Never Thought Those 3 Words That I've Been Waiting For Will Be The Last From Her -- mizice90
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Story Link: Never Thought Those 3 Words That I've Been Waiting For Will Be The Last From Her
Author Link: mizice90
Title: (2/5)
The title is long, very long. I don't see a need for a title that long. Plus, not all the words need to be capitalised. It seems rather unsightly.
Foreword & Description: (8/10)
They were good, awesome in fact. But the reason why I did not award full marks is because your tenses kept changing. I understand that your first language isn't English but I'm extremely picky towards grammar, sorry.
Poster, Background, Trailer, Appearance: (4/5)
The poster was lovely, well done to the person you requested from. However, you should avoid using idols to represent the OC. A story poster is meant to catch the readers' attention. I know that Yoona is extremely pretty but at first glance, I had assumed it to be a JongYoon story. Try using uzzlangs instead.
Chapter titles: (5/5)
Short, sweet and simple. I like it. You didn't throw in random words and related the chapter titles well with the content.
Spelling & Grammar: (30/35)
I understand that your first language isn't English and I have to be more lenient. I can see the effort you made into writing and making sure your English was of standards. Well done for that. But your tenses kept changing, from present tense to last tense and vice versa, a common mistake most writers have. You may want to improve on that.
Plot: (8/10)
The plot was great, I enjoyed it very much.
Originality: (9/10)
Out of the many reviews I've done and the many fanfics I've read, I have never came across something like this. It's original, yet realistic. Good job.
Character Development: (9/10)
They were well-presented and I could nearly feel everything they felt and thought. The development was good.
Flow: (10/10)
The flow was good, not too fast and not too slow.
Total Before Bonuses: (85/100)
Writing Style: (5/5)
I love your writing style! Great job :)
Enjoyment: (5/5)
Oh god. You made me cry so much, I can't help me. And I'm in school! (which means I cried in front of everyone T.T)
Anticipation: (4/5)
I was anticipating each chapter after chapter and when I was finally done, my mind was only full if your story, thinking about everything in it.
Total After Bonuses: (99/115)
Well done! Thank you for your story! I enjoyed it deeply.
Reviewed by: SHINeeRoxx
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