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June 1, 2013 ❝ the start of the party ❞ ❀❀❀❀❀❀ * first attempt at partying till dawn *   Kai smiled as he threw open his door, only to burst out into laughter at what he saw, “My annoying brat of a best friend, what in the world are you wearing?”   Sehun glared back at the other, wearing a tuxedo, before putting up a hand and pointing with his thumb to the person hiding behind his back, “Noona.”   “Noona?” Kai laughed out, tilting around the other to see Jaemi smiling and waving at him. He smiled brightly and waved back, “Hi, noona!”   “Hey, Jongin!” Jaemi responded back, walking around Sehun to look up at her baby cousin again, “You’re so cute like this!”   “Go away, noona!” Sehun blurted out, blushing as he tried to push her away from him, “Go to that panda of a-”   “Sehun!” Jaemi hissed out, giving him a reprimanding look, “Don’t talk about Minhi like that.”   Kai looked at them as Sehun just glared at his cousin, “I thought he was talking about Tao-hyung.”   Sehun waved a dismissive hand in the air, “He’s probably with Melody-noona or Kris-hyung or somebody.” He glared back at his cousin before pushing her away again, “Now, go! We have manly things to talk about!”   Kai watched amusedly as Jaemi laughed and successfully pinched the youngest worker’s cheek again before walking away quickly to go see how her friends were doing and what they were wearing. They waited as she disappeared down the hallway where the elevator was before Sehun frowned at his best friend, pushing him in and making his way into the room.   Kai just laughed again, eyeing his friend’s outfit, up and down once, “Why in the world did she make you dress up in a tuxedo?”   “Don’t ask me,” Sehun frowned, quickly shoving off his jacket and throwing it on his friend’s couch. He walked over to the full-length mirror before pouting, “Help me fix this.”   The other just chuckled, eyeing his friend with gelled hair, neck tie, and vest, before pulling out his phone and pressing one of the numbers on his speed-dial, “This requires an expert.”   Sehun scowled at his best friend, looking over his shoulder to see what the other was wearing, “How in the world did you dress up like that?”   Kai looked at the other, waiting for the other person to pick up, “Oh. Hwayoung and Sunli-noona- Oh, hello?”   The other frowned, turning to eye his best friend up and down before looking down at himself, “Of course.”   xxx   “I’ve called you here today-”   “You need help with what to wear, right?” Kris deadpanned, cutting off his boss before looking to Lay next to Eunmi, “You too?”   Lay shrugged, “I have a general idea of what I wanted to wear.”   Kris eyed both of them before turning to his companions who consisted of Tao, Jia, Hwayoung, and Luhan, “So, who knows fashion?” He didn’t question Tao about the frown on his face as Hwayoung, Jia, and Luhan raised their hands. He nodded, “Then let’s see what they have in here,” before moving over to the closet to see what the boss and boyfriend had while Jia went to the dresser.   “I was thinking of wearing this,” Lay mumbled, walking over and pulling out various clothing to show his friend, “Yes?”   Kris frowned, eyeing the clothes before picking it out of the other’s grasp and inspecting it some more. He turned to Hwayoung, “What do you think?”   Hwayoung quietly went up to him and peeked over his arm to immediately nod at what she saw. She smiled at Lay, “Go try it on, oppa. We’ll see.”   Lay beamed back a smile at her before going to the bathroom, patting Eunmi on the shoulder comfortingly on his way there. The latter sighed, going to sit down on her bed as she watched Jia rummage through their dresser and Kris and Hwayoung ransack their closet. She looked curiously to Luhan who was awkwardly standing in the middle of the room, “Luhan-oppa?”   Luhan looked to her as a blush and a bright smile took over his face, “Yeah?”   “Why are you not looking through our stuff?” the other questioned, patting the spot on the bed next to her.   The elder bit his lip before going over to sit in his designated spot, “You didn’t give us permission to.”   Hwayoung was pretty sure her heart did an illegal flip at the soft voice of the other. She paused in what she was doing before Kris noticed her stiffness. He raised a brow but didn’t question it as he noticed a blush on her face.   