❝ the sixth chapter ❞

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June 5, 2013 ❝ rainy days – part one ❞ ❀❀❀❀❀❀ * absolutely nobody expected this weather *   Sehun and Minhi stood at the entrance of the hotel, looking through two pairs of automatic doors to the outside, completely baffled and a tad bit annoyed. They really didn’t want to be near each other, let alone work together, but if what they were seeing was actually happening, they had no idea what to do. They flinched when they saw Kai run up to the hotel and through the doors, stopping just in front of them and shaking his head like a dog.   “Gross, Jongin,” Sehun muttered as he tried to fling away the stray water droplets that fell on him.   “Is it really that bad out there?” Minhi questioned next, watching as Kai tried to wipe the water away from his forehead with his soaked shirt.   Sehun and Kai rolled their eyes at the obvious answer. “Tell me, panda,” the former sarcastically asked, “Do you not see that torrential downpour out there?” He winced when she suddenly turned and hit him on the arm. “Ow!”   “Of course I see it, but like,” she suddenly trailed off, watching as Kai suddenly took off his shirt and was handed a couple of towels by Gongchan before smirking at her and walking off. She grimaced at the act. That devil best friend.   Sehun waited for the comeback as he watched Minhi’s gaze trail over to Kai’s body instead. He rolled his eyes, shifting their attention back towards him. “So, are we working today?”   “Doubt it,” Kai muttered, draping the towel around himself to try and warm himself up, “Noona made me put up a sign outside Pleasure Pier saying that we’re closed for the day due to the weather.”   “I wonder where Zelo is then,” the other mumbled back, frowning as he thought about it.   “Oh my God!” someone suddenly exclaimed, running into the hotel while trying to cover her head, “The weather wasn’t like this this morning!”   The other three turned to face the new addition to the little crew, and Kai smiled, handing the woman a free towel. “Here, Minhee.”   Minhee looked up at who was talking to her and saw Kai’s small smile directed towards her. She blushed lightly, trying to fling off stray droplets as she reached for the towel. “Thanks, Jongin.” She heard the other’s hum as she tried to dry herself off the best she could.   “What were you doing running through the rain?”   “Lay-oppa told me to come back here and that Meilin would follow after a few minutes. I think he’s trying to close down the restaurant for today,” Minhee mumbled out, draping the towel over her head and looking up at him, “I don’t know why though. People are still going to go out and eat and everything.”   “Oh!” Minhi suddenly exclaimed, remembering something but questioning herself in the act, “Sunli-noona said something about opening something around here instead?”   “And thank you, Minhi, for your splendiferous explanation about what’s going on.”   “Who the hell says ‘splendiferous,’ idiot?”   “Apparently someone who has a wider vocabulary than you.”   “What did you say?!”   “Point proven!”   “No, it was–!”   Kai and Minhee sighed, watching the duo bicker in front of them before walking around to go back up to their rooms and shower. They walked in silence, an odd mixture of comfort and confusion between them as they waited for the elevators to come get them. They watched as the lit numbers slowly moved to the left to the next lower one until the elevators finally opened in front of them. They stepped in and Kai pushed the button for the 23rd floor. He looked over his shoulder questioningly.   “It’s the same floor,” Minhee responded back quietly, Kai nodding as he took a step back from the panel and stood there quietly.   It was silent for the first few floors before Kai broke it, his anxiety getting the best of him. “I missed you, Minhee!” he blurted out, eyes wide as he slapped a hand over his mouth.   The other looked at him shocked, not expecting those words, before she laughed slightly, a fond smile on her face. “I missed you too, Jongin.” Her gaze softened when she noticed the other’s intense stare towards her. She immediately moved when he opened his arms out for her.   Despite the cold air blowing over their wet figures, they stayed warm in each other’s grasps. She laughed when he started singing that one song they sang together the summer before at their first date at the karaoke place down the street. When the elevators dinged, signaling their stop, they let go of each other and got out, walking towards the same direction curiously. They didn’t know their rooms were so close to each other’s.   “I really didn’t know you’d be back,” Kai said softly, trying to take his card key out of his wet wallet on the way to their rooms, “We shouldn’t have lost contact with each other.”   “How are Monggu and Jjanggu?” she asked instead, remembering the little fluff balls who had stolen her heart, “Are they still good?”   “Oh!” he suddenly exclaimed, stopping to turn and face her while scrambling for his phone, “I got a new puppy since then! Let me find her picture!”   “A ‘her’?” Minhee repeated back excitedly, trying to wait patiently for a picture to come out, “Is she small? I bet she’s really cute!”   “She’s my angel!” Kai happily exclaimed back, showing her the picture, “Look at how cute and small she is!”   Minhee squealed, taking the phone out of his hand to enlarge and look at the picture. The large smile refused to leave her face. “What’s her name?”   “Jjanggah!” he stated proudly, puffing out his chest some, “My baby girl who will never get married unless approved by yours truly.”   Minhee snorted at his words but nodded approvingly. “Good. Protect her at all costs!”   “What are you guys doing up here?” Chen suddenly questioned, walking into the hallway to see the two down the hall, “Why are you guys soaked?”   “We went swimming,” Kai sarcastically said, taking his phone back from his friend, “Why are you up here?”   Chen shrugged, going to his room and opening it. “Getting my speaker headset deal. Noona’s relocating half of the staff into the ballrooms downstairs to continue our businesses.”   Minhee sighed, taking out her card key to enter her room as well, ten rooms down from Chen’s and three rooms up from Kai’s. “She’s still the same weird boss.”   “You know it!” Chen happily exclaimed before the door shut behind him.   They both watched him curiously as he disappeared, wondering where he even got those techie equipment. Kai continued to think more about it before he noticed Minhee moving again and followed her quickly. “Wait, Minhee.”   “What is it, Jongin?” the other questioned, looking back at him and keeping her door open. She looked down at his hand curiously as he held a pinky out in front of her. She smiled, her heart lurching because they used to do this all the time when they dated last summer. She stuck her hand out, interlocking his pinky with hers, before looking back up to him. “We’re still friends, okay?”   “Let’s find better people to date this summer, spoiled Minhee.”   Minhee laughed, shaking the other’s hand as she did so. “Keep her this time, poor Jongin.”   The other rolled his eyes, both of them letting go of each other’s hands at the same time. Kai watched as the door shut in front of him before he turned to go to his own room, small smile on his face.   Chen watched the ending exchange quietly, incredibly happy that they both finally had some kind of good closure between them, before he went back to the elevators to go down and manage his temporary shop. He hummed, thinking back to the duo on the 23rd floor. Even he could tell their relationship last summer was an odd one. They were always dancing between the fine line of great friendship and great relationship. He was surprised they ended it after their jobs ended. His brow rose in curiosity as his elevator stopped on the 21st floor, and he was pleasantly surprised to see Sena standing out there looking just as surprised. They smiled at each other.   “Hey, Sena.”   “Hey, oppa,” the other greeted back, entering the same carriage as the elder.   “What are you doing?” they asked at the same time, causing both of them to laugh.   Sena shrugged, looking over to the other, “Oppa told me not to leave the hotel this morning and that he’d tell unnie about it. I didn’t think it’d start raining that hard.”   “I know, right?” Chen answered back, hooking the microphone around his head and ear and connecting it to the little speaker he hooked onto his belt, “Now we’re trying to keep businesses going today inside the hotel so nobody has the need to go out.”   “That’s pretty cool,” Sena trailed off before taking a step closer to the elder after a minute of internal deliberation.   Chen flinched at the large step she took towards him. He glanced at her out of the corners of his eyes, waiting for the inevitable. When it didn’t come, he flinched again, tentatively asking, “Yes, Sena?”   “Has my brother mentioned anything about liking any females here?”   “Uh–”   “How about you, oppa?”   “Well, you see–”   “Because I’m pretty sure Junmyeon-oppa might like someone here, but then again–”   “Sena–”   “–I’m not sure.”   Ding!   “Oh, look!” Chen suddenly exclaimed, briskly walking out of the elevator contraption, “We’re here.” He saluted to Kris who was standing there in front of the other elevator, completely confused at his friend’s outburst. “Hi there, hyung!”   “Hey?” the other asked uncertainly, watching as the other practically ran off. He turned to his side to see Sena watching Chen run off in confusion. “Hey, Sena. What’s up?”   Sena looked up to him and shrugged, following him instead. “Hey, oppa,” she greeted before asking another question, “So, what are you doing today since I don’t think you can manage the outdoors park?”   The other shrugged, looking around swiftly before making his way down the hall to one of the two banquet rooms. “Daehyun and I set up some small games the kids could play here in the hotel instead of going out into the storm.”   “That’s cool,” Sena responded back, looking up at the tall man curiously. She always liked observing him simply because he always tried to act like something he wasn’t half the time. She stifled a laugh when he almost tripped on thin air. “What’s really your favorite park ride?”   “I told you, Sena. It’s–”   “No, no,” the younger waved off, grabbing his arm and stopping him from going anywhere. “Your real favorite ride?”   “How do you even know?” Kris frowned down at her, watching as she just smiled back up at him.   “Oppa.”   It took a moment, but then the frown on the elder’s face deepened. “That little–!”   “Oppa’s not little!”   “That’s what you think!”   “But really!” Sena exclaimed, looking up at him with eyes full of curiosity. “What is it?”   Kris bit his lip, staring down at her for a few minutes, before he whispered, “The Ferris wheel.”   “What?” the younger asked, partly surprised, “Why?”   A red blush made its way up Kris’ neck to his cheeks as he tried to dip his head low in embarrassment. “It’s romantic,” he mumbled out, Sena barely able to hear it. Her eyes widened at how cute he sounded.   “What?”   “Don’t make me repeat myself! I need to go finish setting up the prizes. I’ll see you later, Sena,” Kris all but blurted out before he ripped his arm away from the younger and stalked his way into the ballroom where Chen was busy testing out his microphone at the other side of the room.   Sena watched him walk away, amazed, before she felt someone come up next to her. She looked next to her to see Jaemi, and she winced when she realized how drenched the other was. She tilted her body around hers to see Amber in the same state as well. “Hi?” she tentatively greeted, earning two ‘hi’s back, “Are you two okay?”   “It’s raining cats and dogs out there,” Amber answered back before looking over her shoulder to see Xiumin and Daehyun heading their way, laughing about something or another. She hummed in thought, shifting her gaze back and forth between the duo and her best friend standing between them.   “I know. I’m glad Youngjae told me not to go out to the shop. He made it back just in time right when the rain started to pour,” Xiumin happily said, causing Daehyun to laugh and sling an arm around his shoulders.   “Man, you’re lucky. Kris-hyung and I got soaked before we managed to bring some of the toys back from the park. At least they were in plastic bags.”   Amber and Sena watched as Jaemi slightly froze right between them and scowled.   “Oh. Hi, ladies!” Daehyun greeted, used to any stiff posture from women courtesy of Yue, “What brings you outside our banquet room?”   “Hey, Jay!” Xiumin singled out, smiling brightly at her. He was determined to get her attention one way or another. He still had no idea why she wouldn’t talk to him at all.   Everybody noticed the way Jaemi stiffened even more. She turned to stare him down. “Why did you call me that?”   “Why haven’t I thought of that?!” Amber exclaimed out, hi-fiving Xiumin in the process, “I like it!”   “Well, I don’t!” Jaemi exclaimed out, glaring at the other before stalking off to make her way to her room, “I’m going up, Amber.”   Amber looked between all of them before quickly running after her friend. “Keep it up, hyung. You’re cracking her little by little!” she harshly whispered out, flinching when she accidentally back-jo
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Lydine
#1
Was walking down memory lane and ended up back here. You really write wells and omg I forgot how many characters you had to juggle. O_O
Sorry for not commenting much, I think I may have been halfway on hiatus then... D: Even after you went through the trouble of bringing my OC in the story. Oh Sena... What a wild little thing you were... XD
I can't wait to read what you'll write for Sensoria, now ;)
akemi143
#2
Chapter 20: Awwws I feel you achie. ;~;
spontaneity
#3
Chapter 20: i just read the last chapter and was gunna make a long comment for last update
but i also decided to read the authors note for this update too
since i saw the mentioning of this being the last in the little column at the top

