Calling GreenGardenPop

Reviewer: themightyrocklee

Title (5/5)- Was it cliché? Did it match the story? Title ties in perfectly

Appearance (Optional) (5/5) Was it organized? The background and poster are really pretty.

Description/Foreword (-/10) - Is it interesting? Does it captivate the reader? –not read by author request-

English (-/10)- Grammar errors, vocabulary used, and punctuation. –omitted by author request-

Flow (10/10)- Was it too fast or too slow? no comment

Characters (10/10) - Are they well developed? Are they different? I find the relationship between the two of them cute.

Plot (-/10)- Was it easy to understand? Did it have unexpected twists? Did it have unnecessary ideas? No comment

Creativity (9/10) - Is it original? How is it unique? The story was cute. I’m not sure if it’s the most original but it was good.

Font (3/5) - Is the font hard to read? Was it unnecessary? I think it’s a bit too much. White typing is hard to read, even with the dark background. It’s pretty but not necessary.

Enjoyment (15/15)-Did I enjoy it? Would you want to subscribe? I enjoyed this a lot. Did you write the poem yourself? Bonus points if you did!

Reviewer’s Note: I feel like this review isn’t much because it was only one chapter but I really did enjoy your story. You said English isn’t your first language but I didn’t see any real issues. Your story was really well written.

Total: 57/70