OC/You Fics: the Good, the Bad, and the Ugly

Things I Cannot Stand

Today's rant shall be about characterization.

Specifically, the main female character if she is not an idol.

There are several types of stereotypical lead female characters that I often see.

The first, as I believe every one of you reading this is acquainted with, often has some combination of the following traits:

-looks like an ulzzang
-clumsy
-nobody likes her
-everyone likes her
-sarcastic
-super nice
-all the guys immediately fall for her
-she's unpopular
-orphan or rich parents
-she and the ‘queenka’ of the school hate each other
-must be multilingual (Korean and English of course, sometimes Japanese, Chinese, French, Spanish, or whatever else the author decides to put.)
-she has a transfer student or is hit on immediately by transfer students (yay for transfer student fics!)

Obviously, one single person cannot possess all of these traits unless they have multiple personality disorder. Think about it: how many people do you know in real life that are like this? Odds are, absolutely none.

To combat this, some authors create sort of a reverse of this under the guise of creating a strong female character, usually with these traits:

-beautiful (but she doesn’t think so)
-often orphaned
-hangs out with guys who obviously like her but she’s so oblivious
-when she does find out that they like her, she refuses to admit it
-refuses to show emotion
-usually a gang member or some sort of fighter

Now once again, you’ve created a flat character. Some authors go so far in their attempts to create a ‘badass’ character, that they try too hard, and that shows in their writing.

It is difficult to create a balanced OC, as I know very well. However, I find that a good way to start is by basing it off of someone you know, whether it be an idol or someone you know in reality. Switch out some things and tweak things until you’ve created a good character.

Some things to keep in mind are:

-What makes your character tick? (i.e. Did someone in their family die? Are they an environmentalist? Are they poor? Are they rich? The possibilities here are endless!)
-Where are you setting your story? (Obviously, most of these stories will be set in Korea or China, as this is a site for ASIAN fanfics after all, but make sure you do your research beforehand, which shall be covered later.)
-Who does your character hang out with? (i.e. smart kids, cool kids, rich kids, nerds, etc. Although you think it may be cool to have a character that ‘floats’ around, 99% of the time they will go back to one dependable group of friends.)
-What do they look like? (Please don’t use a picture of an ulzzang or I will hunt you down. No, I’m too lazy to do that. But please, don’t. DESCRIBE YOUR CHARACTER WITH WORDS.)
-Do NOT use conflicting character traits to describe them. The main one I see is that the main character is apparently a loner, but everyone loves her. THIS. IS. NOT. POSSIBLE. IN ANY SHAPE OR FORM.

Please do pardon me for the excessive use of caps in this, although I do feel that it’s necessary to get this point across. I probably forgot a lot of things, so if you feel like there are things I should add, please drop a comment below.

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deepbreath #1
Chapter 11: thank you for clearing up the meaning of SNCJ. i keep on seeing sncj santa exchange fics but doesnt have any clue as to what sncj means. and then i searched what it stand for only to be more confuse cause what in the merriam is sonyeoncheonji? i still dont know. but at least it is now clear its for the exo fandom only cause i swear i thought girls generation has something to do with it. thank you for this informative article. and your a/n cracked me up. also, evrything about that lj thing is super true. atleast in my observation. theres a lot of unappreciated writers there.
ChaoticDarkAngel
#2
Chapter 4: I think it's silly when people bash authors who write 'you' fics and praise those who write OC fics. Deep down I think those type of AFF users know that both genres have their faults. There are some you fics I've enjoyed greatly actually and ones I didn't enjoy as much same for OC stories it all depends on how the writer portrays the lead character is all ^^
kaedeyuuki
#3
Chapter 4: Wanna know something? The Mary Sue trope can be both found in OCs and reader-insert characters. :)

It's total bullsh*t if one says that OCs are a lot better than reader-inserts. I could totally throw a good number of Mary Sue OCs from Fanfiction.Net. :P
lovestillgoeson
#4
Chapter 12: While I agree with the majority of things you say in your posts, I have to disagree with the last one.

I personally don't think asking for a sequel to a story is rude (again, asking, not demanding; demanding does is rude). You take the readers wanting a sequel as if they're telling you your story is not good enough, but for me (and I think a lot of people will agree) it means that they liked your story so much that they need to have more of it.

Haven't you ever liked a book or story so much that you wished you hadn't gotten to the end because you couldn't get enough of it, or you've read it more than once because you couldn't get over it? The feeling is pretty much like that.

So no, I don't think people who ask for sequels are implying a story is bad.
j2ster
#5
Chapter 12: by far the worst i've ever gotten was a straightforward "i demand a sequel"
MehRainbow #6
Chapter 3: Overall, I found the tidbits about AFF & LJ to be the most interesting. I frequently use both sites, and your points seem very valid. Anyway, I just wanted to say, "Kudos to you!" :)
Iloveanime
#7
Chapter 6: Oh God, Mary-Sues... hate them! I dislike it when the OC is perfect. I mean, do you know anyone who is pretty, has an IQ of 700 (aka super smart), virtually speaks ALL languages, is a magnet for hot boys and is popular, all at the same time? The answer is NO.
FullmetalTitan
#8
Chapter 8: Mhmmm...I personally like mpreg but to each their own XD This could be very useful to those who have no idea how to write . Hell I've been writing it for awhile and it's difficult to get right .___. I hope to become better at it someday.
FullmetalTitan
#9
Chapter 3: *patience* stupid typos...
FullmetalTitan
#10
Chapter 3: I have a LJ account though I haven't been on it...oh gosh since last year I think. It's not that I dislike it, I just feel more comfortable on AFF is all ^^ And yeah, there are bad stories on here...but there's also good ones. People just need to have patients is all. They'll find a good fic on here I'm sure.

I just dislike it, when people praise LiveJournal like it's a God or something. It's just like every other site out there and so is AFF. You'll find cringe worthy fics on both sites and good ones :3