeding knee like I was one of his students he needs to take care of.

And then so I found out that this guy I married is a tough man, no matter how he always seems happy and cheer up. There’s only one moment I saw him to shed a tear, not when his father died, no, but that’s when little Yoomi was born.

He dote our daughter so much, and maybe because I understand that, I could never forget one particular small incident that occurred that day. No matter how weird –but cute it may sound.

I was just walking into the house when I heard sobs. So I ran to find my baby, and yet she’s sitting on the floor playing with her doll peacefully.

She looked up to me, and my 3 years old Yoomi runs to me, “Umma, look, paper cut my finger, Appa heals me.” She said with a broken language, showing me her index finger that wrapped with a bandage. I was frowning, and so I took her in my arms.

So.. Who’s crying just now?

I looked at my daughter’s face and her narrow brown eyes –that looks exactly like her father’s, staring at me with a questioning look.

But before I could say anything, I saw him. Sitting, no, rather curling in one corner of the room, and asking out of forgiveness, “Yoomi-ah, Mianhe.” And right after that, he wiped his tears with the back of his hand.

“Omo.” I said as then I walk to him, “Jinki-ah?”

He looked surprise to see me, definitely looks like a lost child and he said, “What to do, t-there’s.. blood in my baby d-darling’s finger.”

I frowned again, and ask Yoomi, “Didn’t Appa the one who helps you to put the bandage and stuff?”

Yoomi nods, “But after that.. Appa cry. Im not. Yoomi a good girl, right, Umma?”

Jinki stood up, his eyes still a bit in daze he says to me, “I-i washed her small hands, and.. and then I gave the antiseptic, I’m still okay. She’s-she’s smiling too, but then..” He shook his head in deep regret.

I want to laugh and say that it’s just a small cut, but then he said again, “Better it’s me than her, Yeobo.”

I rubbed his back slowly, thinking that I could never really guess what’s on Jinki’s mind. Even after all of this time, he surely never failed on give me surprises about himself. And then Yoomi said of us, “Appa white after he see red.”

White? Red? As then I saw Yoomi pointed to her father’s face.

Oh she means he went pale because of the blood? Well, that’s new. And she must notice Jinki’s expression too.

“Appa.. scared?” Yoomi said again, as Jinki looked at her, while she continues, “Yoomi cry, scared when there’s boom-boom.” Boom-boom is how she called the thunder.

Jinki took Yoomi from my arms and the latter said, “Appa don’t scared, Umma here. Yoomi here. Stop cry, Appa. Look, red gone.” While she’s showing her finger covered with bandage to him.

And so this father and daughter hugs each other while Jinki cries again, followed by Yoomi too.
I ended up embracing them in my arms to calm them down. What a dramatic father and daughter.
But then again, as an amused smile appear in my face, thinking that I’d never be boring and being forever happy to have them in my life.

My cute innocent Yoomi, and my unpredictable caring Jinki.
 

 

--------------------------------------------------------------------------END------------------------------------------------------------------------------------

Did the title bring the impression that the story will be scary? :3 im sorry, but you're wrong! tee hee

 

thanks for the comments!

you guys really made my day :)

Like this story? Give it an Upvote!
Thank you!

Comments

You must be logged in to comment
hunhunhunhun
#1
Chapter 2: Taemin! *^*
chasethestars #2
[2]

Primarily because it shows a human side to her; sure she's the childhood friend who can do no wrong [or must do no wrong a.k.a. shouldn't overstep boundaries clearly laid out since day one], but beneath that surface is someone who has desires and weaknesses that are on the verge of awakening if provoked. Of course it is by a conscious choice if one wants to give in, and in this case she did, knowing full well that it's both unreal and temporary. Maybe that's why I like the twist, not because Jonghyun mistook her as Jieun, but because she succumbed to the same "nightmare" as Jonghyun: being loved, even if he's seeing someone else.

I'm not sure if I made much sense in the last few sentences, so I apologize in advance if there's anything unclear OTL As usual, you've done a good job and delivered with these stories, so do keep it up! ^o^
chasethestars #3
[1]

# 11: ... How scary is it that we think alike [in regards to that ring] o_o Is it bad that the first thing I thought of when I saw that ring on his finger for the first time was: "Are you finally off the market, Taeminnie?" LOL. Jokes and assumptions aside, I was smiling to myself while reading this chapter. Leave it to Taemin to be 19/20 years of age and get away with being childish and childlike, which in turn can be frustrating at times because even if noona tries to be annoyed/angry/etc. at him, she wouldn't find the heart to because noona loves him a lot [as long as what he does is still within reason, of course] XD Also, is it wrong of me to picture Taemin giving noona the couple ring even before she could say a word or hug him? I don't know, I feel that it's just so him to do such a thing, being somewhat careless when he's excited and forgetting for a moment that there might be fans lurking about and watching his every move XD;;

I personally liked Taemin's 1920's look in the MV and had hoped that they wouldn't let him wear the extensions for too long. Those extensions were just... hilarious and tragic at the same time =-= And that would be putting it lightly on my part, believe me.

# 12: Jonghyun, I could always say your high fever has gotten the best of you and clouded your judgment, but there's no denying that you must've been extremely hurt and distraught with the breakup. Poor thing x-x [Then again, as I told you in regards to Alarm Clock's lyrics, Jonghyun doesn't seem like he's over Sekyung...]

