~*|~*| Forever Young Review Shop |*~|*~ { Busy }

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Here at Forever Young, we review honestly and unbiased.

We want to help your story reach its full potential. We will praise what you've done well, and point out your flaws. Hopefully, by doing this, you can improve your current and future stories! But, in order to do this... you must request! (But not before reading the rules >:( )

Shop Status:

Open || Closed || Busy || Hiatus || Hiring || Under Construction

Shop Rules:

1. Respect is a very important thing. If you cannot respect the staff, you will be warned. If you still refuse to treat the staff as proper human beings, you will be blacklisted. I will be very strict on this. Applies to reviewers as well. I will not hesitate to fire you if you do not respect customers.

2. Subscribe~. This is important, as well. If you do not subscribe, how will you know when your request is done? You can unsubscribe after you receive your review, but I would prefer you not to ^__^

3. Comment after receiving your review. Tell me what you think! Tell us what you might be fixing.

4. You may choose your reviewer. But, don't get -hurt if they specifically are not able to do it. Life happens, okay? We will try our hardest to do what you want, but sometimes it doesn't work that way. Please do not choose reviewers that are on hiatus, and refrain from choosing busy ones. If you're DYING to have a reviewer marked as 'Busy' review your story, go ahead. But if you're thinking of someone else that is not 'Busy', please choose them instead ^__^ If you do not have a preference put 'anyone' or something along those lines. Also, please respect (there's that word again) the reviewers' choices, and do not request for a story that has anything they're not comfortable with in it :).

5. Give us some time to finish! Some people will work faster than others. Do not rush us, please. Personally, I feel anxious when rushed >.> Also, expect it to take a little longer, if you have chosen a reviewer that is marked as busy or on hiatus.

6. Fill out the form fully. If there is anything missing, your request will not be put through until you've filled in the missing information. Don't worry, I will tell you what you're missing ^^

7. You may request from other shops. I believe in getting as many opinions as possible. So, I encourage you to request from other shops!

8. Please do not request more than one review by the same reviewer. After the first is finished, you may request again. You may request up to two reviews at a time, as long as they are from different reviewers. In addition to this, you may request different reviewers for the same story.

9. Please let us know if you want to cancel your request. You may cancel as long as the reviewer hasn't started filling out the rubric on your story yet.

10. Please credit us in your foreword after receiving your review! What's the point in getting a review if no one knows what you got? If you refuse to do so, I will warn you. If you still do not credit one week after the warning, you will blacklisted from the shop. On a side note, mention this password in your request, under 'Anything else', so I know you've read the rules fully: BoomShakaLaka. ** Note: This will change from time to time.

If you have any problems, questions, comments, or concerns, contact me or the co-author! I will be more than willing to help. Perhaps annoyingly willing to help you ^__^

Reviewers:

8symmetrical8

Preferred Genres: Angst, Romance, Fantasy, Supernatural. I will read any genre you throw at me, though :)

/ Yuri?: Both. I actually prefer yuri, but I don't know many girl groups -_-;

Biases: Shin Dongho from U-KISS!!! TOP, Zelo, Minwoo (Boyfriend), Mir, Taemin... My bias group is U-KISS, though. Tee hee. I am majorly biased for them. XD It's ridiculous...

Rated?: Yes ^__^

Strictness: I am not all that strict, usually. But if I see true potential in your story, that you are not reaching, I will be a little harsher.

I WILL NOT do: . Sorry, I really have to put my foot down on this one. Trust me, you'd be better off just not requesting for me for -__-;

Birthday: August 3rd.

Personal Message: Hello! :) I am the creator of the shop. Hahaha~ >:D I enjoy long walks on the beach, poetry, and kittens. Okay, I'm kind of lying about the first two. I've been to the beach only once, and did not take a long walk on it. Plus, most poetry . I LOVE kittens though. I do not bite... Unless provoked. So don't provoke me.

Status: Hiatus

 

Kakurine039

Preferred Genres: Any is fine with me

/ Yuri?: I prefer but i will read yuri as well

Biases: U-Kiss FTW!! That's my number one group~ Kevin Woo is the love of my life!

Rated?: Yes~

Strictness: Yep, i'm super strict. I will tell you straight up what i find wrong with your story.

I WILL NOT do: I'll read anything

Birthday: September 18

Personal Message: Hello! I'm Choi SooAe~ I'm Kevin Woo's wife, and that is all you need to know~

Status: Open

 

--fallenangel

Preferred Genres: Comedy, romance, fluff... anything

/ Yuri?: NO.

