` ✼ babycorn
` ✼ exotic grounds — graphic reviews
`✼BABYCORN
03.13.13
impression (14/20) - at first glance, it wasn't really angsty and mysterious. the colors were gloomy, but the pictures didn't convince me that those were your moods. it was pretty good, though.
fonts and colors (15/20) - the colors were just right, but they didn't compliment with the pictures used. the font was okay, but you should have made the text darker to make it noticeable. it also has something to do with the way you placed the texts. i suggest you to play with vintage-looking fonts, or cursive one. they work best in angst posters.
textures/stocks (14/20) - the frame was okay, you just have to cut it better, or find another frame that is easier to cut. the texture was also great, though it looks a bit plain. add some graininess in it.
pictures (18/25) - lay's picture wasn't really the best choice. well, i saw some issues on the way you cut it, but really, the picture itself didn't blend with the mood. it would have been better if you made it old-looking, or turned it to grayscale, just like the girl's picture.
overall (10/15) - so, yeah. cutting is one of the hardest thing to do. don't worry, you'll be able to master it soon. but if nothing works, just blend it with the textures. it's angsty, so it doesn't matter if you'll just use blending.
bonus (2/5)
73/100!
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