Ravenheart

Killer Heir
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Getting into the charity ball is nothing close to a problem for Max. He drives himself there in the Lamborghini he's borrowed from Yunho, one of the few thieves working at CS that he actually doesn't mind.

The valet bows and Max coolly hands him the keys without a backwards glance. He walks down the dark red carpet that's been laid out, keeping a careful eye out for Gyuri. A woman behind a stand at the entrance asks for his invitation. Max gives her his most charming smile as he hands her the invitation he fabricated earlier.

He is waved through and a moment later, he is standing at the top of a marble staircase. It overlooks an opulent lower floor that resembles an extravagant casino, with its rich carpet and huge chandeliers hanging from the high ceilings. People in fine dress are socialising in clusters on the lower floor and a bar running along one side of the room caters to the evening's lonelier patrons.

Max begins to make his way down the stairs so as not to draw more attention to himself from the stairs, where everyone can see him. Being a charity ball, the room is studded with wealthy figures; some he recognises, some he doesn't. Here and there he spots an heiress, but she's never the one he's looking for.

He can feel countless pairs of eyes glued on him as he strides through the room. At 6 foot 2, in a slim cut suit, many women regard him with interest as he passes. Max knows women well enough to know that each woman in the room's interest in him is fuelled by different motives and desires; some of them are interested in his money and some in his status, though some just want .

 Max both pities and is envious of their ignorance. None of them would ever have guessed who he really is, and rightfully so. There's a reason why T.O.P's thieves are the best in the industry. CS is unlike many other organisations, most of which don't train their thieves to think like spies and move like shadows, or be able to talk in silky tones to persuade even the most stubborn person. But at the same time, Max thinks that if he had the chance to be one of those who didn't even consider the possibility of trained, professional spy-like thieves, he would take it.

A woman carrying a silver tray offers him a drink. He's about to take one when he catches sight of the server's face. Max does a double take and almost forgets to keep his facial expression in check. "Nana?" he whispers in disbelief.

Nana winks at him. She's wearing the same short, sparkly dress as the rest of the other servers and if he didn't know her, she would have fit in perfectly. "Hey there, Max."

"Do you have a job here tonight, too?" he asks. It's a risky move, especially when so many people are present, but his question is innocent enough not to incite a curious response from anyone passing by.

Nana nods, looking him up and down with envy plain on her face. "You've got it easy," she says, eyeing his suit. "It's hard to get any information when I have to walk around the room with people barking at me to get them their stupid drinks." She makes a face. "Peasants."

Max chuckles. He and Nana trained together and he thinks of her as a good friend. He wants to stick around and talk for a little bit longer, but he knows he's talked to her for longer than he should have and should not have acknowledged her in

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oneoftheboys
[Killer Heir] sorry guys, but I've been so busy, so the update will be up tomorrow. Wednesday. Sorry! ^^;;

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cmacchiato #1
I just found this and maybe you should consider to continue this story because it is really good..
psycho_d
#2
I know i left comment more than 1 year ago, but can u pleaseeeeeeeeeee update this story :'(
Its too good to be abandoned just like this :'(
apocryphal
#3
Chapter 24: I have to start this and be faced with cliffhangers don't i? =="
psycho_d
#4
Chapter 24: hello !!! new subscriber here :)
u know what, i just found out your FF & i spend three day to finish read it... despite my hectic schedule (class, assignment submission, presentation, test) i still read it & now i can leave comment... yeayyyyy !!
your a brilliant author, with all the puzzle & mystery u include in this story... it just WOWWWWW!!! keep on updating !! fighting !!
vinmya86 #5
Chapter 24: yeay update after almost 7 months xD i'm really curiou about Changmin-Gyuri-Tao relationship in the end :)
fireteddy #6
Chapter 24: SEVEN MONTHS already? XDDDD Whoa no wonder I needed to read previous chapters to refresh all the scenes lololol~
But as usual, it's beautiful TvT~
I love, LOVE the way you illustrated the scenes, it's like a movie in my mind, frame by frame, moving elegantly <3
Still curious about my bby Fei, and I think that's not T.O.P on the phone at all, it could be her~XDDD *excited* UNLESS, of course, T.O.P isn't dead yet :3
Keep updating! FIGHTING!!
simba1 #7
i keep checkin into yours. hoping i'll find some update.
AhnCheonsa
#8
Chapter 23: dividing my comment up.
Fei fei is really cool but I wouldn't trust her at all. Such a sneaky and clever ulterior motive woman! Nighty night Zitao!

OMG OMG OMG THE REVEAL OF EVERYTHING! WOW SO MUCH THOUGHT WAS PUT INTO THIS AND I LOVE IT! YES YES! BRILLIANT!!! and lol TOP has evil guy disease. He's monologuing! xD oh noes Gyuri got him!

AND HOLY HOLY!!!! FEI FEI! ljksdhfkadlsjfgsdklfjgh sdfkvjh df

THIS WAS GREAT AND WORTH THE WAIT! OMG ILU <3
MORE PLEASE!!! AWESOME CHAPTER!
AhnCheonsa
#9
I've been so busy but I know a new chapter is out.. and I must read... and I will! Just need the time!! T^T
fireteddy #10
Chapter 23: OMG FEIIIIIIII- - - - -
IDK WHAT TO THINK ANYMOAAAARRR ;A;
YOU BROKE MY PREDICTIONS AND I THINK- - - okay I'll shut up now and wait for the next update. Great job!! XDDDD
oh and sorry for the late comment, been busy with life lately, final tests are coming and so on and so on~^^
Can't wait for the next update!!