Story Link: Sticky Note with Wishes

Author Link: lockeyme and krystal_24

Title: (4/5) – It was really good. It caught my eye, and I have never seen anything like it before. I deducted a point, just because shouldn't it be Sticky Notes with Wishes, instead of Sticky Note with Wishes?

Foreword & Description: (8/10) – It was really short, and didn't give away a lot. It caught my attention, though, and wanted me to read more, in a way. The dialogue part, though, was confusing, so I deducted 2 points.

Poster, Background, Trailer, Appearance: (3/5) – I really liked the background. The background of the picture, was simple and white, with both SHINee and F(x) together in a circle. I deducted 2 points though, because you did not have a poster. Posters are used, to draw attention to the story, before you start reading the story. So I recommend that you get one.

Chapter titles: (4/5) – I liked how you put chapter titles on every single one of your chapters, but I deducted a point, because I didn't get some of them.

Spelling & Grammar: (33/35) – You did really good on your grammar, and everything, considering that your first language isn't English. A few mistakes here and there, so I took off 2 points.

Plot: (8/10) – The plot, at times, was easy to follow. But at the ending of the chapters, 7-10, you repeated some scenes, and it just got confusing at sometimes. I know you were just trying to show the scene in a different way every time, so you could show how each person was feeling, but it got a bit repetitive and confusing at the same time so, I deducted 2 points.

Originality: (10/10) – I've never seen a story like yours before. I thought it was very original, and that you didn't follow anything, or use someone else's idea again.

Character Development: (10/10) – It was just right. I could easily recognize your character's situation. I was rooting for Luna and Onew to get along again, for Taemin to realize Sulli's feelings for him and for Key and Krystal to be together and like each other.

Flow: (10/10) – Your flow was just right.

Total Before Bonuses: (90/100)

BONUS!!! – Things that are just the reviewer's personal preference. –

Writing Style: (5/5) – I loved your writing style. It was very neat, and very nice.

Enjoyment: (5/5) – I enjoyed the story very much. It pulled me in, and I couldn't stop reading.

Anticipation: (5/5) – It left me wanting to read more. My mom was calling me to eat, when I was reading your story, and I kept calling out '5 more minutes' just so I could finish reading it. I subscribed just so I could see what happens next.

Total After Bonuses: (105/115)

Reviewed by: WoAiDaesung