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`✼EXOTIC04
03.03.13
impression (12/20) - i honestly can't see the horror side of the poster. sure, it's drak enough to be an angst poster, but horror? no. it's also a bit messy and crowded.
fonts and colors (16/20) - the colors seem okay. it kinda fits the themes. the problem, i think, is the fonts used. that font from death note does add a little horror to it, but the font you used for 'angel' isn't really appropriate. you could have used a better, simpler font. when you're in doubt of using a font, it's always best to end up with simple fonts. they may look plain, but they go well with almost any themes.
textures/stocks (15/20) - i'm seeing too much layers. you should have not added the wings there. but if you really wanted to, you should have put only one wing and make it bigger. also, the brush there sort of blocked the title. it should be placed at the bottom of the text.
pictures (19/25) - kris' picture was okay, since it's a bit scary. but you should have blended it better. the girl's pictures aren't that good. you should have taken one away. i can also see a screencap of kris' teaser. that one is better if it was bigger. and the arrangement is messy. putting kris' and the girl's picture inside the diamond and kris' teaser outside of it would look better, i guess.
overall (10/15) - so, yeah. one of the theme wasn't obvious. but it's okay. at least you were about to show the other one. about the pictures, try to keep them of the same tone. that's what i always do, and it'll make the graphic better.
bonus (2/5)
74/100!
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