I was effing crying a bunch when I was reading this, whenever I read this kind of stories, sad songs are ready. I was listening to "A Bitter Day" & "Goodbye" from a drama OST as I read through this literary art piece of yours. You were indeed a great author and this deserves more subs. I got carried away by this story like the other readers. It's 1:35 am here in the Philippines and yet, I have managed to read this story. The story that makes me cry. To be honest, I was ignoring this story before I decided to read this, and I was hesitating to continue as I am in the foreword and guess what, I'm satisfied to what I have done!
I have to say that this story was quite amazing/beautiful/sad/super angsty but I loved it. Since I was a bad person, I also looked at the comments right when I found this story. And I found out Sehun died. ;( natural instinct of a reader= look at comments before reading story. Resolution: readers (me) are stupid. LOL :)
Because I was a bit in a hurry, I skimmed your story quickly, so at the end, I still didn't realize that sehun died; I thought he just left. When I reread the story again, I finally realized that sehun died and the last couple of chapters were memories :'( such beautiful memories. I can't descide who is better between Sehun and Kai in my bias list, but today I was leaning towards Sehun. At first, I thought Sehun was a bit selfish, but I thought it would have been better if Hana ended up with him because of the way he cares for her- Sehun seemed very gentle while Kai (Jong In) seemed carefree, outgoing, and playful. Even though Hana loved Sehun, I think that her personality was more like Jong In's- playful but she was also very caring. Normally I dislike stories where one of the characters die, but this story was well written and just perfect with the memories as the ending, leaving bittersweet memories for us readers. The ending is just the best: having an awesome dream, and waking up to find that part of it was real. I'm glad that Kai/JongIn had a silent peaceful ending after Sehun died, and both Hana and him want Sehun back regardless of their past. Buti am curious about how the scarf got there- but that would be better if the reader used their imagination ^.^ I can't express my gratitude so THANK YOU X INFINITY! Please continue writing Exo angst stories ^.^ and sorry for my looooong comment I get carried away a lot :) THANK YOU AUTHOR! >.<
sehun's...gone....? T_____________________T
i~ wahh. dunno what to say. it's a good story, albeit a heartbreaking one. I like the "memories" chapter. sweet :) all in all, I love this ^.^
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