Eunmi shrugged, “It’s fine,” before tilting into Luhan’s personal space and whispering, “Found a girl you like yet, oppa?”   Luhan’s blush intensified at the usage of ‘oppa.’ He really was a er for it. “I don’t know, Mi.”   “Really?” Eunmi questioned, eventually leaning her head on his shoulder, “I think I found a girl who likes you.”   “Eunmi,” Jia called out, not bothering to look over her shoulder, “We need to go shopping.”   The other pouted, sitting back up and letting Luhan recompose himself, “I go for the comfy and tomboyish style.”   “Well,” Kris interfered, pulling out a hanger with a skirt being pinned to it, “You’re wearing a skirt tonight.” He looked at it a bit longer before going back into the closet, “Maybe shorts.”   Eunmi frowned, turning to him, “Do I have to?”   “You’re not wearing jeans,” Hwayoung firmly stated, pulling out a shirt to match the skirt or shorts, “Unni, did you find something else?”   Jia sighed, closing the drawer, “Just a bunch of ‘Eunmi’ stuff.”   “Hey! What’s that supposed to mean?!”   Luhan laughed as he sympathetically patted her on the back, “I’m sorry.”   “Xing!” Kris barked out, walking over to the bathroom to bang on the door, “What’s taking you so long?!”   “These straps are difficult to put on!”   “Well, if you work it, that’s our theme for tonight!” Kris called back before walking back to the others who were giving him a questioning look. He shrugged, “Sunli told me that Jongin is wearing something similar to that.”   “Jongin asked Sunli for help?!” Eunmi exclaimed, appalled that her ‘baby’ asked somebody else for help who was not her.   “You’re not good in fashion, unni,” Hwayoung reminded, going over to her to show her the outfit they chose for her, “We’ll see what shoes go with it. Anything should go with this outfit.”   Luhan eyed the outfit and nodded, approving it, “It’ll look nice on you, Mi.” He shifted his gaze up to smile at Hwayoung before throwing a quick smile to Kris who was too busy arguing with Jia about shoes, “This is good.”   Hwayoung blushed, giving a bright smile back, “Thank you.”   “Finally,” Lay breathed out, walking out of the bathroom and making it to where Jia and Kris were currently sitting in front of the closet with the former slapping the latter’s arm. He raised a brow, “Why is jiejie hitting gege?”   “Stop it!” Kris growled out as Jia punched him on the arm once, “Ow! These shoes don’t go with the outfit!”   “Yes, they do!” Jia shouted back, pulling the shoes out of the other’s grasp.   Lay rolled his eyes before making his way to where his girlfriend was eyeing Hwayoung who kept glancing at Luhan every few seconds while the latter just kept inspecting the outfit for his boss. He hummed, walking up to his friend and randomly glomping him back onto the bed.   “Xingie!” Luhan gasped out, completely caught off-guard. He laughed, hugging the other back, “What was that?”   Lay shrugged as he got off of him and gave him a bright smile, “Not sure.”   “Whoa,” Hwayoung mumbled out, finally getting a good look at Lay’s outfit, “Nice.”   “Hmm?” Lay questioned, standing back up to look at himself, “Really?”   “That’s definitely our theme,” Kris decided, getting up from the ground and having red marks all over his arms. He sighed, “Now, we need to go find our own, Luhan.”   Luhan waved a hand dismissively, “I’ve got something on hand.”   Eunmi finally removed her eyes from her boyfriend to eye the man lying on her bed, “Really?”   Lay nodded in confirmation, “We all kinda took a huge shopping trip last year.”   Hwayoung and Jia just stayed silent, the latter getting up and throwing shoes to her best friend, “Well then.”   Eunmi sighed, catching the shoes and getting up from the bed, “My turn then, I guess.”   “Hurry up!” Hwayoung happily said, taking the other’s former place on the bed next to Luhan, “I still need to get ready too!”   “What time does the party even start?” Lay questioned, sitting next to Luhan on his other side.   “Ten!” Eunmi shouted back, “Since most of the shops closed around seven or eight.” She paused in her steps before looking around, noticing Kris’ and Jia’s questioning looks towards her.   “What is it?” Jia asked, looking around as well.   Kris’ eyes widened in realization before Eunmi even had a chance to ask. “Where’s Zitao?”   “Crap,” Kris whispered before getting his things and quickly leaving the suite, “I’ll see you guys at the party. Just shoot me a text or call if you have any more questions!”   Everybody who stayed watched with confused looks as the door shut closed behind the tall man. Eunmi frowned, looking to Lay and Luhan who gave her looks of uncertainty back, before giving them a soft smile and turning to go into the bathroom, “Yifan will take care of it.”   Hwayoung and Jia looked confused as they tried to get answers from the other two men in the room through silent questions.   “Why don’t you girls go get ready?” Lay softly suggested, looking to Luhan who nodded and stood up.   “I’ll walk you girls back.” The other two frowned as they looked to each other. Luhan gently grabbed Hwayoung’s arm and pulled her up, gaining her attention as she followed him to Jia as he put both of his hands on each of their backs to lead them out of the room. “We’ll see you at the party,” Luhan called out as Lay simply waved at them, now waiting for Eunmi to finish changing.   xxx   “Are we too early?” Jongup questioned Yongguk, looking around only to see Eric and Chihoon just relaxing around the room with Chanyeol lying down on top of a table, “What is he doing there?”   Yongguk shrugged, taking out his cell phone to take a picture of Chanyeol before calling up Himchan who promptly ignored him after the third ring. He scowled, “Of course.”   The younger sighed, looking to the elder, “You tried calling Himchan-hyung, didn’t you?”   Yongguk sighed in return, “Well, you should’ve known what time the party started.”   “How would I know?”   “Because Jongdae would have known.”   Jongup pouted, looking away from him, “Well, we didn’t exactly converse about the party. Just about the food that was going to be at the party.”   “Chanyeol! Get off the table!” D.O. suddenly yelled out through the kitchen doors, causing the said member, Eric, and Chihoon to jump at the sudden shout. Well, Chanyeol flinched violently and landed on the floor with a thud.   The other two stared at the poor guy, watching as he groaned. “Should we help hyung up?”   Yongguk continued to eye the other before shrugging, making his way into the kitchen to see if they needed any help in there, “Nah. He should be good. He’s the one supposedly saving lives anyways.”   “But that doesn’t mean he can save his own life.”   “That’s his problem.”   Jongup frowned, leaving the other to go to Chanyeol instead, “Hyung’s so mean.” He walked up to Chanyeol who just decided to make himself comfortable on the floor, “What are you doing here so early, hyung?”   Chanyeol sighed, placing his head on his folded arms and turned to face his general direction, “I already got dressed and everything. Then Jihoon-hyung made me take his spot so he could get ready even though everything is already done.”   “Chanyeol!” D.O. shouted out again, causing the other to flinch and immediately stand up, Jongup jumping away to avoid being hit under the chin.   “How do you even know?!” Chanyeol shouted out exasperated, glaring at the closed double doors.   Jongup looked up at him with wide eyes before looking over to the door, “He’s amazing.”   “Amazingly creepy,” Chanyeol muttered out, going to sit properly in a chair.   “You!” D.O. exclaimed, slamming open one of the doors wearing a blue apron and holding a spatula in the air, “Come in here! You’re good at making snacks, so be useful for once and help us!”   Jongup stared at him with scared eyes before quickly pulling Chanyeol up and pushing him in the direction of the kitchen, “I’ll see you later, hyung!”   Chanyeol pouted at him before dragging his feet to the kitchen, “See you later, Jonguppie~”   “Scary, right?” Eric suddenly commented, making Jongup jump again in fright.   The younger looked to the elder before nodding frantically, “Oh yeah.”   xxx   Zelo stared at his two hyungs in front of him, analyzing the problem presented in front of him, before he softly started speaking, “Hyung?” He eyed the gelled hair and then the vest and tie and button up shirt and black pants, “There’s something wrong.”   “No duh,” Sehun deadpanned, crossing his arms in front of his chest defensively, about to burst out and punch Kai’s amused smile off of his face. He turned to his best friend, “He is your speed-dial?”   Kai nodded, looking back to Zelo, “He’s actually very good.”   “Do you want to be dressed similar to Jongin-hyung?” Zelo asked innocently, still keeping his distance as he assessed the situation and thought of what to do. He was already in his own outfit, but it was clearly different from what Kai was wearing.   Sehun shrugged, his annoyance level slowly going down in the presence of the other, “As long as I look better than I do now.”   Zelo nodded, taking one last look at his hyung, up and down, before looking to Kai, “He needs to wash his hair.” Kai nodded as he looked back to Sehun, tilting his head to the side, “And he’ll need a hat, probably a snapback or something.”   “Got it,” Kai immediately said, quickly going in search of a hat in his collection, “Color?”   “Preferably black.”   Sehun stared at the younger male, completely shocked, “What?”   “Come on, hyung!” Zelo happily said, bouncing over to him to grab his hand and drag him to the bathroom, “We need to wash your hair!”   “But my shirt?” Sehun asked, sounding severely confused, in which he was.   Zelo stopped mid-step, turning to eye him before shifting his eyes down to the shirt, “Right,” and then turning back around to pull him to the bathroom, “It needs to come off, so it doesn’t get wet.”   “But my pants?”   “There’s not enough time!” Kai called out, only the lower half of his body visible since the other half was in his closet, “We can’t be too late!”   “Then he’ll wash his hair in the sink,” Zelo decided, going into Kai’s bathroom to grab his shampoo.   Sehun scrunched his nose, “I’d rather shower.”   “No! Late!” Kai shouted out, “Ow!” before hitting his head on something.   “Shower!”   “Hyung!” Zelo yelled out, pouting as he forced Sehun to come back to him by the sink. He held out the bottle for him, and once Sehun snatched it from him, he quickly went to work on ing the other’s shirt.   “Whoa, whoa, whoa,” Sehun mumbled out, stepping back from the other, “What are you doing?”   Zelo bounced up and down in annoyance, “Hyung! Stop being difficult!”   “I’m not being difficult!”   “Oh my God, Sehun!” Kai exclaimed out, walking up to him and throwing the hat at the back of the other’s head with a thud, “Get to washing your hair so Junhong can fix your train wreck of an outfit!”   Sehun frowned at them, eyeing each of them before shoving Zelo out of the area so he can wash his hair, “You guys .”   “Hurry up, hyung!” Zelo called out again after catching Sehun’s vest and button up shirt, “The party is already starting soon!”   xxx   “You did a good job,” Sunli commented, her and Jihoon the first to show up besides Jongup and Yongguk.   Jihoon smiled happily as he threw an arm around her shoulders, “I know, right? Awesome job.”   “We did most of it!” Eric shouted out, popping out from behind a table.   Sunli gave him a stare, “What were you doing back there?”   The other gave her a cheeky smile, “Hiding.”   “From,” Sunli started off slowly, eyes scanning the room, “What?”   “There you are!” Minhi suddenly yelled out, tackling Eric and making them fall over to the side with an ‘oof.’   Sunli’s and Jihoon’s mouths dropped at what they just witnessed, “Wha~t?”   “Dangit, Minhi!” Eric shouted out in English, pushing the other off of him, “Not fair!”   “Let’s sneak away?” Jihoon whispered into Sunli’s hair, completely transfixed with Eric and Minhi now freely talking to each other in English, “I don’t know what they’re saying.”   “I do,” Sunli muttered, seeing something move out of the corners of her eyes. She looked to her side to see Chihoon rearranging some snacks, “Chihoon-oppa?”   “Yo,” he c
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Lydine
#1
Was walking down memory lane and ended up back here. You really write wells and omg I forgot how many characters you had to juggle. O_O
Sorry for not commenting much, I think I may have been halfway on hiatus then... D: Even after you went through the trouble of bringing my OC in the story. Oh Sena... What a wild little thing you were... XD
I can't wait to read what you'll write for Sensoria, now ;)
akemi143
#2
Chapter 20: Awwws I feel you achie. ;~;
spontaneity
#3
Chapter 20: i just read the last chapter and was gunna make a long comment for last update
but i also decided to read the authors note for this update too
since i saw the mentioning of this being the last in the little column at the top

