Saturday Nightmare

Saturday Nightmare

PART 3

 

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The generator was on again five minutes later. Suju kids went back to their room.

Hyung…is it just an urban legend?” Ryeowook asked when they reached their room.

“It’s just an urban legend, don’t worry, Wooki…” Yesung said.

Heechul looked at him,

“Then tell us that girl’s name. If it just an urban legend, we’ll be OK,” he said.

Leeteuk stared at him,

“Enough, Heechul. Let’s go to sleep,”

Heechul sighed,

“Ah, hyung…but I really want to know! I’ll do nothing if I know that girl’s name…Come on, Yesung, tell me her name,” he begged again.

“Um…I really want to know too…” Sungmin said.

“Yes, tell us…” Shindong added.

“It’ll be OK. Furthermore, that weird man who make us scared isn’t here,” Eunhyuk said too.

“But…” Leeteuk looked at his dongsaengs.

“Yang Soo Mi…” suddenly Yesung said before Leeteuk found time to speak.

“What?” Kang In asked.

Ya!!” Leeteuk shouted at Yesung’s words.

“Yang…what?” Donghae asked too.

“Yang Soo Mi,” Yesung repeated.

Leeteuk looked worried.

“Yang…Soo…Mi?” Siwon repeated too. Yesung nodded. Heechul swallowed his spittle.

“Um…OK. It’s enough. I want to sleep, Bye all…” and he quickly went to bed.

“Me too. I’m really sleepy,” Zhoumi added.

“And me. Bye…” Eunhyuk said and quickly went to his bed too.

 Donghae scratched his head.

“Bye hyung…” and followed Eunhyuk.

Leeteuk looked at the member, who still sat around Yesung,

“Come on, kids. It’s late in the night now, let’s go to sleep,”

Ryeowook held Yesung’s arm,

“I want to sleep with you,” he said.

“Me too. Teuki hyung, let me sleep with you,” Kang In grabbed Leetuk’s arm. Leeteuk laughed a little,

Omo, calm down. It just a story…”

 They quickly went to bed and slept…

***

“OK! Then Eunhyuki will be our servant for a week!” Kyuhyun celebrated. Eunhyuk really surprised heard that,

MWO? Shirheo!!” he quickly responded.

“Take that manhwa and give it to me, Eunhyuki!” Donghae ordered.

“And take that cake with you too. I want to eat our desert now,” Siwon added while drank coffee.

MWO! Ani, ani. Shirheo!”

Sungmin laughed,

“Just accept it, Eunhyuki. You already our servant now, kekeke…”

 And that day Suju kids really enjoyed ordering Eunhyuk so many things. And it made them forget Yesung’s horror story.

***

When the day almost dark, Heechul suddenly remembered something,

“Teuki hyung, I’ll go to the village for a second. In here there’s no phone signal,” he said.

Leeteuk nodded,

“OK, come back at dinner time!” he answered.

Heechul took his cellphone and walked to the village. But there’s still no signal after he arrived there,

“Ah, what I must to do? Eomma said that I must call him today,”

And suddenly he saw a store. He walked in,

“Excuse me, ahjumma, can I use the phone?” he asked.

The store keeper looked at him. She’s 60 years old woman. She smiled,

“Ah, of course, young man. You can use it,”

“Ah, gamsahamnida,” Heechul smiled.

He finished at 6 pm. Then he left the store. When he walked back to Inn, he saw two kids fight,

“Don’t do that! She’ll come to you!” one of them said.

“No! It’s impossible! You’re coward, Jae Yong,” the other kid said while laughed.

The boy named Jae Yong answered,

“They said it is true, In Sung!” Jae Yong shouted.

In Sung laughed, then he took out something from his pocket, a spidol

“I’ll prove it to you. Just watch,”

And he did something that made Heechul confused. In Sung wrote on the wall near him,

“Stop it, In Sung!” Jae Yong shouted once again, looked scare. But In Sung ignored him,

“In Sung! Let’s go home!” suddenly there’s a woman sound.

In Sung surprised,

“Ah, eomma!”

A woman appeared then tweak In Sung’s ear.

“Go home now, you naughty boy!” that woman said.

In Sung quickly said,

“Ah, it’s hurt…Aw, alright, eomma…Aw!”

Then In Sung left with his mother. Behind him, Jae Yong seemed relieved.

Heechul, who looked interesting for what In Sung did before he left walked to the wall. He looked at the wall and find what In Sung wrote there. And suddenly Heechul shocked,

“Yang…Soo…Mi? It’s that the girl’s name in Yesung’s story?” he asked to himself.

***

When Heechul arrived, he suddenly felt,

“It’s just an urban legend,” he laughed a little.

