Third and Fourth Girl

Time Ѻf Ѻur ℒιʄℯ | An EXO fanfic | Story Starts At Chap. 11~

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third and fourth girl
Hey guys!!! In this chapter, I'm going to be revealing two girls!!!! Yay~ I might reveal three girls in one chapter someday.... But today I'm revealing two girls :D Have fun reading ^^ 

~Author’s P.O.V.~

Two girls were walking around the streets of Busan, aimlessly. The older girl was freaking out while the younger girl was looking around the place.

“Unnie, do you think we’re lost?”

The older girl shrugged and looked around the strange place they were at. “We just have to ask for directions.”

The younger girl sighed. “Why are we even in Busan?”

The older girl let out a nervous laugh and started biting her bottom lip.

The younger girl raised an eyebrow. “Unnie, what are we doing here?”

The older girls sighed. “I’m sorry that I dragged you with me. I heard there was a zoo opening today in Busan and I wanted to go but I had no one to go with. I asked everyone in the house if they wanted to go to Busan but no one wanted to go except you so here we are.”

“Unnie! You should’ve said something!” The younger girl kicked a rock in frustration. She sighed and bent down. “You should ask for some directions.”

The older girl bent down and sighed. “We can get through this!”

The younger girl smiled. “Are you hungry, unnie?”

The older girl nodded.

They stood up and looked around the place for a food cart.

Then younger girl saw a dukbokki cart and started dragging the older girl to it.

When they got there they bowed and said hi.

“Annyeonghaseyo. Welcome to Dukbokki Heaven. Would you like to eat here or to go?”

“We like to eat here,” said both of the girls in unison.

The old lady smiled. “You can sit there,” she pointed to the table next to the food cart.

They smiled and went over to the table and sat down.

“How did you find this place?” asked the older girl while playing with napkins.

The younger girl shrugged. “I just looked around and I found it.”

Then the old lady came to their table with a plate of dukbokki. “Enjoy.” Then she went back to the cart.

They started eating.

The younger girl took a napkin and wiped . “Unnie, are you done packing?”

She shook her head. “I need to buy a few more stuff and then I will be finished packing. Are you?”

She nodded. “But I just want to buy another bathing suit.”

“I read online that you can actually swim with dolphins in Hawaii somewhere!”

“That’s so cool unnie! Do you think we’re going to learn the hula dance?”

She nodded. “Of course we are! I want to wear a coconut bra and a grass skirt!”

The younger girl started laughing. “Me too.”

They finished their meal and paid the lady. 

“Thank you.”

They smiled.

Then the younger girl looked at the older girl.

“What? Is there something on my face?”

She shook her head. “Should we ask this lady how to get back to Seoul?” she whispered.

The older girl nodded and faced the old lady. “Um… Excuse me.”

“Yes?”

“Uh… How can we get back to Seoul?”

“On foot?”

They nodded.

The old lady started laughing. “Sweethearts, you can’t go back to Seoul on foot. It’s a long way. How did you guys get here then?”

 “The subway.”

She nodded. “You guys need to take the subway again.”

They nodded.

“Um… Do you know where the subway station is?”

She nodded and pointed to her left. “Just keep on walking straight and you’ll see it.”

They nodded and bowed down. “Thank you very much.”

She smiled. “Have a nice trip.”

They smiled and started walking.

“Wow. We were so close to the station and we couldn’t find it for hours,” said the older girl.

The younger girl nodded.

When they got on the subway, they sat in silence the whole way back to Seoul.

“We are at Seoul. Thank you for choosing us. Have a nice day.”

They went off the subway and started walking home.

“We should have a car instead of walking,” said the younger girl. She was tired from all the walking that they just did.

The older girl nodded. “I want to have my driver license so badly!”

When they got home, they plopped down on the sofa in the living room.

“I’m so tired.”

“My legs feel like jello.”

“Where have you guys been?”

Both of them turned around and saw the oldest girl in the house looking at them with aggravated eyes.

“We were at Busan.”

“What were you doing at Busan?”

“Unnie wanted to see a zoo that just opened there.”

The older girl sighed and shook her head. “Do you know how worried I was? It’s eleven pm right now.”

Both of the girls gave out a nervous laugh. “Are we in trouble?” they both said in unison.

The older girl nodded. “Ailyn Limsankul and Moon Eun Mi, you guys are going to be cleaning the whole house tomorrow. Now go to bed.”

They sighed and went to bed.

“It’s all your fault, unnie.”

“Sorry.”


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BloodyRavens
#1
Chapter 16: Cute chapters ^^. For some reason I don't remember getting the notification that you updated, but then again, I probably just overlooked it on accident (for chapter one). I see quite a bit of improvement with your writing style, good job :D. And I understand not updating because of school, I'm also really busy, since this is my last semester for my associates degree @_@, though I'm taking all art classes XD. Anyway, I hope you enjoy your spring break!
dattebayo-go
#2
Chapter 16: cute :) lol i hope you have a fun spring break!
and who was that mysterious guy?
cathy1190
#3
Chapter 16: Uwwaaa~! I love my little siblings ; u ;
SapphireSwoon
#4
Chapter 16: noticed your writing became more descriptive! :D which is pretty hard sometimes, so congrats on that. lol.
and i hope you enjoy your spring break! haha. glad to see this story is still alive!
wonpokemon
#5
oh this is bunnyxwarrior = ilovepeachbooboo and now is LUMINOUSSTARDUST!
just wanted to let you know. =]
aphotic #6
aisukremu has switched her account ^ ^
again.. OTL
cloudbursts
#7
this is DawnandDusk! changed my name! ^^
pureseoul
#8
Chapter 15: The story is starting i'm so excited! Lina and Soojae's parents seem understanding and warmhearted! :) can't wait for more hwaiting!
wonpokemon
#9
Chapter 15: awww Lina and Soojae with their guardians.
it's really heartwarming...
let's hope it's the same for all of them!!
cloudbursts
#10
Chapter 15: awww, what a heartwarming chapter. lol, both characters have such caring and loving guardians. ;u;