Accept Me For Who I Am -- HwangAhYoung
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Story Link: Accept Me For Who I Am
Author Link: HwangAhYoung
Title: ( 5/5) – It was very eye-catching. I've read alot of fanfictions on here and I've never read a fanfiction with that title :)
Foreword & Description: ( 9/10) – The description was very good. It told me who were the two main characters, and you even put in pictures to tell me what they looked like so, that was good :) Uhm.. The foreword was just great!~ It made me actually want to read the story, and I gotta tell you I dont normally read these kinds of stories but, that foreword made me so, good job on that :)
Poster, Background, Trailer, Appearance: ( 5/5) – The poster was just amazing~ And the background makes it have a nice appearance with the poster and the story :)
Chapter titles: ( 1/5) – I really dont wanna do this but, #1 does not count as a chapter title ;A;
Spelling & Grammar: ( 34/35) – The grammer was very good considering your first language was not English~
Plot: ( 10/10) – It was very easy to follow and not confusing like other stories
Originality: ( 9/10) – It was very original, i've never seen a plot or anything like that :)
Character Development: ( 10/10) – I could tell who was who according to their situation and it was not confusing at all. And I was actually waiting for someone to die cause I was mad at them hehe~ So, the Character development was very good in anyways possible
Flow: ( 8/10) – It was fast but, I like flows that are fast. But, some people will not. I suggest you keep it like that for now though.
Total Before Bonuses: ( 91/100)
BONUS!!! – Things that are just the reviewer's personal preference. –
Writing Style: ( 4/5) – Your writing style was very good...its actually better than my writing style~
Enjoyment: ( 5/5) – I enjoyed it ALOT.. I'm kinda sad that the whole thing is over..Maybe you could make a sequeal or something :)
Anticipation: ( 5/5) – It made me want to anticipate what was next on the next chapter. I loved how you put To Be Continued in one cause it made me want to read the next chapter quicker :)
Total After Bonuses: ( 104/115)
Reviewed by: 2minlover1023
Hi hi~ It's meh 2minlover1023 (Minah if chu wanna call meh that hehe)
I loved your story!~
I wish you'd make a sequeal if you didnt already ^^;;
I subscribed to that story!
I wish you good luck on your other stories!~
Oh and I think you made it to the Recomendation thing :)
Yay!~ *Throws Confetti*
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