StrawberryBallerina; EXO's Anti Fan

• Title [4/5]: The title fits the plot very much and you have illustrated in the plot how the story itself relates to the title but some other titles could have been good and some (four to five) stories has the word Anti Fan on it.

• Foreword/Description [7/10]: Since foreword/description (for me) is connected the plot and spelling/grammar, I could say that it’s really a promising fic in the future and will always make the readers beg for more.

• Appearance [2/5]: The poster is good except that for my taste, it’s a bit too bright. And the background use for the title is light blue and it’s a bit irritating to the eyes. It could have been dark orange or dark blue. And I couldn’t see the quotation on top, and I have to squint my eyes just to see it. But the poster is nice and clean :)

• Plot [13/15]: Since you’ve given out the prologue and Chapter One, I can see it’s a promising story in the near future. I’ll be looking forward for the story :)

• Originality [13/15]: The story isn’t like any other stories out there, but I have seen some (maybe a two or three) of this kind of fic.

• Spelling/Grammar [18/20]: Found a few mistakes on spelling and I’ve noticed that you’ve often end the sentence before the preposition. It’s okay to do that but don’t often use them because it can sometimes confuse the readers. And that’s all I found in the main page and Chapter One.

• Flow [9/10]: Haven’t seen the full storyline, but I could sense some nice and smooth flow of the story in the future ^^

• Characters [8/10]: The characters are nice and well-explained. And what I’m just needing is a bit more twist and originality on the background/description of the characters. And since I haven’t seen the development and full storyline of the fic, I won’t judge the characters hard for now. I’ll be looking forward for the storyline.

• Overall Enjoyment [8/10]: I can’t say it for now, but because I have seen some storyline like this; my enjoyment for the fic is decreased, but if you will put a twist and thrill on the fic; my mind and feelings for the story would surely change.

• Score [82/100]
Reviewer's Note: Hello~ Cherry here :) Sorry if it’s such a low score. I haven’t seen the whole story yet, so I can’t give you a proper score. Sorry… ;A; But, if you will be able to make 4 to 5 chapters, I’ll be gladly be able to give you a proper scoring for your story. Thank you for requesting me as your reviewer. Hoping to see you again! Come back again! ^^

• Score : 82/100
• Marking Scores Grading Sheet :
• 91 and above - A*
• 85-90 - A+
• 75-84 - A
• 74-69 - B+
• 68-63 - B
• 62-60 - B-
• 59-54 - C+
• 54-50 - C
• 50-40 - D
• 40-1 - U graded.

You got 82 marks out of 100, you got an A. :)

reviewed by cherrylisa; ordinary review shop

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