its really sad to see the story end, since this was honestly one of my fave stories on aff
i actually have a fave tag xD
theres like 5 stories ROFL
i admire you for writing so many chapters with so many charas!!
#goals XD
hopefully minhi was amongst one the charas you had fun writing bout tho XD

and now for the comment for chapter 6:
i really like how minhee and kai got a closure and seem to remain on good terms after the breakup, though i'm curious to know what really went down that they suddenly stopped talking and everything
i feel like minhee was the one who wanted it like that since she waved away kai's question bout how they lost contact

as usual, i absolutely ADORE the sehun x minhi moments ROFL
esp with them being so snarky, sarcastic, and violent to each other XDD
its always amusing haha
wow sehun tho ROFLLL i didn't know his vocabulary consisted of legit words besides yehet, ohorat XDD

sena is so cute omfg
that sibling love haha
OMFG tho kris!!
him whispering the ferris wheel part
deaaaaddd xD

LMAOOOOOO yue and dae
i wanted to read more bout them haha
same for minseok and jaemi

awww lay and eunmi so sweeet omg
pretty sure i got cavities when eunmis like 'just you'

AND THAT DO X JANICE
I DEAAAD ROFL
i love this side of kyungsoo xDD
and the little exchange between suho and minhee is too cute omg

the part that got to me the most tho
was the lifeguards ROFL
those poor guys, i can imagine em just sitting there in a group all alone and , trying to fend themselves from the rain XDD

this leads to the end of my comment for chapter 6 and i will try to get the comment for this chapter as soon as possible
before college starts again just so i'll have time to read the chapter and everything
and eeps word limit.
xxFiction
#4
Chapter 20: LOL WHERE IS BAEKHYUN'S STORY GOING THE PRINCESS EVERYONE IS TRYING TO KILL?? XD

OMG you used the scene! xD It was way better than what I was thinking! I love it!

I love the Janice and D.O. couple! XD

Daehyun and Jongdae's bromance xD

Thank you for writing so many chapters for this story! I really love this story but it's very understandable why you would stop. :) It really is a ton of people to keep track off. You've done a really wonderful job by the way! You are a very awesome author! :D Thank you so much for starting this story! Though it's sad that it's ending, I'm still grateful that you started it. I laughed so much reading these chapters. xD So thank you again!
spontaneity
#5
Chapter 17: Holy its been so long since i've come back to story to comment and i am sooo soo sooo sorry for that omg. i am here now though and actually read through chapter 4!! i know i finished reading it when it first came out, but i guess i forgot to make a comment on it? oh wait nvm, i looked through my comments and saw i actually commented on this chapter LOOL

so now comment for chapter 5
LOOOOOL omg poor chen
how he was still so well tempered to lay and eunmi is pretty amazing LOOL
i'd probs be throwing stuff at the person who wakes me up from my sleep xD
unless its my boss tho of course

ing daehyun and chen together omg
dying LOOL
these two's antics
annoying the hell out of kyungsoo and everythign
i love kyungsoo's reactions with everyone so much omfg
and sarcasm <3 ing love seeing that LOOOOOOl

sena and kris tho
minhee and suho
LOOOOL
dongwoo <3 xiumin <3
omg they are all so precious LOOOL

awwww kai is so sweet and nice!!!! soo was haneul jealous or something? o.o
LOOOOOL poor youngjae xD
amber and daehyun LOL

LOOOOOL omfg dae numero uno and dos, what happened to finding eunmi? xDDD
both deciding to sleep instead LOOOL

yaassss one year anniversary~ LOOL
this comment for the chapter is pretty short since i commented previously bout the one year anniversary
next chapter's comment would def be longer though!! might even take up the whole comment box
thanks for writing since i know so many charas is really hard to catch up with! :D
OnceUponAnEclipse #6
Chapter 19: I'm so glad I came back on this site again. >< I've been trying to get away from the computer to focus on studying but I thought I should come back to check now that it's summer and I'm back from vacation. I'll be sure to check at least once a week just to check for updates from this story! Reading this chapter reminded me of how much I love it. :)

I see that the layout has changed! And it's better than ever! :) You're really good with layouts! ^^

