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` ✼ exotic grounds — graphic reviews
✼syauol
05.04.13
impression (17/20) - it looks a little messy and bright, but its fine.
fonts and colors (13/20) - the colours you used matches the mood, but i think that its a little too bright. For the font, "SECRET" shouldn't have a line through it, it looks messy that way. But the words beside "TOP", is it supposed to be included in the title? Because I searched the story up in ButterfluShida's fanfics and the title for it was "TOP SECRET". I suggest that if the words beside "TOP" isn't in the title, you should put it somewhere else, since I thought that it was in the title. I couldn't really read those words too.
textures/stocks (16/20) - the texture on the upper left guy is unessasary. I couldn't really see his face, so I think you should remove it :)
pictures (23/25) - the pictures were good, nothing to elaborate on that. It looks a little messy, but i don't think there was another way to put it.
overall (11/15) - awesome :)
bonus (2/5)
82/100!
this is reviewed by xhiimee (previously babycorn) if you are confused ^_^
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