when it happens, i'll be miles away

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One day, our children will ask about us.

They will ask how you got that scar above your eyebrow, what happened after that day at the juice bar, who you danced with at prom.

One day, our children will ask about us, and we’ll have to say that they wouldn’t exist if we had stayed together.

When they ask, show them this.

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Foreword

 

My ode to you three, because I’m finally ready.

Keeping with the theme, this will be in three parts.

Not sure when it will be finished!

 

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againagainagain #1
Chapter 3: I finally understand why it's bittersweet. Too little, too late. One's singular effort, misplaced or not, is never enough if the other has already decided to let go.
wolkefunf
#2
Chapter 3: Amazing,, I feel a heavy knot in my chest,,, because it had an ending" this line somehow hits me deep. Amazing ;;;;;;;;;
xingtizen
#3
Chapter 3: this is such a bittersweet and heartbreaking piece. AND I MISS YOU SO MUCH OMG BBY.

thank you for coming back to finish this
Sillysesame
#4
Chapter 3: The things we do are not always in the exact same line with the things we actually feel, right?
Love and life always fall short of our expectations but the journey through the pain is always worth it.
Thank you for sharing such a heartbreaking piece.
You wrote so well.
Sillysesame
#5
Chapter 2: I love this, as intricate as it seems. See you next chapter. ;)
Sillysesame
#6
Chapter 1: Curiosity kills the cat. Will move to chapter two immediately. Good job, dear writer. :)
leeplay
#7
Chapter 2: This is beautiful. It feels like an omnibus film, odd and mysterious but interesting, nonetheless. Looking forward to the final chapter :)
xingtizen
#8
OH MY GOD BABY U WRITING AGAIN I'M SCREAMING IFJFJDJ. i'm so excited omg TTTT