Chapter 11

Undying Love

 

~~Days passed and she kept on talking to me…

She told me stories, she told me her life…

I am loving every bit of herself.

 

Why is she doing this to me? Why doesn’t she just leave me and talk to her friends?

I am confident that one day she will get tired and just leave me alone.

But that day never come.

I always give her the cold treatment. Always staring at her with sharp eyes, pretending that I am not listening to anything that she’s saying but the truth is…

 

I love everything about her…

I love how she smiles…

I love how she kept on talking to me even though I don’t reply…

I love how she always cheers me everyday…

I love her.

 

But I know I can’t, I know I shouldn’t, that is why I kept on avoiding her but she never learned.

 

And then on our way to school, she said something that I never expected.

She started talking about her lovelife! Hetalked about this certain senpai, but I don't know who he is.

And finally she said “I really love him so much. I have never loved a person like him. He is very special to me.”

 

My heart started aching.

I know that it shouldn’t, but I can’t help it.

I thought that the person that she loved is only me.

I want to cry... I want her to explain it to me but I don’t want to be hurt. 

I hate her for that. Why does she make me fall for her? Why does she love someone else?

 

I ignored her a lot more during the following days…

And then one day she entered my room. I really planned to ignore her but she asked “Are you jealous of him”

What..?? Does she figured out that I am in love with her?

She kept on asking questions and I just shot death glances on her hoping that she will just leave my room but then, the tone of her voice changed.

 

“Ne Niichan, do you know how much I love you? The first time I met you I said to myself ‘what a cute being!’ It’s true! I told myself that I am lucky that I have you as my brother. Even though you always ignored me, you have a special place here in my heart, and no one will ever take that place because you… You are very special to me”

 

You are very special to me…

You are very special to me…

You are very special to me…

 

Those words kept echoing in my head…

I’m confused, does she love me or not? But those words made me really happy.

 And I smiled. She smiled too. A truly romantic moment.

She looked so happy and I was happy too. I hope the time will stop. I hope I can stay with her like this for the rest of my life.

And then we started laughing. I love that side of her, I guess I can easily sway her emotions. Our hearts are beating as one…

 

But then the doorbell rang…

What the hell? Who is that?

Ruining my perfect moment with my stepsister! I followed her downstairs but I just peeked at the door.

I heard her tell the visitor’s name and it hit me…

It was her first love. Why is this happening? Is this destiny’s trick?

 

They went out and I followed them…

 

I know that the guy loves Nina, there’s no doubt in that.

 

I followed them inside the restaurant and I heard it…

His confession to her… I am surprised of what I have heard.

No… Please say no…

 

But she said…

“Yes senpai, I will be your girlfriend”

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MatsuNiChii
#1
thanks for reading and commenting kachan!!! <3 <3

Ai____eru yo!! ^___^
momohoshi
#2
Chapter 29: what a nice story...!!!!! i soooooo love this nak...!! this is just perfect...! though it is a bit tragic to the part of nina since all her relatives died but still, love find its way to tend her broken heart...and yuri(the stepbro) was right, they were just inside that heart and watching and loving you...


ow shems...! i can't hold my tears anymore...this story really went through me...!*sobs*

i can imagine the feeling of having all your loved ones being gone...and chinen yuri was your real guardian angel here nak...

i oh-so love this fic...!!!! i love this soooooooo much...!!!!!!!
momohoshi
#3
Chapter 28: UWAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAH...!! TT^TT

nak...! you made me cry in this chappy...really...!*sobs*
so that was the true story...! gomen ne chii for being mad at you a while ago...so you were not really bad after all...*wipes tears*

i never thought that their story would be like that...how on earth did you though about that nak...?it was so heart-touching and the part where yuri(the stepbro) sacrificed his heart, that broke my heart...! <////3
oh no...why am i being so emotional here...huhuhu TT^TT

i just so love this chappy...i love this...! i love this...! i love this...!!!!!
momohoshi
#4
Chapter 27: uwaaaaaaaah~

this is so mysterious nak...i love mysterious types of stories...this is really getting so excited...! not i'll get the explanation that i'm waiting for when i read the next chappy...hahaha
momohoshi
#5
Chapter 26: a;ldkajdaj;ldaj;ldls;laskak;


OW MY...! well, i can say that Chii here has two sides of him...i see the silent type chinen yuri and the noisy type chinene yuri...but what's best for him is to be the noisy one...! i'm not used to the silent-type yuri...hahaha xD


and the last part...!!! how mysterious of him...!

"Nina...I finally know where your brother is...He is here...Inside me"


shems...!!!!! i'm so hooked to this nak...!
momohoshi
#6
Chapter 25: EMERGEEEEEEE...! EMERGEEEEEEEEEE...! EMERGEEEEEEEEEEEEE...! NAAAAAAAAAAAK...!!!!!

this is such a kawaii chappy...! i can imagine Chinen pouting as he said "you are such a stubborn girl" kawaii na~

and he even gave you his email...! kyaaaaah~
momohoshi
#7
Chapter 24: hahaha

laptrip in "pretending-to-be-my-imouto-chan" thingy...!!!!! hahaha xD

i can imagine him saying that with his cute voice...! hahaha xD


and the last part...!!!! emergeeeeeeeeeeehd...! jxakj;d;;dldld;lksdl

"I think I am starting to get attracted to you"

emergeeeeeeeeeeeeeh...! Chinen Yuriiiii...!!!!!! hahaha xD
momohoshi
#8
Chapter 24: hahaha

laptrip in "pretending-to-be-my-imouto-chan" thingy...!!!!! hahaha xD

i can imagine him saying that with his cute voice...! hahaha xD


and the last part...!!!! emergeeeeeeeeeeehd...! jxakj;d;;dldld;lksdl

"I think I am starting to get attracted to you"

emergeeeeeeeeeeeeeh...!
momohoshi
#9
Chapter 24: hahaha

laptrip in "pretending-to-be-my-imouto-chan" thingy...!!!!! hahaha xD

i can imagine him saying that with his cute voice...! hahaha xD


and the last part...!!!! emergeeeeeeeeeeehd...! jxakj;d;;dldld;lksdl

"I think I am starting to get attracted to you"

emergeeeeeeeeeeeeeh...!
momohoshi
#10
Chapter 23: TT^TT

the news about your dead parents were really heart-breaking...! come to think about that...! you've been separated to them, not knowing what the heck happened to them and now you'll hear this news that they were dead...!!! <///3

super mixed-emotions right now nak...a while ago i was about to cry at the news about your parents but now, i'm about to flail at the end part of this chappy...hahaha