Then he saw Ryeowook, who sat on the floor, draw something,

“What are you doing, Wooki?” he asked.

Ryeowook raised his head and smiled,

“Ah, hyung! I just want to make something for Sungmin hyung’s birthday,”

Heechul sat near him and saw red spidol which used by Ryeowook,

“Um…wooki?” he called him.

“What?” he answered while still work.

“Do you believe in Yesung’s story?” Heechul continued.

Ryeowook stopped,

“No. It’s just a story, hyung. Yesung hyung don’t believe it too. Furthermore, it’s just an urban legend which told from one generation to the next generation,” he answered.

Heechul smiled,

“Then you want to write that girl’s name? Yang Soo Mi?”

Ryeowook shook his head quickly,

“Obviously no. Ah hyung, please don’t mention that name, hyung. It made me scare,”

Heechul just laughed,

“Give me your red spidol,” he asked suddenly. Ryeowook looked confused,

“For what?”

Heechul just laughed once again and took the spidol from Ryeowook’s hand. Then he wrote something in a paper near Ryeowook,

Yang Soo Mi, he wrote. Yang Soo Mi, he wrote once again.

Ryeowook suddenly shocked on what Heechul’s doing,

Omo, don’t do that, hyung!” he grabbed Heechul’s arm.

Heechul laughed,

“Ah, it’s okay, Wooki,” and he continued wrote,

“Finally. Yang..Soo…Mi. Done,”

Ryeowook looked scare. Heechul laughed on his expression,

“Look? No bad things happen,” he said.

Ryeowook looked at around him,

“No, no! I want to leave this room,” then he prepared to to. Heechul grabbed his hand,

Ya! Why?”

“I want to leave, hyung!” Ryeowook tried to escape. 

“You said it’s just urban legend!” Heechul said once again. Ryeowook shook his head,

“Ah, but you shouldn’t do that! Let me go! How if she really come?”

Heechul laughed,

“Then let’s see how she looks! Is she beautiful?”

Ryeowook shook his head once again,

Shirheo! Shirheo! Let me go!” he shouted. Heechul laughed once again before finally let him go,

“Ah, OK, OK…Fine. Calm down, Wooki…”

Ryeowook quickly opened the door and left the room. Heechul shook his head,

“That kid…”

Then he looked to the floor,

“Ah, he forgot about this. Jinjja… Then I must keep it before Sungmin find it. Where I must put it?

Then he saw a brown box near him.

“Ah, I see a box there…OK,” he smiled and took the box.

***

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Taeyuriekimchj
#1
Chapter 5: Poor yesungie 😢
mieyhyun
#2
Chapter 10: This story is the best!! But I still can't accept the fact that Heechul, Ryeowook, Siwon and Henry died.. anyway, nice story author-nim =)
distortedhistory
#3
Chapter 10: Yesung's the hero XDD
I wonder what had happened to the other members though, I mean, Siwon, Wookie and Heenim died right? Anyways, nice story :)))
kaylalukman #4
Chapter 10: The story is creepy X﹏X but I still love it!
Sorry for the late comment author-nim
Have a nice day :)
tehyun90 #5
Chapter 1: i had finished read saturday nightmare a few month ago,..
but i still love this story!!!
eventhough i read other story, i cant forget this story,..
in the national exam, i write about this story,and adjust a bit.. hehehe:) thanks to hazuki11..
KyuRyuEJ97 #6
Chapter 10: Awesome story! I see some yewook here. Hehehe. Keep up the great work! :D
hazuki11 #7
@theHottestELF: Thank you *bow* ^^
@limminhyo: Thank you *bow*. I'm really happy you like it^^
@KyuteukLover: Thank you *bow*, I hope u'll anticipate my next story^^
@ppiinng: Thank you so much^^
@kuroneko96pro: Thank you *bow* I'm really appreciate your comment^^ Please anticipate for my next story^^
@yuki_chicken: Don't cry^^, It's happy ending^^
hazuki11 #8
@teukifan: Another horror story? That's a good idea^^ Please wait for it. Many thanks for your comments, really appreciate it^^
@Kyuhyunbiased: Actually I prepare two story with cast Suju oppadeul, just wait!^^
@luxury15: Thank you ^^ *bow*
@Evelyn029: Thank you, and thank you for read until the end^^
exsuho1004
#9
Chapter 10: NOOOO!! It's short, I hope it was longer... good story and really love the ending. Gah, Yesung you're an amazing man! Great job ^^
limminhyo
#10
Chapter 10: /shivers/ oh god, I nearly died while reading this. Dont really like the idea of the members dying, but it was nice to see Ryeowook appearing to help the members. Somehow i'm hoping the members will magically come back alive. But no matter what, this plot is really good... the story is really creepy :/