I hope they don't get sick from the rain. >< Kai and puppies is always a cute combo. ^^ And Minhee and Jongin's relationship kind of makes me... a little sad? I'm glad they have it sorted out now and is going to find better people for themselves. :) I can really imagine Kris to be the romantic type. He seems to fit perfectly. ^^ Daehyun and Yue's relationship is fun to read as usual. ^^ I wonder what they're off to do next. They're so sweet, making cookies for the children because it's raining. :)

Thank you so much for the chapter! ^^ It was fun to read! It's nice to read all the different relationships the characters have with each other. I'm shocked you two can manage so many at once! And so well! I can't wait for the next update! ^^ And it's very understandable that it will take a while as your chapters are always high quality. :)
kmusiclover
#7
Chapter 19: sorry for the late comments, and thank you for updating i know it's hard to write about so many characters but you guys are really doing a great job at it! keep up the good work :D
kmusiclover
#8
Chapter 19: i started reading the first paragraph and totally imagined jongin shaking his wet hair *o* /drools
sehun is always caught in an argument LOL the boy can't talk without initiating one xD
kris likes the ferris wheel what a romantic guy xDDD kyaahhh cutie!! LOL at "Daehyun is used to any stiff posture from women courtesy of Yue" haha I feel like Yue and Jaemi would get along really well, and probably Janice too LMAO
"Hey, Jay!" Xiumin
"Why haven't I thought of that?!" x'D Ah gosh Amber's the best!!
Lay is so sweet ^o^ I hope the money troubles resolve themselves, they should make the men work more cause they'll bring on women customers like flies to pie, or something along those lines.
Well, I think it would be a bit obvious that the you lifeguards didn't have to work since it was pouring rain but still one can't help but love those dumb flower boys /(^0^)/~~
kmusiclover
#9
Chapter 18: omg i shall forever love the dae twin trolls!! seriously their so hilarious xDDD
eunmi and lay are toooo adorbs!!! gah can't with them!
kkk himchan trying to help daehyun with yue, although she clearly doesn't like him...yet LOL
daehyun did get all the difficult ones haha
minhi and sehun's relationship though, my god i'm suprised they haven't resorted to violence yet but they are funny and cute LOLL
Kris and Sena's glare down omg i ship it, don't know if they're each other's love interest but i ship it!
Suho stop trying to act dumb everyone can tell you like Minhee so just ask her out already /sighs!
I love how D.O retorts to Janice without fear or intimidation LOOL I never noticed but at first I though Janice and Baekhyun but now I'm like
/light bulb turns on/ what if it's D.O?!
Urgh! Haneul and Kai just kiss already!
LOL I feel like Jaemi is being a bit hard and reaaallly stubborn with Xiumin xDDD
I wonder if Sena will end matchmaking them all, that would be awesome!!! ;D
It seems like Sena and Jaemi know something about why Sehu- OMG SEHUN AND MINHI ARE EACH OTHER'S LOVE INTEREST!!! o_o
xxFiction
#10
Chapter 19: ... The way your portray Kai... All I can think of is ANGEL while I read parts about him (talking about the side bar right now). He's so cute and sweet! Worried about everyone and hoping Minhee will find someone better. : ) But then... His smirk? ??? Makes me so confused about how I feel about him lol. Well, he confuses me in real life anyway with his stage and off-stage side.

LOL I've never heard of splendiferous before either. xD

Reading about Kai and Minhee so excited about the puppies is so cute! Their relationship is sad though. ) : Must be pretty hard for both of them...

That brief conversation between Sena and Chen seemed a little tense? Rare to see Chen like that. Seemed like he was trying to get away. xD

OMG KRIS SO CUTE! The ferris wheel because it's romantic! xD

Seems like Daehyun got used to coldness from females. xD Both Daehyun and Xiumin are in a tight situation. xD But like Amber said, they're cracking little by little! LOL Yue trying to shut the door before Daehyun gets there. xD Good thing Himchan is there to help Daehyun!

Aw poor Eunmi! It must feel horrible when someone forgets their anniversary! ) : And when everyone else is having fun with their jobs, it's a lot of pressure on the owners since there's money issue... But at least Lay cheered her up after!

LOL while Meilin is sneezing someone else is walking around with ice cream. xD

Thanks for the update! It was really fun to read as usual. :D Can't wait for the next chapter~ But take your time. School is most important. : )