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• Title [0/5]: What can I say? I don't get the title at all and I don't think it actually matches the story. Maybe you could try something more legit to be a title? AND without the emoji(as I call it) and that means the heart and the brackets. I know you want it to look better but PLEASE use a legit title. Thank you.

• Foreword/Description[5/10]: There wasn't even a foreword but the description was good. I liked it.

• Plot[13/15]: The plot was a little confusing but that's all I guess.

• Spelling/Grammar[8/20]: Your grammar isn't that great and your spelling had some typos, especially 'loser' and 'diarrhoea'. You spelled these two words wrongly, other than that, your spelling was fine. As for your grammar, I can't do much about it because there are too many errors so just leave it as it is. It's still forgivable.

• Flow[5/10]: It just really went too fast. There were parts that I didn't understand because it was so fast and, since there was time skipping, I would suggest you put '---------' or something similar so that readers don't get confused. I understand that you did put a REALLY huge spacings between these paragraphs but, it would be better to put what I had suggested above so it wouldn't be a pain to scroll.

• Characters[5/10]: It wasn't much of describing your characters but I could understand their different statuses in money.

• Overall Enjoyment[4/10]: Meh... I didn't enjoy it that much. It was too confusing for me.

• Total Score: [42/100]

• Marking Scores Grading Sheet: 
• 91 and above - A* 
• 85-90 - A+ 
• 75-84 - A 
• 74-69 - B+ 
• 68-63 - B 
• 62-60 - B- 
• 59-54 - C+ 
• 54-50 - C 
• 50-40 - D 
• 40-1 - U graded

You scored 42/100, you got a D, I'm sorry!

reviewed by iluvboyfriend; ordinary review shop

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