its really sad to see the story end, since this was honestly one of my fave stories on aff
i actually have a fave tag xD
theres like 5 stories ROFL
i admire you for writing so many chapters with so many charas!!
#goals XD
hopefully minhi was amongst one the charas you had fun writing bout tho XD

and now for the comment for chapter 6:
i really like how minhee and kai got a closure and seem to remain on good terms after the breakup, though i'm curious to know what really went down that they suddenly stopped talking and everything
i feel like minhee was the one who wanted it like that since she waved away kai's question bout how they lost contact

as usual, i absolutely ADORE the sehun x minhi moments ROFL
esp with them being so snarky, sarcastic, and violent to each other XDD
its always amusing haha
wow sehun tho ROFLLL i didn't know his vocabulary consisted of legit words besides yehet, ohorat XDD

sena is so cute omfg
that sibling love haha
OMFG tho kris!!
him whispering the ferris wheel part
deaaaaddd xD

LMAOOOOOO yue and dae
i wanted to read more bout them haha
same for minseok and jaemi

awww lay and eunmi so sweeet omg
pretty sure i got cavities when eunmis like 'just you'

AND THAT DO X JANICE
I DEAAAD ROFL
i love this side of kyungsoo xDD
and the little exchange between suho and minhee is too cute omg

the part that got to me the most tho
was the lifeguards ROFL
those poor guys, i can imagine em just sitting there in a group all alone and , trying to fend themselves from the rain XDD

this leads to the end of my comment for chapter 6 and i will try to get the comment for this chapter as soon as possible
before college starts again just so i'll have time to read the chapter and everything
and eeps word limit.
xxFiction
#4
Chapter 20: LOL WHERE IS BAEKHYUN'S STORY GOING THE PRINCESS EVERYONE IS TRYING TO KILL?? XD

OMG you used the scene! xD It was way better than what I was thinking! I love it!

I love the Janice and D.O. couple! XD

Daehyun and Jongdae's bromance xD

Thank you for writing so many chapters for this story! I really love this story but it's very understandable why you would stop. :) It really is a ton of people to keep track off. You've done a really wonderful job by the way! You are a very awesome author! :D Thank you so much for starting this story! Though it's sad that it's ending, I'm still grateful that you started it. I laughed so much reading these chapters. xD So thank you again!
spontaneity
#5
Chapter 17: Holy its been so long since i've come back to story to comment and i am sooo soo sooo sorry for that omg. i am here now though and actually read through chapter 4!! i know i finished reading it when it first came out, but i guess i forgot to make a comment on it? oh wait nvm, i looked through my comments and saw i actually commented on this chapter LOOL

so now comment for chapter 5
LOOOOOL omg poor chen
how he was still so well tempered to lay and eunmi is pretty amazing LOOL
i'd probs be throwing stuff at the person who wakes me up from my sleep xD
unless its my boss tho of course

ing daehyun and chen together omg
dying LOOL
these two's antics
annoying the hell out of kyungsoo and everythign
i love kyungsoo's reactions with everyone so much omfg
and sarcasm <3 ing love seeing that LOOOOOOl

sena and kris tho
minhee and suho
LOOOOL
dongwoo <3 xiumin <3
omg they are all so precious LOOOL

awwww kai is so sweet and nice!!!! soo was haneul jealous or something? o.o
LOOOOOL poor youngjae xD
amber and daehyun LOL

LOOOOOL omfg dae numero uno and dos, what happened to finding eunmi? xDDD
both deciding to sleep instead LOOOL

yaassss one year anniversary~ LOOL
this comment for the chapter is pretty short since i commented previously bout the one year anniversary
next chapter's comment would def be longer though!! might even take up the whole comment box
thanks for writing since i know so many charas is really hard to catch up with! :D
OnceUponAnEclipse #6
Chapter 19: I'm so glad I came back on this site again. >< I've been trying to get away from the computer to focus on studying but I thought I should come back to check now that it's summer and I'm back from vacation. I'll be sure to check at least once a week just to check for updates from this story! Reading this chapter reminded me of how much I love it. :)

I see that the layout has changed! And it's better than ever! :) You're really good with layouts! ^^

