Circle

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Three hearts. Three heartbreaks. One story: her countdown to farewell.

Foreword

 

Crunch. Crunch. Crunch.

 

She flinched with every sound of the cracker’s merciless cracking. Looking up to the source of the sound, she immediately regretted her action. The man who sat nonchalantly crushing his snack was going to be the death of her. He was the epitome of perfection: fluffy, dirty blonde hair, a milky-white complexion, sparkling doe eyes, beautiful, prominent cheekbones, and thin, pink, kissable lips. She forgot how to breathe for a second as she mused how the simple action of crunching actions could seem so refined. But then again, everything he did was always refined to her.

Her musing eyes didn’t go unnoticed by the older man as he stopped munching and craned his right hand out to her, asking for her workbook as he asked, “Are you done?”

His warm deep voice – which contrasted his ageless appearance – snapped her out of her reverie. Her eyes, however, never left him. She shook her head.

“No, not yet. A few more minutes, please Oppa?”

The man smiled, nodded, and continued his snacking once while, all the while eyeing the girl sitting across from him.  However, instead of directing her concentration back at the workbook sprawled on her desk, she continued to stare at the man’s face. More specifically, on the crumbs that smeared the right edge of his lips. She had OCD when it came to neatness and the cracker crumbs on his lips irked her. A lot.

“Oppa,” She burst out when she couldn’t hold it anymore. “There are some crumbs by your lips.” She told him while touching the edge of her own lips, trying to get him to mirror her. He the edge of his lips and she gulped. How could such a mindless action seem to be so cute and sensual?

Keeping her composure, she shook her head, as the crumbs weren’t cleared yet. She repeated her motion from before. “It’s still there, Oppa.”

He again and his palm swiped over the edge of his lips. “Is it gone now?” He asked her, his eyes twinkling like those of a child.

Some of the crumbs had fallen off, but there was still a bit there. She shook her head. “A little bit more, Oppa. Here, let me do it for you.”

She stood up and reached her hand towards his face. However, when she was gently swiping the edge of his lips, her thumb came in contact with his tongue as he subconsciously tried to clean it off again. She was startled at the brief contact and felt what seemed like electricity run through her body as she quickly retracted her hand.

“Is it gone?”

Well to be honest, a little part of the crumbs were still there, but her breath seemed to be caught in and she could only nod wordlessly.

Lowering her eyes as she sat down, she tried to focus on her workbook, on the swirling Mandarin characters written on it. She could feel her heart pound crazily against her fragile ribcage – an after effect of the little accident. She bit her lower lips while idly doodling nonsense on her book, trying her best to divert her attention from the man sitting in front of her.

Choi Jinri knew that she didn’t have to be a genius to recognize her blooming love for the glorious man seated across her, her private Mandarin tutor, Luhan.

However, she also knew that she was doomed because Luhan was in love with someone else.



 

AN:

eh. I ended up with a new story. blame the plot bunny.

I'm still writing for Our Entangled Fate, Merry Go Round, and Through HIs Eyes, though. However, I don't know when I'll be able to update. Through His Eyes will be updated next week, but Our Entangled Fate... I don't know. I've just lost a chapter and now crying over it. T_T

I hope you'll enjoy this one, though.

I had this sudden idea and just had to write it down; almost like when I wrote Through the Broken Mask and Our Intertwined Red Thread.

Love,

Himalayancat

 

[EDIT] and big-big-big credit to RaspberryTaffy for being the beta for the story >_<

 

And credit to: musicchibi@ The Party Scene Graphic Shop for the awesome poster and background. Check the shop out, guys!

credit to aznawzmao@exoctic ground for the review

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niallophilic
#1
Chapter 1: FIRST CHAPTER AND IM ALREADY IN LOVE
shiningshawol13
#2
Chapter 15: Authornim, I just read this chapter again while listening to Infinite's Voice Of My Heart and Luna and Sunny's It's Me. And fudge it, I'm tearing up again haha.
I really loveeee the airport scene huhuhu TT ^ TT
Okay, just wanna say that hahaua xD
shiningshawol13
#3
Chapter 15: You know my favorite scene of all in this story?
That scene at the airport omfg. I can't express how beautiful yet heartbreaking it was. Her farewell to SooJung and Sehun is so sad I was brought to tears myself. And Luhan's confession... I just have to say - authornim, that was so beautifully written!!! (sorry for the curse xD my emotions are running high lols) - because that is so heartfelt. You have no idea how much it warmed and broke my heart at the same time. Just when she's about to leave, she learns of his feelings for her. Waah and him saying/acting out I Love You is the best! The moment's so beautiful, in a heartbreakingly beautiful way. Kudos authornim!
Now let me wipe my tears first before reading the sequel hehehe xD
Fighting! :)
maybeitsme #4
Chapter 7: Sehun seems so romantic!! But luhan too..am..
maybeitsme #5
Chapter 3: Omg sulli!!!!
historiachoi
#6
Chapter 15: For God sake my heart cried and ached while reading the start till middle part then i cried at the end of this part. Luhan sulli ...sehun. ah ...why authornim. You made my sesul sulhan feels messed around. Both deserved sulli's heart. Both were kind and sincere. Please make ...make more ...of sesulhan
historiachoi
#7
Chapter 12: Sehun .... :(
Ah oh my god holy heaven! Luhan fell to jinri from how long jinri fell to him! Ahhhhh don't know what to say anymore ...
historiachoi
#8
Chapter 11: Oh my god! The kiss! Was the most emotional kiss ever! Luhan ...luhan loves jinri right?????!! Omg my heart ...my poor heart .....
historiachoi
#9
Chapter 10: :( :( :(
This fic is so much heartbreaking ...
historiachoi
#10
Chapter 7: Poor sehun, ahhh i would choose sehun over luhan since sehun is my bestfriend and falling in love with bestfriend is the best feeling ever if i were jinri :(