I would've liked more detail about how Minho and Hara met + how their affair built up, but I guess I was more worked up on the facts that he 1) is a damn good actor [it must be those doe eyes XD] and 2) he staged everything. That's quite the planning you did in those 10 years, m'boy *nod, nod* I also would've liked a little more elaboration on his and Nana's connection since their scene seemed a bit rushed ^^; [Is this Nana from After School, by the way?]
I think Nicole's part was the weakest out of the 4 stories. It didn't really stand out to me as much as I thought it would ^^; [I would've said Kibum's, but this one just takes the cake.] I wouldn't say her part was entirely unnecessary, but perhaps you could've tackled some of the elements you used and played them up a bit from the usual. For instance, suppose we say by some miracle she knew of Hara cheating behind her boss' back--does this discovery let her see Kibum in an entirely different light [i.e. Kibum might be a competent businessman, but is he the same as a husband]? Or will she keep the discoveries to herself, all the while pitying Kibum, but not falling for him? If we do go with the unrequited love route, maybe she'll try to find out more about the affair, then decide to let Kibum stay ignorant as an act of revenge for giving her all these feelings she may or may not be able to come forward with? Just a few suggestions ^^;
I haven't commented in anybody's story in a while so I hope this makes sense T_T; That aside, this was a nice read--a bit unusual coming from you--and I can see that you've tried a different style and approach in this story. But no complaints here, nope~. It did deliver as usual, especially in the shock department, so there isn't much to worry about ^^v Do keep up the good work~! [When is ODS coming back, by the way? *is bricked* Okay, ignore that~ X3;;]
[So hi XD I think the site's semi-stable now so lemme keep my word re-post the comment 8D]
SHINee/Kara? *blinks* From you? *blinks again* I never would've guessed! O_O
Surprise aside, it's amazing how the story started out so innocent [although opening it with a car accident is hardly innocent, but you get my drift LOL] and concluded it in a most sinister note. It's interesting how they all share the same fate despite that only came clear in one night: one loved too much [or perhaps too blindly], one suffers from one-sided love, one loved another, and one never loved at all. Victims of their own circumstances, one way or another.
Kibum, oh Kibum, you will forever remain oblivious to the fact that your wife did not love you in the same way you did ;~; Although that could be a good thing, more or less, because he passed on with an untainted image of his wife. Too bad he can't make up for the time they lost due to his work and all his business trips. Quite unfortunate, the fate of this lad.
For Hara, her situation is understandable; there's a lot at stake where gratitude is concerned--gratitude that stems all the way from their childhood days. But on the flip side, I can't say I approve of her cheating because it's -still- cheating if you take away all the frills and lace -o- Also, if she really didn't want to marry Kibum, then she should have set her foot down before tying the knot. She's a big girl who's more than capable of making decisions for herself, for better or for worse [and in this case, perhaps it is the latter. Cheating? Really??]. Honey, if you only knew your beau's true colors, you'd be regretting everything I bet XD
And then there is Minho. Oh my gosh, Minho you... you douche! ;o; LOL. I'm almost certain he's going to stage another freak accident for Hara one day in the future [what am I even saying LOL] to complete his revenge. You cold-blooded namja, why?? ;o;
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