Greyskies Review and Beta Shop [Open for REVIEWS ONLY]

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Welcome to greyskies's Review and Beta Shop. I'll gladly review and beta any stories you ask me to, so long as you fulfill these requirements:

1. I would prefer that you didn't ask me to review long chaptered stories ( chapters/35,000+words). Not because I don't like chaptered stories (I do like them), but purely due to time constraints. I don't have the time to go to school, do homework, study, write, and read a crazy long story AND write about it. That's not to say that I won't review them, because if I've read it before, then I won't have to reread it. Please ask me if you want me to review a chaptered story, there is a chance that I will ^^

2. I will not beta read stories that are already in-process. For example, if you want me to beta read a chaptered story that you've already written and posted ten chapters for, it would be rather irritating to read those ten chapters and edit and give advice on things that have already been done. If you need me as a replacement for a previous beta, that's fine. Just talk to me first ^^

3. I will not review incomplete stories or sequels. It just doesn't make sense. All book reviewers, movie reviewers, and whatever reviewers always judge based on the finished product. I will also not read sequels, because 99% of the time I won't have read the original story first.

4. I would prefer beta reading/reviewing stories that are about groups that I'm more familiar with (B.A.P, Beast, BIGBANG, EXO, MBLAQ, SHINee, there's probably more but if you look through my stories you can probably figure out which groups I know better) because knowing the characters helps me to better grasp the story. Currently, I'd prefer reading EXO and B.A.P stories, but you can still request for any.

5. I don't care if it's a 'you' story, 'oc' story, , whatever. I'm pretty open to reading any genre, be it romance, angst, drama, , whatever.

6. If you ask me to review your story, then proceed to complain about what I've said, you will be blacklisted. If you asked for my opinion, you have no right to complain about what I think.

7. I'm fine with beta reading or reviewing stories from any site, be it tumblr, livejournal, aff, whatever. If you would prefer to contact me regarding beta reading on tumblr or lj instead of using aff, my tumblr is greyskieslatenights and my lj is greyskies268. Reviews will still be posted on here, though, just to keep it all in one place. Please either PM me your email so I can send you the finished edit, or you can temporarily make me a co-author on your story so I can paste the text when I'm done. I will hide the chapter so that you can look it over before you post it.

8. I reserve the right to choose the stories that I want to review/beta read. I'm not trying to insult you if I reject you, but I may not have time to beta your story. Also, if I'm not particularly interested in the group/know much about the group, my review will most likely not be too great, or I may not catch errors that someone better-versed in that fandom would.

9. Please make certain that you leave a form before PMing me about a beta request. There is no guarantee that I will accept straight off the bat. You need a confirmation from me first.

10. To make sure that you've read the requirements, please put 'Joah' in the password section.

11. You don't have to credit me for beta reading, but it would be nice ^^

Beta reading: I will read through your story, edit it, and provide feedback on what I think is good and what needs to be worked on more.

Reviews: I will read through your story and give it a score out of 100 (letter grade) based on:
Plot, Character Development, Spelling+Grammar, Layout, and overall opinion.
Each of the above will be given a score out of 10.
I will try my best not to be unnecessarily harsh on some things; however I won't try and sugarcoat everything to make you feel better.

If you would like to request, please use the following form:

request type [beta or review]:
story title:
story link [if requesting a review]:
short summary [please include genre and characters]:
word count [it's okay just to leave an approximate]:
password:

I will approve/deny requests with a reply, then you can PM me more information about where to send your story or whatever specific questions pertaining to your story you may have,

All reviews will be posted in this story, and I will wall-post the author when your review has been posted. Stories that I've beta read will not be posted in chapters, but will be included in links in the Table of Contents in the Foreword.