I hope they don't get sick from the rain. >< Kai and puppies is always a cute combo. ^^ And Minhee and Jongin's relationship kind of makes me... a little sad? I'm glad they have it sorted out now and is going to find better people for themselves. :) I can really imagine Kris to be the romantic type. He seems to fit perfectly. ^^ Daehyun and Yue's relationship is fun to read as usual. ^^ I wonder what they're off to do next. They're so sweet, making cookies for the children because it's raining. :)

Thank you so much for the chapter! ^^ It was fun to read! It's nice to read all the different relationships the characters have with each other. I'm shocked you two can manage so many at once! And so well! I can't wait for the next update! ^^ And it's very understandable that it will take a while as your chapters are always high quality. :)
kmusiclover
#7
Chapter 19: sorry for the late comments, and thank you for updating i know it's hard to write about so many characters but you guys are really doing a great job at it! keep up the good work :D
kmusiclover
#8
Chapter 19: i started reading the first paragraph and totally imagined jongin shaking his wet hair *o* /drools
sehun is always caught in an argument LOL the boy can't talk without initiating one xD
kris likes the ferris wheel what a romantic guy xDDD kyaahhh cutie!! LOL at "Daehyun is used to any stiff posture from women courtesy of Yue" haha I feel like Yue and Jaemi would get along really well, and probably Janice too LMAO
"Hey, Jay!" Xiumin
"Why haven't I thought of that?!" x'D Ah gosh Amber's the best!!
Lay is so sweet ^o^ I hope the money troubles resolve themselves, they should make the men work more cause they'll bring on women customers like flies to pie, or something along those lines.
Well, I think it would be a bit obvious that the you lifeguards didn't have to work since it was pouring rain but still one can't help but love those dumb flower boys /(^0^)/~~
kmusiclover
#9
Chapter 18: omg i shall forever love the dae twin trolls!! seriously their so hilarious xDDD
eunmi and lay are toooo adorbs!!! gah can't with them!
kkk himchan trying to help daehyun with yue, although she clearly doesn't like him...yet LOL
daehyun did get all the difficult ones haha
minhi and sehun's relationship though, my god i'm suprised they haven't resorted to violence yet but they are funny and cute LOLL
Kris and Sena's glare down omg i ship it, don't know if they're each other's love interest but i ship it!
Suho stop trying to act dumb everyone can tell you like Minhee so just ask her out already /sighs!
I love how D.O retorts to Janice without fear or intimidation LOOL I never noticed but at first I though Janice and Baekhyun but now I'm like
/light bulb turns on/ what if it's D.O?!
Urgh! Haneul and Kai just kiss already!
LOL I feel like Jaemi is being a bit hard and reaaallly stubborn with Xiumin xDDD
I wonder if Sena will end matchmaking them all, that would be awesome!!! ;D
It seems like Sena and Jaemi know something about why Sehu- OMG SEHUN AND MINHI ARE EACH OTHER'S LOVE INTEREST!!! o_o
xxFiction
#10
Chapter 19: ... The way your portray Kai... All I can think of is ANGEL while I read parts about him (talking about the side bar right now). He's so cute and sweet! Worried about everyone and hoping Minhee will find someone better. : ) But then... His smirk? ??? Makes me so confused about how I feel about him lol. Well, he confuses me in real life anyway with his stage and off-stage side.

LOL I've never heard of splendiferous before either. xD

Reading about Kai and Minhee so excited about the puppies is so cute! Their relationship is sad though. ) : Must be pretty hard for both of them...

That brief conversation between Sena and Chen seemed a little tense? Rare to see Chen like that. Seemed like he was trying to get away. xD

OMG KRIS SO CUTE! The ferris wheel because it's romantic! xD

Seems like Daehyun got used to coldness from females. xD Both Daehyun and Xiumin are in a tight situation. xD But like Amber said, they're cracking little by little! LOL Yue trying to shut the door before Daehyun gets there. xD Good thing Himchan is there to help Daehyun!

Aw poor Eunmi! It must feel horrible when someone forgets their anniversary! ) : And when everyone else is having fun with their jobs, it's a lot of pressure on the owners since there's money issue... But at least Lay cheered her up after!

LOL while Meilin is sneezing someone else is walking around with ice cream. xD

Thanks for the update! It was really fun to read as usual. :D Can't wait for the next chapter~ But take your time. School is most important. : )