"Tell Me Where it Hurts..."

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It's difficult to pretend you’re okay especially when you've been hurting so much for a person you care so much a about; your best friend. This is exactly what Kim Kibum has to go through for the past 4 years, but maybe someday, he'll be able to tell the one he loves where his hurting

 

Foreword

As I was holding on to your hand, the hand I knew back to front like it was my own. Its warmth was hovering above the middle of my chest, right on top of where my heart was, I close my eyes before placing it on top of my pulsating heart.

“Key…” Your voice was low as you called my name.

 

The heat of your palm, sitting so firmly on my top of chest was enough for it to spread all over every cell of my body; it felt like a lifeless body which awoke by the touch of your hand. I was always a er for clichés,

I celebrated as found the courage within my soul to finally open my eyes, regretting it almost instantly as my gaze fell straight, at your big confused yet anticipated  round eyes.

“You w-wanted to k-know, where i-it hurts right?” I finally asked, cursing at the way my voice trembled and crack as a hold the tears trying to fight their way out of my already defeated eyes. 

 

I knew everything must have been so new and unfamiliar to you, I wasn’t always the one to show my weak side, but I can only do so much, so much. So it didn’t surprise me that you only nodded at my question. Just like the dense puppy, you are.

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Hey,,

guys missed me lol, probably not well here it is a very cliche/angsty but totally Jongkey two-shot for my lovelies... <3

and dont forget -iloveyou-... <----- did you totally see what i did there XD

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-iloveyou-
Hey guys just to let you know a special oneshot in Jonghyun's POV will be written under this so yeah watch out for it and comment please love you lots -iloveyou

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21Ame-chan #1
Chapter 6: Oh the fluffiness...!!! ☁️☁️☁️☁️☁️ Why must Jongkey be like this?? I'm suffocating and I have no regrets lol ♥️❤️♥️❤️♥️❤️♥️❤️♥️❤️♥️❤️
21Ame-chan #2
Chapter 5: Chapter 5: Chapter 5: Kibum was being so ridiculous....sighs.... sounds like me lol Jjongie has asked a million times, and not just in the song, what is wrong? and even asked him to clearly state what he's trying to convey because he doesn't understand. Yet, he says Jjong is the one who's dense, doesn't care, blah blah blah.... ^_^

Super great story by the way!!!! I'm so in looooooove with it that I'm re-reading ♥️♥️

Btw, the song the title is based off has been a forever favourite of mine and the way you used it in the story had me bawling...and then Kibum was crying and Jjong singing and what he had said to kibum before he did......it was such an emotional moment in the story. I just couldn't contain the feels!!! Gosh it's so amazing!
21Ame-chan #3
Chapter 7: Chapter 7: came across this again and realised I never left a comment. So please have all the hearts ♥️ ❤️♥️❤️♥️❤️♥️❤️♥️❤️♥️
Shinee250508
#4
Chapter 5: OMG! OMG! OMG! I can't proceed to the next chapter without saying something about this one. Ugh!! My feels. Idk how to explain what I'm feeling right now but ugh!! It's something like my heart is hurting or something for Kibum. XD
hahahah.. XD
ilabya34 #5
interesting~
shineeshipper #6
Chapter 7: That was so sweet and fluffy, man I loved it :') it had me feelin so much emotions and I think I'm gonna die ;u;. Off to drown in the sequal now~
ShinEllie
#7
Chapter 6: *clapping her hands* Oh, my God, this was so sweet and great and nice and cute and so Real story!!! :) i love it so~~ much <3 i wanted to read it even earlier but i didn´t have time and now when i read it... omg, i love it and i´m so happy that i read it! :) i even had tears in my eyes... i could exactly feel how Key felt... and i still can´t believe that someone could write so real and cute story... it´s as if it really happened... great job, really :) it´s so well written that i could imagine everything u wrote.. it´s incredible :) and i would gladly read even longer version of this story hehehe :)) but as i can see there is also sequel so i´m gonna read it right now! :) thank u so much for writing and posting this :) great job :) great story :) you´re great :)
Jorbaby #8
Chapter 6: AWWWWWWW THIS WAS THE BEST FLUFFY AND CUTE AND JUST AHHHHHH AMAZING STORY EVER!!!
I loved ever minute of it oh my god I smiled and just wanted to run and hug Jongkey until the end of time!!
This was -claps- You're an amazing writer!
BabyAplus
#9
Chapter 6: OMG this story is so incredibly awesome o:
iloveyoub #10
Chapter 6: awww~ i love this story so much. and it start and end with key's pov. i want to know from jonghyun's pov too. sequel? ^^;;