Thank you for reading, and I look forward to reading your stories ^^

Foreword

Table of Contents:

Reviews:

Don't Leave by 1stRateDreamer (B.A.P: Daehyun/OC) [review]
Don't go into the bounce house by stopgirl44 (Exo) [review]
Mercy 자비 by pandamwah (Exo, Kris/Lay-centric) [review]
Insecure by BabyLovesToTo (B.A.P, Yongguk/Himchan) [review]
Almost by retrea (EXO: Baekhyun/Chanyeol, Chanyeol/Luhan, Luhan/Sehun) [review]
Summer Camp 2013 by jdh0928 (B.A.P: Daehyun/OC) [review]
Best Absolute Perfect Warriors by jamdii (B.A.P) [review]
To Seduce the Unwilling by SoaringCliche (Beast: Yoseob/Kikwang) [review]
Key to Her Soul by KatyMikayla (Super Junior: Donghae/OC, Exo: Luhan/Sehun) [review]
Circles by NaarrMonster (Exo: Luhan/Lay, other side pairings) [review]
Requiescat In Pace by anneistee (2PM: Junho/OC) [review]
the rain of sound by exothermc (B.A.P: Daehyun-centric) [review]
Krasivaya by PeculiarSowon (SNSD/EXO: YoonA/Kai) [review]
Angel Of Death by BabyLovesToTo (B.A.P: Daehyun/Youngjae) [review]

Beta Read Stories:

I Changed You by saranghaedongho (Teen Top: Niel, Chunji, L. Joe, OC)

Affiliates:

Pastel Love Request Shop

greyskieslatenights
[greyskies review+beta] 5/1: New review added

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gonexx #1
can i hire a permanent beta?
illumina_dain #2
request type : review
Story title : The Grandmaster
Story Link : http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/706970/the-grandmaster-fantasy-exo-kai-luhan-sehun-kyungsoo
Short Summary : Fantasy, Action?, Supernatural.

Everyday, they walk the same path we walk
Everyday, they use the same language that we do
Everyday, they breath the same air with us
But
They have something we don't have
They use something we can't even imagine to have
They can do anything
And ...
They have lived among us for centuries
They are The Grandmaster

Sehun, Kyungsoo, Luhan, Jongin

Word count : around 5000 (per chapter, it's only 5 chapter so far, so around 25000 in total)
Joah
softmist
#4
request type [beta or review]: review~
story title: Flower Child
story link [if requesting a review]: http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/344495/flower-child-c-o-m-p-l-e-t-e-contest-romance-tragedy-flower-luhan
short summary [please include genre and characters]:

Romance, Fantasy, Tragedy; Yoonhae turns an easter lily into a boy (Luhan) and while they grew up inseparable, they grew apart when Luhan and Yoonhae hit high school. As Luhan slowly forgets to care and love Yoonhae, Yoonhae is forced to believe that Luhan hasn't forgotten his transformer.

Main: Luhan, OC Character; Side: Oh Sehun, Kim Jongin

word count [it's okay just to leave an approximate]: 23,000 - 25,000 ish words? it's like 1,500 and under per chapter
password:joaaaah
vrendezvous #5
request type [beta or review]: review
story title: Teru Teru Bozu
story link [if requesting a review]: http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/448272/teru-teru-bozu-myungsoo-romance-suzy-myungzy
short summary [please include genre and characters]:
A story about a girl who loves the rain yet craves for sunlight.

characters: Myungsoo (L) and Su Ji (Suzy)
word count [it's okay just to leave an approximate]: 4,209
password: Joah
MissyQ
#6
request type [beta or review]: Review
story title: Final Call
story link [if requesting a review]: http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/428461
short summary [please include genre and characters]: She didn't want to die knowing she couldn't tell him she loved him.

That was all she wanted.

Nothing less, nothing more.
Featuring Kai and OC.
word count [it's okay just to leave an approximate]: Exactly 3328 (Excluding A/N at the bottom)
password: Joah
douxsoleil #7
Chapter 14: Thank you for the review, I will make sure to take notes from your review. :))
douxsoleil #8
request type :review
story title:Krasivaya
story link :http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/357691/krasivaya-angst-snsd-yoona-kai-yoonkai-exoshidae
short summary :angst, romance, slice of life. Kim Jongin, Im Yoona. How a person could change drastically when she is on the brink of death.
word count :around 1000 or less
password:Joah
exothermc
#9
Chapter 13: thank you for the review! i am so honored to get an A. i'll credit once i'm on my computer.

thank you again!