fashionista-gurl ; My Byuntae Butler, Kris!

• Title [5/5] :
• It makes the readers interested to read the story, is definitely passing the score for the title, because the title fits the descrpition of the story, and it sounds interesting for your readers to read. Good job on it. :)

• Foreword/Description [9/10]
• I am definitely a kris-biased here. But I am not trying to be biased, the foreword is simple yet easy to understand. It matches the title very well unlike other stories I graded. Even just a few sentences, you make the readers wanting to read now. I was getting excited when I was reading. Bascially, I read first then I reviewed you.

• Appearance [4/5] :
• This really does lost you marks here. Your designer who designed the main poster for you did not even added the 'exclamation' mark for you on the poster. This makes you lost 0.5 mark then, it didn't really fit a Butler and Mistress theme. Soora's picture does not fit an elegant and spoilt rich kid. The ulzzang is okay, but you should find the ulzzang with an elegant clothing making it look like a Mistress. Kris picture is okay so I am counting the marks as 4/5.

• Plot [15/15] :
• I friggin love your plot! It was awesuum ;_; It was soooooo interesting that I continued reading like friggin mad. There is some mysterious part like Sehun's secret and like what will happen to Soora and Kris when Kris steps in the scene? And things like that (: And I really friggin love how you keep the characters as a secret *smirks*.

• Originality [14/15] :
• It is very original, i read some butlers stories, but this is the most interesting one out of all the butlers stories I read.^^

• Spelling/Grammar [18/20] :
• There is some few errors like 'eddition' when you typed 'addition'. There is one awkward sentence like,
• "You ran off with renewed speed."
• Maybe, you could write like 'After thanking amen, you ran off with renewed speed."
• You don't have to write Soora's feelings too like 'excitement' it will be weird, and definitely a bit awkward. So try brainstorming for new ideas on sentences to make it long not too short like, 'You ran off with renewed speed'.

• Flow [9/10] :
• Your flow was great, just keep in mind on the feelings part.

• Characters [10/10] :
• I like the part when you gave a mysterious image on Sehun's secret. I am really excited on that. You give your readers a great thinking on what will happen to those love triangles and stuffs like that.

• Overall Enjoyment [10/10] :
• I really do not regret on reading this story because bascially, I am a kris-biased :D And I sounded so biased, LOL, I just loved the way you make comedies like 'VIP tickets' and LOL at the kidnapping part. I definitely give a high score on it not because it is a kris story, because is funny, entataining. And your writing skills are superb. And I totally didn't regretted subscribing it:D

• Score : 95/100
• Marking Scores Grading Sheet :
• 91 and above - A*
• 85-90 - A+
• 75-84 - A
• 74-69 - B+
• 68-63 - B
• 62-60 - B-
• 59-54 - C+
• 54-50 - C
• 50-40 - D
• 40-1 - U graded.

You got 95 marks out of 100, you got an A*. You have achieved on the Top 3 Section on our Shop. Up-vote and subscribe have given when you have been featured on the 'Top 3 Section'.

reviewed by kris-wifey; ordinary review shop

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