New Friend

It Started with a Promise
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Taemin's POV

 "Because my parents are dead and I don't know any of my relatives" she whispered but I heard it loud enough.

 "Ugh, I-I'm sorry to hear that, I didn't mean to. I'm sorry" I look at her, her eyes starting to moist.

 "It's okay, wanna here the story?" she tried to smile.

 "If it's okay with you" I said, I'm kinda worried about her, I feel like I don't wanna see her crying. It hurts
my heart.

 "My dad and I had a fight that day, he wants me to stop from my career and asked me to take in charge of our company. I refused and I went out and drive really fast to go my photoshoot," she paused, her tears starting to fall, " after a couple of minutes my phone rang and I didn't answer since I know that it was only them calling me. After two hours the shoot is over, I picked up my phone and I was shock someone's calling me. I answered and it was a nurse telling me that my parents died in a car accident, they had been calling me for three hours and yet I didn't answer, if only I knew that would happen I should never had a fight with him" she cried.

 "Don't cry," I started to pat her shoulders but I know that wasn't enough. I don't know what to do when it comes to this. I think I made her cry. What should I do? Then I remembered the movie I watched where the guy hugged the girl when she was crying.

 "Shhh.. Don't cry, everything happens for a reason" I hug her. This was the first time I made this act. I'm not good at this at all but I want to comfort her. Then she stopped crying.

 "Are you okay now?" I asked.

 "Hmmm.." she nodded looking at me.

 She was too close to me, her eyes were wet from her tears, her pinkish cheeks, her cute lips. Ugh, Taemin hold yourself.

 "Thank You Taemin, I feel a lot better now" she smiled at me while wiping her tears.

 "Good to hear that, when we're done here, let's eat something down stairs" I smiled at her.

 "Okay" she smiled.

Minho's POV

 "Onew-hyung, you think Mika and Key would get along? I mean it's hard t

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Issdnn
#1
Chapter 92: Okay, I'm reading this on 2015 and you probably won't reply my comment but oh well, at least I've tried to tell my thoughts to you.
I read ALL of the chapters without exception. Actually I agree with the review that said the flow is really fast. I think there's not too many confilcts, or which I should say that you're stuck with one conflict and you bring it for so many chapters and it does not really interesting because some of the readers probably have guessed what would happen next (like Jessica's conflict). And I actually hope you could extend the part where Yui and Jonghyun getting along with each other (as a side story because I really think it's interesting) rather than bringing Jessica's case for too long (Key and Mika have 2 fights because Jessica, am I right?)
HOWEVER, I think this story is not as bad as the reviewer's think. I enjoy and understand quite much, but I do agree that sometimes it seems unrealistic. Well, for the typo I COMPLETELY understand. I know some people can't write on Microsoft Office Word for some reasons (actually I've been writing through Memopad, Email, etc.)
And for grammar and vocabulary, I think it's not that bad too. For people who doesn't speak English (me too), I think THE VERY FIRST POINT is people UNDERSTAND what you're trying to say. No matter it's a mix past and present tense (okay I know IT IS ACTUALLY NOT GOOD), the most important thing (esp for amateur) is people get what you mean. BECAUSE IT WILL BE USELESS TO FOCUS JUST ON THE PAST/PRESENT TENSE. (Pls do not misunderstood of what I mean)
And lastly, I just want to tell you that there are some people think that they made stories to please others, to satisfy others. However, there are some people too that think they made stories to satisfy themselves, for their needs. And I'm the second. I choose to write to satisfy my needs. I care for other's opinions, I considerate their words within my stories. I'm trying to be open BUT it should not affect my ideas.
Good job♡
-2Mirae-
14 streak #2
Chapter 92: even though the person who reviewed this story said she couldnt continue finishing i thought the story was awesome ^^ even though you have a bit of grammar mistake you could correct yourself next time ^^
i really enjoyed reading this ^^
locketblingermvp #3
Chapter 92: Wow... it's my third time reading... and wow.... i love it... SOOOO MUCH! Thank youuuuuuuu!! U r awesummmmmmm
kekeSHINee
#4
Chapter 23: Ur description is perfect... Can i ask u to help my first story which i oni update til 1/3 of chapter 3
YunYing
#5
Woah! Yup updated 11 chapters a day? That's so amazing!!!
YunYing
#6
Awww, I really LOVE this story!
Michellesofjan #7
kyaa i really love this story
Bright5
#8
I love this story^^
alyssa27 #9
It's getting more and more and more exciting..... Love this story!
SISA95
#10
Nice Story Or should i say AMAZING!!!<br />
i like it so much i finished it just in two days ^^ <br />
KEEP IT UP :)