The Way Your Fic Looks

Things I Cannot Stand

For the life of me, I cannot comprehend the choices that some people make when deciding on how their fic will look.

Posters, I can understand (I personally don't use them, I'm far too lazy), but making the fonts rainbow colored and cursive, adding in pictures every few paragraphs, and distracting backgrounds (especially those gif ones. Those are the worst.)?

No.

Go away.

Here are some ways to combat the urge to make your fic look weird:

1. 'How do I know which characters are talking?'

Why don't you put 'XX character said/screamed/cried/whatever' at the end of the dialogue?

2. 'My characters are speaking in different languages!'

There are two common ways (that I have seen) that this is done in normal literature. One is to use the actual phrase of language itself. I only recommend using this if you yourself are fluent in the language (I'm looking at you, all you people who think you can speak Korean but don't actually know what you're talking about) or have a trusted source that is fluent in that language (Google Translate is not a trusted source), if it's obvious what they're talking about (i.e 'annyeong' or 'ni hao ma'), and/or if there is a very small amount of it used in the story.

The other way is to italicize the speech by the characters when they're using the other language. This method is more common when the characters are speaking in the other language for a longer period of time. When you use this method, it is imperative that you make clear what language the characters are speaking in before you start italicizing, otherwise your readers won't understand why Jongdae can't understand what Luhan and Tao are talking about when it all looks to be in English to them.

3. 'I want the readers to know exactly what the character is wearing/what the room looks like/how they're acting!'

If you cannot write descriptively enough to describe an outfit/setting/action, you need much more practice.

That being said, however, we don't need to know that her sweater has seven stripes, or that there are eighty-seven books on his bookshelf. You can simply say that she's wearing a striped sweater, or that his bookshelf is filled with books. It's better to allow the reader to imagine the scene on their own, but not to the point where you're being too vague. The only way you can improve this is with practice.

Another thing not to do is hyperlink the image into the story instead of just pasting it in. Although this can look more streamlined, it's distracting to have to see the occasional flash of blue in the middle of a sentence.

4. 'I want a cool background!'

Please refrain from using backgrounds. Some people might like them, but I personally despise them. They usually distract from what I'm really after: the literary work itself.

To better illustrate my point, look at any modern novel.

Go ahead, it won't bite you.

Open the cover and skim through a few pages.

What do you see?

Plain text!

Oh my!

Where is the neon?

Where is the cursive?

Where are the pictures that describe what the main character is doing or what the main character's room looks like?

I've got an answer for you: THEY DON'T EXIST!

And yet, many of those novels sell by the thousands, if not millions.

You don't need to make your story look flashy to draw attention to it; the story itself is what the readers have come for. The real content should do all the talking for you.

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deepbreath #1
Chapter 11: thank you for clearing up the meaning of SNCJ. i keep on seeing sncj santa exchange fics but doesnt have any clue as to what sncj means. and then i searched what it stand for only to be more confuse cause what in the merriam is sonyeoncheonji? i still dont know. but at least it is now clear its for the exo fandom only cause i swear i thought girls generation has something to do with it. thank you for this informative article. and your a/n cracked me up. also, evrything about that lj thing is super true. atleast in my observation. theres a lot of unappreciated writers there.
ChaoticDarkAngel
#2
Chapter 4: I think it's silly when people bash authors who write 'you' fics and praise those who write OC fics. Deep down I think those type of AFF users know that both genres have their faults. There are some you fics I've enjoyed greatly actually and ones I didn't enjoy as much same for OC stories it all depends on how the writer portrays the lead character is all ^^
kaedeyuuki
#3
Chapter 4: Wanna know something? The Mary Sue trope can be both found in OCs and reader-insert characters. :)

It's total bullsh*t if one says that OCs are a lot better than reader-inserts. I could totally throw a good number of Mary Sue OCs from Fanfiction.Net. :P
lovestillgoeson
#4
Chapter 12: While I agree with the majority of things you say in your posts, I have to disagree with the last one.

I personally don't think asking for a sequel to a story is rude (again, asking, not demanding; demanding does is rude). You take the readers wanting a sequel as if they're telling you your story is not good enough, but for me (and I think a lot of people will agree) it means that they liked your story so much that they need to have more of it.

Haven't you ever liked a book or story so much that you wished you hadn't gotten to the end because you couldn't get enough of it, or you've read it more than once because you couldn't get over it? The feeling is pretty much like that.

So no, I don't think people who ask for sequels are implying a story is bad.
j2ster
#5
Chapter 12: by far the worst i've ever gotten was a straightforward "i demand a sequel"
MehRainbow #6
Chapter 3: Overall, I found the tidbits about AFF & LJ to be the most interesting. I frequently use both sites, and your points seem very valid. Anyway, I just wanted to say, "Kudos to you!" :)
Iloveanime
#7
Chapter 6: Oh God, Mary-Sues... hate them! I dislike it when the OC is perfect. I mean, do you know anyone who is pretty, has an IQ of 700 (aka super smart), virtually speaks ALL languages, is a magnet for hot boys and is popular, all at the same time? The answer is NO.
FullmetalTitan
#8
Chapter 8: Mhmmm...I personally like mpreg but to each their own XD This could be very useful to those who have no idea how to write . Hell I've been writing it for awhile and it's difficult to get right .___. I hope to become better at it someday.
FullmetalTitan
#9
Chapter 3: *patience* stupid typos...
FullmetalTitan
#10
Chapter 3: I have a LJ account though I haven't been on it...oh gosh since last year I think. It's not that I dislike it, I just feel more comfortable on AFF is all ^^ And yeah, there are bad stories on here...but there's also good ones. People just need to have patients is all. They'll find a good fic on here I'm sure.

I just dislike it, when people praise LiveJournal like it's a God or something. It's just like every other site out there and so is AFF. You'll find cringe worthy fics on both sites and good ones :3