Story Link: Red Strings of Fate

Author Link: leaf04

Title: ( 4/5) – It was very eye-catching but, common around here just to let you know~

Foreword & Description: ( 7/10) – It grabbed my attention because it was very. But, I assume you write that way so, its okay with me. Uhm.. The foreword was good, it told me who was who. But, you did not have to put which kpop band they were from ^^;; People can look it up and its also in your chapters sometimes..

Poster, Background, Trailer, Appearance: ( 5/5) – It was the first thing I looked at when I opened up the story so, thats a good thing. The background goes well with the poster and matches so, that is a big thumbs up! :)

Chapter titles: (4 /5) – Your chapter titles matched what you wrote in your chapters. But, you repeated a chapter title which was "Birthday". Just to let you know just because you put '~' or "!!" it does not make a difference in your chapter titles. But, overall it was good ^^

Spelling & Grammar: ( 30/35) – I read that you were Chinese so, I understand in some parts. Uhm.. You put in chapter 3 "U" instead of "You" just to let you know~ And you double your letters sometimes~ Like this: "Beeautiful". See how I doubled the "e"? Yeah, thats what you did sometimes...Uhm.. You put alot of Korean words which you don't have to do because sometimes people can't understand them (like me) but, sometimes you put what they meant which made me happy. But, you do not have to put the meaning for Gamawo or Annyeonghaseyo. Or something like that~

Plot: ( 7/10) – It was not easy to follow at all. The chapters were very long and confusing to me...

Originality: ( 9/10) – Very original. I have read lots of fanfictions here and it's the first time I read something like that~

Character Development: ( 8/10) – It's fine. I understood which characters were in what situations~ So, thats good :)

Flow: ( 6/10) – It was very slow for me. But, sometimes its in the right speed. It's fine right now but, speed it up a little bit~

Total Before Bonuses: ( 80/100)

BONUS!!! – Things that are just the reviewer's personal preference. –

Writing Style: ( 4/5) – It's very good. I like the font OwO hehehe~

Enjoyment: ( 4/5) – It wasnt really my style..I dont usually read these kind of stories.. But, I still enjoyed it at the same time :)

Anticipation: ( 4/5) – I gotta be honest..I was actually counting the chapters until I was done *^*... But, these kind of stories I do not usually read.

Total After Bonuses: ( 92/115)

Reviewed by: 2minlover1023

Yo, its meh. 2minlover leaving a message for chu Leaf04~
Just telling chu to not forget to credit the shop and reviewer :)
I hope chu liked your review~
I subscribed to your story so, I look forward to reading more chapters ^^
Hehehe~ Bye Bye now OwO