Biases: L.JOE!!

Rated? Nope.

Strictness: Not very strict. Unless it's about grammar.

I WILL NOT do: , or yuri

Birthday: August 2

Personal Message: Annyeong! SR imnida! I love kpop and my biases are L.Joe, Kai and L <3 When it comes to reviewing, I try my best to do it as professional as possible. I love reading and I have a short temper, but I always remind myself to stay calm and patient :) I do not review , or yuri.

Status: Busy

 

WoAiDaesung

Preferred Genres: Fluff, Angst, Comedy

/ Yuri?: Nope... Sorry!! I just can't do it.. (Not that i'm against it)

Biases: Exo! Kai, Luhan, L, Kiesoep, Daesung, Infinite, U-Kiss, BigBang, SHINee, Onew

Rated?: Nope... Sorry :/

Strictness: I'm not that strict. It will depend on the story though.

I WILL NOT do: Supernatural, or horror, or gangs... Cannot deal with violence..

Birthday: Haha... April 27th ^^

Personal Message:Ni Hao/Annyeong/Xin Chao! I love reading and writing fanfics as well ^^ When I review, I will try to be a really good reviewer, and if I like the story enough, then I will comment and subscribe ^^ I love reading Kai/Luhan/L/Exo-K or M/ Infinite Fanfics! ^^ But I can review any group or band you want. I don't review , because it makes me uncomfortable, and no yuri or because it also makes me uncomfortable... not that i'm against it, it's just that my mind won't take it.

Status: Open

 

Taeminnies_wifey

Perferred Genres: Fluff, Angst, Comedy..mostly anything :)

/ Yuri?: I mainly read but, i'm familiar with Yuri too ^^

Biases: SHINee's Taemin and Jonghyun. The Boss' Karam and Jay. Infinite. EXO. Super Junior. Mostly Taemin though. I wub Taemin so much OwO

Rated?: Yesh, I read that :) Mostly the only thing I read anyways ^^;;

Strictness: Not that strict..But, it really depends if I like the story or not :) I'm mostly nice though ^^

I WILL NOT do: I will not do Horror. Those give me nightmares!~

Birthday: >.< My birthday is May 23~

Personal Message: Annyeonghaseyo!~ ^^ You can call meh Minah~..If chu want. I love reading and writing fanfics :)
I have a short temper even though I might not sound like it ^^
I am bubbly most of the times. The stories i'm mostly strong in reading are: that is rated and thats not rated... I mostly read as you see but, I can read almost anything ^^
I like bubble tea and me ish Lee Taemin's wifey~ OwO Hehehe~
I have lots of emoticons because i'm in RPs too so yup :)
I look forward to reading chur story ;)

Status: Hiatus

Foreword

Rubric:

Title: ( /5) – Was it eye catching? Fabulous? Too common? Too plain? Was it capitalized properly? –

Foreword & Description: ( /10) – Did it grab attention? Was it disorganized? Too long? Too short? –

Poster, Background, Trailer, Appearance: ( /5) – Is there too much going on? Too distracting? Does it blow me away? –

Chapter titles: ( /5) – Did they have anything to do with the chapter? Or did you put random words up there? ** Chapter 1, Chapter 2, etc, do not count as chapter titles. –

Spelling & Grammar: ( /35) – Do you have good knowledge of tenses and general, simple English rules? Or do you make the same mistakes over and over again? –

Plot: ( /10) – Is it easy to follow? Or too complicated and weird? –

Originality: ( /10) – Is this your own creation, or is it something that is used a billion times over? Did you make an overused plot your own, or did you follow a cookie cutter outline? –

Character Development: ( /10) – Too much, or too little? Can I recognize with your character's situation? Am I rooting for some, and wishing others would just die? –

Flow: ( /10) – How's your pace? Too fast, too slow? Just right? –

Total Before Bonuses: ( /100)

BONUS!!! – Things that are just the reviewer's personal preference. –

Writing Style: ( /5) – Is it one that is beautiful, or just plain confusing? –

Enjoyment: ( /5) – How much did I really enjoy the story? –

Anticipation: ( /5) – Did you leave me wanting to read on and on? Or was I counting down the chapters until I was done? Did I want to subscribe to see what happens next? –

Total After Bonuses: ( /115)

 

Request Form:

Username of author(s):

Title of Story:

Story Link:

Genre / Theme:

Pairings included:

Rated? For what?:

Groups involved in your story:

Is English your first language?:

Reviewer:

Anything Else?:

 

Affiliates:

01 ♥Sparkling Jewels♡ | ★A Request Shop☆

02 Lumière Shop — graphic & review shop

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Reccommended Stories:

-- Stories that got higher than an 90 before bonuses, or higher than 100 after bonuses. --

Your story may still be put on here if it does not meet this criteria, though!!!

