Voicemail

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"I like you a lot!" the pink haired boy yelled through his megaphone in the street. "Zelo-yah!" I said pulling him away from the crowd now watching us.

"Haewoo, I'm serious. I really like you." he announced. "Then prove it and make me fall for you! Make me say I like you back!" I challenged.

 

I didn't believe him. This was a boy who could choose any girl he wanted. I was just one out of thousands and I didn't even see as anything other than a friend.

Yet he succeeded, and I did say I like you.

 

But, now you're growing distant. You don't talk to me anymore. You don't even smile.

 

Zelo found someone else, and he admitted it with a stupid smirk.

 

How ironic, you sing of a girl breaking your heart* but I'm the one whose "memories have turned dirty"

Foreword

Lately I'm listening to B.A.P. a lot. And I've had a story like this in my head for awhile. Then I listened to Voicemail!

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=VpQjLz7wmLk

 

I've been inspired to write something! But since I have a bunch of other stories, I'll have to keep this short >_<

I hope you'll like it!

 

Note: I changed the name of the story to just Voicemail

 

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silent_melodi
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blueaoichan #1
Chapter 9: I was quite not satisfied with the ending honestly OTL it's kinda leave hanging
but hey that's what the sequel are for right ?
Despite that I really really love the fic <3 It's really.. wonderful. I guess I love this a lot ^^
CuteInWhite #2
Chapter 9: On my way to the sequel
Happy Birthday to you and Kevin Woo! Wish you both to have more blessings to come!
OhEmGee2pm #3
Chapter 9: ASDFGHJKL;; HALLELUJAH❤❤❤ HAPPINESS❤AM I DREAMING??? IS THIS REALLY HAPPENING???? /SCREAMS HEAD OFF .

*GETS CONFETTTI* *THROWS ON THE AIR* *DIVES ONTO THE FLOOR* *ROLLS IN CONFETTI* THANK YOU THANK YOU THANK YOU AUTHOR-NIM FOR MAKING A SEQUEL :'DDD YOU HAVE NO IDEA HOW HAPPY I AM RIGHT NOW . *STARTS MAKING CONFETTI ANGELS*

OMOMOMO! I can't wait for the update. EEEEEPP❤❤❤ >////////<
Naname #4
Chapter 8: U did a wonderful job on your fist completed fanfic
BabyAplus #5
Chapter 8: This story was so cute omg o: !!

I really wish you'd make a sequel.!! o: <3
OhEmGee2pm #6
Chapter 8: ASDFGHJKL;; BEAUTIFUL, JUST BEAUTIFUL :'D Loved the ending! It was sweet, not cheesy or anything, it was nicely done and it ended on a good note ^^♥ LOLOL

Oh and another thing...

SEQUEL! SEQUEL! SEQUEL!

SEQUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEELLL!!!!!♥♥♥♥♥

PWEEAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAASE *PUPPY DOG EYES* <I know I've been using that a lot lately but I'm going to keep doing it until you give into dem puppy eyes :3

Now to answer your questions: Your writing? I think it's just fine the way it is. Your writing style is perfect ^^~ OH! I LOOOVE the different POVs. It really helps with the story and what's going on with each character and I just love it C: Keep up with the different POVs, it makes the story all the more interesting c: Favourite character? Haewoo/Me. I love how she handles things and I wish I could be like her in real life ;A; I really loved Zelo as well. He may have been a jerk for some of the story but he eventually changed for the better and I liked that ^^ Hmm.. About the overused words... Hm. I don't think there's any :)

Anyways, the overall story is AMAZING, BRILLIANT, MAGNIFICENT EXTRAORDINARY AND THE LIST GOES ON~~~ I LOOOOOOOOOVE YOUR STORY♥♥♥ It's full of surprises and I'm always at the edge of my seat while reading. I hope you keep your writing style the way it is and/or add onto it somehow to make even more amazing (if that's even possible x)) and just keep up the great work ^^

.....

SEQUEL! SEQUEL! SEQUEL!

*Runs away giggling* kekeke Author-ssi HWAITING!!!
monkeyingalienhorse #7
Chapter 8: I love it! One of my favourite fics! I'm really excited if you're going to make a sequel! :D Keep on the good work, Hwaiting~~
OhEmGee2pm #8
Chapter 7: MUWAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA! The story is not over just yet >x) I'm actually pretty happy because I don't want it to end ;A; it's such an amazing storyyyyyyyy~ could you possibly make a sequel author-ssi??? *PUPPY DOG EYES*

Anywhooie, keep up the extraordinary work and update soon. HWAITING!!!❤
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