Unveiling the Assassin

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P.I. Kim Jaejoong knows keeping personal copies of evidence; falling for and endangering a civilian in the course of his job; and almost getting himself and those close to him killed on various occasions are just things that one shouldn't do.  Unfortunately, that doesn't keep such things from happening when the case he's investigating is the assassination of his parents.  An assassination he was mere moments too late in preventing and during which he got only a brief glimpse of their killer.

Of course, tall, lithe and completely hidden in shadow isn't exactly a prime description for locating a possible suspect which leads him to the sprawling city of New York.  Working in conjunction with the NYPD, he begins to investigate the three top corporations and suspects who had the most to gain over the death of his parents and finds himself getting in over his head.

When the chips finally fall on the figurative gambling table, it's hard to say if anyone will get away unscathed, least of all himself.

Foreword

                Jaejoong paced back and forth in his hotel room, unable to sit still for the nervous energy coursing through him.  Not only because he’d foolishly invited Changmin to actually come visit him, but also because of everything that was running through his mind in regards to the case.  It didn’t help that he really wasn’t supposed to have told anyone else other than Kyuhyun where he was staying but here he was, with his upstairs neighbor and sort of… really good friend?  Were they at relationship status yet?

                Sure they’d kissed a couple times, which of course felt amazing, and Changmin wanted to give them a try, despite the fact that Jaejoong himself was a private investigator thoroughly enmeshed in the case and the dangers therein, as evidenced by that ridiculous break-in the other day.  Fortunately nothing truly bad had come of it, but it simply reinforced the fact that he never should have agreed to go on that trip with Changmin to the Statue of Liberty…

                “Are you going to pace all night?” Changmin asked in a bemused tone, seated on the edge of the bed with his elbows propped on his knees and his chin resting on his folded hands.

                “Maybe,” Jaejoong responded immediately, though he finally stopped walking in circles and turned to face the younger male who looked at him with such trust and adoration.  He really was a terrible person for bringing him into this.  Reluctantly, he finally convinced himself to sit down next to Changmin and look over at him with focused eyes, searching the younger male’s face intently.

                Changmin reached over to grasp the nearest hand resting in Jaejoong’s lap, threading their fingers together.  “You can talk to me, Jae.  You know that, right?”

                “I know…” Jaejoong sighed heavily, letting his shoulders slump though his hand tightened on Changmin’s reflexively.  “It’s just that I’ve already involved you in this more than I should have, Minnie.  It’s irresponsible and reckless and-”

                His rant was ended abruptly when Changmin captured his chin and leaned over to claim his lips in a tender kiss, rendering conversation impossible.  “And you’re human, Jae,” he finally whispered, keeping their lips close together so his breath ghosted over the other male’s cheek.  “Talk to me,” he stated again softly, shifting his hand to cup the smooth cheek instead.

                There was no denying he wanted to.  Oh god how he wanted to share with someone else everything he’d been keeping in, even from Kyuhyun and his former boss.  It was damnably difficult holding on to everything by himself.  Truly, it was.  “Minnie,” he murmured softly, his eyes searching the chocolate orbs before him hopefully.  “I…”

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****Excellent poster done by s3xyangel at Exotic Dreamers Poster Shop.  Go request now!  haha****

 

Review done by ℰxoxo ↻ Graphics // Story Review Shop by macchiato. ~~  96/110  These guys are excellent.  I would highly recommend them if you're looking for a solid and in-depth review.  Thanks again!

Review of the finished story done by eunhyuksgal at Forbidden Dreamers Poster Shop.  ~  92/100 "...mindblowingly creative plot with strong detailed story-telling. Impressive.

This story has also been entered into The Lion's Den Writing Contest for a Long Story entry.

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Submitted to The New Library of recommendation fics.

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-Tigress-
#1
Can you temporarily make this one text selectable just so I don't have to write out your entire description for the Library? LOL
Mayia-chan #2
Chapter 31: ;AAAAA; I don't even know from where to start.
LOL the end of the story is so frustrating I'm crying OTL.
I really really really love this fanfic. I honestly don't know what to say or how to describe it...it's just...so perfect idk. Especially that JaeMin is one of my favourite pairings, and that the story involves my favourite idols lol...
Gah. Plus your writing skills are amazing!!
Good job, really :D
Fighting!! <3
eunhyuksgal
#3
Chapter 31: omg im finally done! will do up ur review soon; this is some personal comments as a fan wheee:

I LOVE that Super Junior is in this story, I know them pretty well so its easier for me to judge characters and story and stuff haha

Anyway just a couple of questions (sorry if im being dumb)

- what else is jaejoong (and co) investigating apart from the murder of his parents?
- what exactly is the higher ups planning?
- what does the documents contain exactly; and they werent supposed to kill jaejoong right/

AND OMG IMMA KILL U FOR KILLING OFF SO MANY SUJU BOYS hahahaha poor cho kyuhyun
epiktraveller
#4
Chapter 31: oh nuuu its finish already!!! i hate the feeling of happiness and sadness when a fic ends. ;_______;

you have done a great job in connecting all the loose ends. well done! so Zico had the contract all this while isnt it? that brat! hahaahha and he was the only person who did not come out on the news. sneaky brat indeed. but i love him and his colorful persona. :D

once again, congrates on finishing this and thank you so much for sharing it. hopefully can see more of your work soon. ;D
epiktraveller
#5
Chapter 30: REVENGE IS SHWEETT!!!! way to go tabi!now ji can rest in peace. C:
sCeNeBLUETattoo #6
Chapter 31: Nicely done! You tied up all the loose ends without batting an eye. I like the way you ended everything. You kept everything realistic and I truly liked that. Life rarely hands you a "rides off into the sunset" ending. It's more like you get the crap kicked out of you and you have to make the best of it. That's why I like your stories. They are REAL even when they are set in an alternate universe or slightly different perspective of reality, like in "Through the Ages." (See what I did there?! Shameless plug of one of my favorite stories here on AFF!) ;p Now I'm sad that this one's over... BUT that just means I get to look forward to another one! LOL. Again, nicely done.
rjaejoo #7
Chapter 31: Lol. Wow the end. Im kind of liking how it ends. Still flows with the story, great job. :)
sCeNeBLUETattoo #8
Chapter 30: Wonderful update... but I'm still sulking in the corner. Don't mind me though, good authors are supposed to tap into emotions and readers don't have to like how things play out...
sCeNeBLUETattoo #9
Chapter 29: Excellent update. However, this cliff hanger merits TWO wet noodles you know. **Wanders off to go sulk in the corner until the next update.**
Ktikat1991
#10
Chapter 29: MINNIE!!!! :((