And then there's his forever best friend who knows the truth about why Jieun broke up with him, and she also happens to be battling her feelings for him, too. It's tough to not take advantage of his vulnerable situation, and it sounds so wrong to be saying this, but I'm glad she did.
shineeninja
#4
:|
leave it to you to have twists like this. it's very fitting to the song though, so brava!

on another note, to make readers who imagined themselves as the protagonist of the story:
hey, he forgot his ex's birthday once, but he never forgot yours! so there must be a future for you two!!! lol.
DreamingLight
#5
hey thanks you for all of this oneshots =) they are all so beautiful and I like how you described all the charachters =)
I hope you will be able to update soon
chasethestars #6
[2]

It's funny, but when Key mentioned an ex, I immediately thought about Minho. I went to the next line and I gasped aloud when I saw his name; I didn't know if I should be happy or speechless about it! XD;; I kinda agree with Jjong's sentiment of wanting to see friends'/relatives' ex-lovers and see how they've turned out after breaking up with them. Well, sorry Jjongie, but Minho is one of those rare types that could never transform into a toad no matter how many years shall pass. Heaven has been good to him by giving him superior genes [what is with my vocabulary these days LMAO]. So... tough luck on this one? XD I wished for more backstory between Minho and the female lead, but I also understand at the same time that he's not the highlight of the story anyway so it's okay~

The relationship between the six characters is so lovely. Reading this feels like I'm almost intruding in their lives, and it was so easy to get into the flow and mood of things =3

I'm running out of words [says the person whose comments are split into two OTL], but as usual, you've done a good job with this piece ^o^ I apologize if most of them came off more as rambling, though ;~; That aside, looking forward to the future stories; do update when time permits~! ^^
chasethestars #7
[1]

Where to start... *___*

Key, you are so... you XD The overbearing, naggy, but surprisingly sweet you XD There's something about him in this comeback that's making me view him in an entirely new light--or maybe I just miss his blunt, cool self and I can't wait until he graces all of us with his presence during the comeback 8D His nagging seems toned down in this one; I'm guessing he and the female lead have been together for a long time that bickering even about the smallest things is just so normal and effortless for the both of them =3

Onew, oh Onew; I've been missing him for a while, but I'm glad to see he's doing well with their comeback teasers contrary to what rumors are saying. That aside, was his sangtae acting up when he asked his sister if she was pregnant? XD But he SO would be the type to drop heart-stopping questions during unguarded moments, so it kinda fits. The part where Onew said he couldn't do anything to Key when he asked for his sister's hand in marriage had me sniggering for some reason; probably because I imagined Onew wanting so badly to give him a taste of his ttakbam but couldn't, and all because of Key's piercing gaze [and solid conviction] XDD;;

TAEMIN~! X3 This... man-child LOL. How is it even possible to be a kid and an adult at the same time? He pulls it off so effortlessly despite the rebellious and cheeky undertones to his character, which I like. A lot. Probably more than I should, I dunno, but I really like it XD;; That part about the plushie made me go "Aww~!" and when he babbled out the secret, I kinda knew it was coming, but it was still shocking that he said all those things without even batting an eyelash O_o Taemin, don't worry; your noona cousin will still love you and you'll always be her number one monster, all flaws included XD
WonderShobe
#8
ZUTTORRRRRRRRRRR YOU'RE BACK~~~ <3 I REALLY LOVE YOUR STORIES > u < <3
zuttor412 #9
Below are all my replies, and i hope i didnt miss anyone >.<
Once again thank you for all your support to my stories, it means a lot to me!

Til we meet again on my new updates! see yaaa
lovelovelove
z
zuttor412 #10
Hello hello~~~
I have notice that i havent reply all the comments one by one properly through the comment segment! OMG i feel so terrible! :S
So now here I am, wanting to thankyou all of you to give it a time to read and comment on my Short Stories :)

Cutterpillow, you're right, it is fun to have SHINee members in every chapters, but where are you now, do you still read this? how are you btw?

Wondershobe, thank you for liking the EPIC Taemin's chapter. and im happy that you're finding my other stories interesting too! really, i dont think im good enough to get your praises, but i do hope that anyone will enjoy my story whenever they choose to read it :) so you want me to write a story that longer? i thought you're happy it's a short stories heheee

Blue_toast, Blood's title lead to a misunderstand about how the story might go, isnt it? XDD but im happy that you enjoy it!

sweetmarshmallow6594, Onew is your bias? so maybe that's also why you're happy to read chapter 3 teehee

min_rae, i do write another stories like you hoped for, so i hope you have read it too :)

sillyshinee5, yes, i've just realized that ALL stories in here that featured Minho doesnt really end happily XDD thankyou for help me realizing it hahaa

SHiN_MiNt, thankyou for commenting :)

3DHEART, i hope you enjoy the other stories too :)

haeyoungKIM, i finally updated :p

kurohitsuji12, i hope you like the other stories as well :D

Taemininne and ParkMiyoung,
I have explained through personal message and i hope you like the story more as you now understand it :)

Miss_Iah, but Key suits the role, doesnt he? *winks* thanks for reading my stories!

chasethestars and shineeninja, two of my closest fellow readers, and also two of my favorite authors here! thank you for always give me comment that makes me wanting to be a better writer, and i hope we are all can still enjoy each other's stories until.. forever? lol xP

Anonymous_15 thank youuu! im glad you're enjoying it..