Title: (4/5) – The title was cute. I would definitely click on it. It's eye-catching too. 

Foreword & Description: (6/10) – Although the description was fantastic - it was great I must say. It makes a reader want to read on. You placed the readers at the edhe of their seats by not revealing too much information - the foreword was lacking. It was nothing but posters and credits. The amount of credit you placed there made your foreword seem untidy. 

Poster, Background, Trailer, Appearance: (4/5) – The poster and background are amazing, I loved them to bits. But like I mentioned above, the foreword was a little untidy. I would have given you a 5 but the appearance made you lose one mark. 

Chapter titles: (1/5) – The titles were simply 'Chapter 1', 'Chapter 2' and so on. I expected you to have the title related to the chapter. 

Spelling & Grammar: (27/35) – I don't have much problems with your grammar, except for some mistakes I spotted here and there.

Plot: (8/10) – The plot was great. But there was just kne problem - you did not state why Namjoo went to their dorms in the first place. 

Originality: (7/10) – Your story was original, although I might have seen a story like this on AFF.

Character Development: (7/10) – The character development was fine although there were some parts which I was a little confused at. 

Flow: (7/10) – The flow was rather good. 

Total Before Bonuses: (71/100)

BONUS!!! – Things that are just the reviewer's personal preference. –

Writing Style: (4/5) – Your writing atyle was fantastic. 

Enjoyment: (5/5) – I loved the story. Daehyun is after all my BAP bias. 

Anticipation: (4/5) – You left me wanting to read more and more; Subscribed! 

Total After Bonuses: (84/115)

Reviewed By: --fallenangel