` ✼ Rin_Moonstar
` ✼ exotic grounds — graphic reviews
✼Rin_Moonstar
05.3.13
impression (17/20) - peaceful, but the color could use more touching up on.
fonts and colors (13/20) - the font of "Be Happy!" could be a little bigger since it doesn't really attract attention, and I think that "dasom" is a little unessasary since for a poster, you shouldn't put names on it unless you're making it as a character chart. The credits has a good font. About the color, it looks peaceful and nice. but i think you should add more color to make it more attractive, maybe peach?
textures/stocks (16/20) - I'm not sure if you used textures but I think it would be better if you include some. I think the frame that dasom is in is unessasary too. Either you remove the frame or the thing behind dasom.
pictures (21/25) - the picture of dasom suits the mood and theme of the poster, as I think you're trying to make the poster have a beach kind of feeling, a peaceful and nice feeling, so its not bad, but the background of the sea and sky, its really lq. I think you should use hq pictures, as not many people like lq pictures.
overall (11/15) - just the font.
bonus (2/5)
80/100!
this is reviewed by xhiimee (previously babycorn) if you are confused ^_^
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