01 Accept Me For Who I Am -- HwangAhYoung

02 Remembering Kevin -- ParkKimi

03 Loving My Sister's Boyriend -- SonElf_EXOtic

04 Fated to Be With You --SujuElfSS501Fan4Life

Chapter 1: Staff rules and things-to-know.

Chapter 2: Review Status List.

Chapter 3 & up: Reviews :D

Poster Credit: La Musique~Here's the chapter.

Kakurine039
This will be going on a short hiatus due to several of the members being extremely busy with school work and several other things

Comments

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officiaLinspirit
#1
anahus
#2
I don't know if you guys still runs the shop or not, but I would like to cancel my request.. :))))
thank you.
kyouyas
#3
Chapter 12: Thank you so much for the honest review! Also, thank you for subscribing! Going to credit you now :)
bbyong0901
#4
Username of author(s): bbyong0901
Title of Story: Lost In Fairytale
Story Link: http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/144223/lost-in-fairytale-2pm-b1a4-blockb-infinite-superjunior-you-fiction
Genre / Theme: romance/angst/one-shot
Pairings included:any kpop idol & reader/oc , any kpop pairing
Rated? For what?:no
Groups involved in your story: any kpop group
Is English your first language?: no
Reviewer: 8symmetrical8
Anything Else?: BoomShakaLaka.
mimi81797
#5
Username of author(s): mimi81797
Title of Story: My Mind Says Hate, But My Heart Screams Love
Story Link: http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/279847/my-mind-says-hate-but-my-heart-screams-love-romance-shinee-forbiddenlove-smentertainment-pledisent-hellovenus-romeoandjuliet
Genre / Theme: romance
Pairings included: Key and Ara
Rated? For what?: not rated
Groups involved in your story: SHINee, Hello Venus
Is English your first language?: yes
Reviewer: --fallenangel
Anything Else?: I update from mobile because computers do not seem to cooperate with me so it is kinda hard to fix some things. *BoomShakaLaka* :3 thx!
UKiss_Shin_Soohyun #6
Username of author(s): UKiss_Shin_Soohyun
Title of Story: What Have I Done?
Story Link: http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/244107/what-have-i-done-gikwang-joondoong-suicide-mpreg-hunhan-abortion Genre / Theme: drama
Pairings included: Joondoong and HunHan
Rated? or what?: M
Groups involved in your story: MBLAQ, BAP, EXO K AND M, Super Junior, UKISS, and Infintie(?)
Is English your first language?: Yes
Reviewer: Kakurine039
Anything Else?: I love your stories! Fighting^^
SHINeeOppas
#7
Username of author(s): SHINeeOppas

Title of Story: Secrets Within

Story Link: http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/180629/secrets-within-infinite-teentop

Genre / Theme: Mystery, Vampires

Pairings included: L.Joe and OC

Rated? For what?: Nope ^_^

Groups involved in your story: Infinite and Teen Top

Is English your first language?: Yes

Reviewer: Taeminnies_wifey or 8symmetrical8 (Whoever's available to do my review.)

Anything Else?: BoomShakaLaka. Oh, I have a question. Are you reviewing my whole story? Thank You!
SujuElfSS501Fan4Life
#8
Chapter 10: @WoAiDaesung I'm seriously at lost for words! Over 100 points? I'm on the recommended list? Oh my god, I cannot contain my feels! Thanks for subscribing to my story! I honestly don't know what to say right now but I really do have to admit that I was smiling like a fool when I read the review! The constant POV switching, I'll try to make it so that it's not so confusing in the future ^^ Thanks for taking the time to review my story and I hope that you continue to stick with my story till it's end! Thanks again for reviewing my story!
kyouyas
#9
Username of author(s): kpoplistener
Title of Story: Aish! That Jung Daehyun!
Story Link: http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/249776/aish-that-jung-daehyun-yongguk-zelo-jongup-bap-daehyun-youngjae-kimnamjoo
Genre / Theme: fluff
Pairings included: DaeJoo (DaehyunxNamjoo)
Rated? For what?: nope
Groups involved in your story: B.A.P, EXO (minor character), and many more to come
Is English your first language?: Yes
Reviewer: Any ^^
Anything Else?: BoomShakaLaka