Broken Hearts

Pieces of My Heart

When I found Krystal she was sleeping alone on a park bench. I could see the tears dried on her face as I sat down quietly next to her feet. I was afraid to wake her up for fear of her remembering her hurt. At least when she was asleep she wouldn't feel it. I waited like this for a half hour before I finally woke her for fear of freezing to death.

"Hey, I heard what happened.." I said gently. She immediately began to cry and laid her head on my lap, not answering. I saw something clutched in her hand.

"Krystal what's that?" I asked pulling her fist toward me. She violently ripped her hand away and threw whatever it was across the park into the darkness.

"I don't want to look at it." she sobbbed.

"Let's get you home, ok?" I helped her up and began to walk her to my car. She quickly fell back asleep once in my passenger seat. I began to drive her home. Once at her house I helped her up to her room and into her bed. On the way out, I locked her door. Once to my car, I tried to decide what to do. My phone suddenly buzzed with a message from Hyosung asking if I wanted to hang out. I answered her and headed to her house.

"Hey girl." she greeted when I entered her room.

"Hey."

"So how was Krystal's thingy with Junhyung? She never answered my text."

"They broke up." I sighed.

"I knew it." Hyosung smirked evilly. "I never liked him. You know, you guys should listen to me more often. I know men. I can tell you who deserves you and who doesn't. I also know ho you do and don't deserve. Go head, appeal to my knowledge."

"I'm not in the mood for this Hyosung." I flopped down onto her bed.

"I am. But whatever. We never talk about what I want. Wanna hear some good news?"

"Sure.. Lets hear it."

"David and I are official.." She winked at me. "Do you think it's too soon to rub it in Krystal's face?"

"Yes. Hyosung, come on. If you are going to keep being like this I'm going to go home. I am happy for you and all, but I am not happy about what Junhyung did to Krystal."

"God, you'd think you were the one broken up with."

"She's my friend, I hurt for her."

"You don't hurt for me." Hyosung whined.

"I do too Hyosung and you know it" I swear she was being like this just because the focus wasn't on her.

"I'm sorry." Finally Hyosung was going to stop being so moody. When she appologized were some of the moments I cherished in our friendship. She very rarely appologized, only when she knew I was at the end of my rope. It wasn't the appology I was after, but what followed. Hyosung would spend the rest of the evening being the friend I needed at that moment. Her generosity and vulnerablity didn't show for anyone. I was the only one who recieved this special treatment. "Will you stay here tonight? We can paint our nails and watch a movie.

" Hyosung asked nervously, even though she knew I would accept. I always did.

"Of course." I gave her a small smile as she jumped up off the bed to get her nail polish.

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inspiritdawn
#1
Great story!
sooboo #2
Chapter 6: hyokwang??????
JustHyunafan
#3
Chapter 6: I really like the friendship between Hyuna Krystal and Hyosung.
ToAnyonevip
#4
Chapter 6: WOOOH YOU UPDATED.
There are alot of fics that don't update often and I lose interest after a while but for some reason I'm still hooked and I just really lile this fic haha.
Nikki4b2uty
#5
Chapter 5: I knew it! No one is ever that nice just because they love someone. Poor Krystal, and now Hyuna is running around like a crazy person just to find her!
Nikki4b2uty
#6
Chapter 4: I have a bad feeling about the junhyung/krystal thing! No guy I have ever met is sweet like that just beause they 'love someone' and how he acted after the dinner...idk. Finally we know a little about jay :) cant wait for the next chap!
Nikki4b2uty
#7
Chapter 3: Im here for the hyuna/jay side...i dont really know krystal...but im interested in seeing the hyuna and jay thing develop! :) update again soon!
cheap_imitation #8
Chapter 2: OMG. A Jay/Hyuna centred piece??! YES PLEASE. I AM HERE FOR THAT lol. They're my two ultimate biases so to have them potentially paired off (even if its fanfic) is making me all kinds of happy haha.
Ok, so overall I think your story and your writing style has heaps of potential. I love that I could feel the immediate "connection" between Hyuna and Jay. I do think it's a bit soon of her to go around saying that she has feelings for him because my impression is that she is simply very attracted and INTRIGUED by him. I would have liked you to play that up a bit more and really flesh out her confused feelings which you did make a great start with. Perhaps have a moment where she observes him and really takes a moment to sort her thoughts and feelings out.
I'm curious about Jay's "story" - surely there must be some reason behind him being bullied and ostracised and I can't wait to see where you take that. It's such a huge change from the overly confident and popular Jay Park in real life lol.
Hyosung is also a nice touch - I find that she was a bit over the top at times but I loved that she KNEW it and she owned up to it. That she pretty much admits she lashes out and takes control and is mean because she feels inferior and insecure. I want to see what her "plan" is because I thought she'd have control issues and not want Hyuna and Jay together.
Kikwang is adorable and I'm really liking his friendship with Hyuna - I'm such a huge shipper of Jay/Hyuna that I don't really want to see any love triangles introduced hahaha. But yeh - I'd love to see more of him and Hyosung. It seems he's not afraid to call her out and I can see a bit of a hate/love relationship there.
I'll be sure to keep an eye on this story~ Please continue updating :) You're doing a great job so far!
Nikki4b2uty
#9
Chapter 2: Awww kikwang under your awkwardness you are really sweet. Ew hyosung lol a little humility wouldnt harm you. Update again soon!
Nikki4b2uty
#10
Chapter 1: Omg so far I love it. Hyuna shouldnt try so hard to find out the bad things in him. Instead she should get to know him...from him. I really dont want her to pick on him like the others. All fics make hyuna the bad girl and I love reading the ones that actually make her nice and kind! Im really looking forward to reading more...lol the conversation with kikwang was hilarious though! Please update again soon!