Gods kneel before our crime

Description

Youngmin struggles with almost everything in his live. Although he loves his twin brother – really loves him, the way people would point at him with disgusted looks on their faces and call him names if they’d know – he feels haunted by his younger brother.

When he said he wanted to become a singer, his brother suddenly would want to become one too. When he became a trainee, his brother became one too. When he had to color his hair, Kwangmin wanted to have the same hair color.

Not just that his brother always wanted to get the same things he got or to do the same things he did, Kwangmin always seemed and seems to be better at everything and left Youngmin with the feeling of being worthless.

Foreword

To be honest, I’m a little bit afraid. It’s not my very first story but my first story written in English and I’m not that confident of my skills.

What’s more, it’s actually a very sensitive theme I’m writing about, there’ll be a lot of self-pity and sadness, there’ll be problems like self-harm and anorexia. And there’ll be love between twins, so if you dislike any of this topics, I guess than you’re wrong here.

So, enough of harsh words, I’ll try my very best and hope you’ll like it.

Normally I don’t care for comments ‘cause I’m writing for myself in the first place, but since I’m trying something new, I really would appreciate it to have some reviews and some people telling me what I could make better.

risible
get my phone back 2day with all the data saved on it. so there'll be an update this week

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Anny79604
#1
Chapter 7: is this story still continuing???
i'd like to continue it
youngkwanghyunjo #2
Chapter 7: when will we
see the next chapter?
kaijin1582 #3
Chapter 7: i've read all your chapters. Thanks for making this story. It's exactly what had been in my mind for many times after read some facts. And I'm glad you put it all in words very well (ignore all mistakes) XD
I've been thinking of making one too but yours is better. the fact that he always praise his twin who doing better than him. he has many reasons to be jealous but instead he cares, loves, and protects him well. all his shortcomings you pointed it well too. and it's better with the cutting and eating disorder. i wonder if you will continue this story? i really really love it ^____^

(english isn't my first language too so sorry for grammar mistakes)
newtokpop09 #4
Chapter 7: I wish you would update soon!!!!! I've been following this story since the beginning!!!<3
qazwert #5
Chapter 7: ♥♥
Nice storyline~
healing_inicorn
#6
Chapter 7: omg awesome pls fighting and update! <3
FlamingMe
#7
Chapter 7: awh <\3 update soon!!!
shineeexogg #8
Chapter 7: Update soon please! Although it's been like a year i'll wait patiently for the next chapter!! :)
rleemq #9
Chapter 7: please update soon!!! ~waiting patiently~