Memories: Autumn

The Difference Is

 

Her footsteps scatter from leaf to leaf, she wobbles and hops back on her feet. The cool air caresses her cheek and she pulls off her scarf, ready to jump into a pile of colorful leaves. Something stops her and she can recognize his touch anywhere.

 

They sit on a bench and talk about frivolous things. Until he brings up ‘graduation, life, future…’

 

She  shakes her head at that and pretends not to hear him. “Sehun, let’s just forget about the future and just live however the hell we want to.”

 

Sehun’s eyes widen at this, and for a moment he denies it, but slowly accepts her statement.

“I can’t imagine a future without you there.”

“Oh really?” She scoffs and puts her hair into a messy bun. Her hair has gotten longer, and Sehun is a little sad because he liked her short, youthful looking hair.

 

The length made her seem older, more mature. Yet, she hasn’t changed a bit since grade school.

 

Sehun lights up into a smile as he jumps into the heap of leaves with her, hand in hand, his eyes lift up into half moons.

 

“A future without me? That’s impossible. I’ll always be there, even if you don’t want me to.”

 

“What if you are..My future…”

 

“Me?” She blushes at that, she doesn’t really know what he means but his soft voice makes her flustered.

 

Sehun grins, and throws a bunch of leaves at her face.

 

She avoids his eyes, and he brushes her hair, the leaves fall to her shoulders.

 

“You alright?” He lowers his head and moves her bangs, afraid she might be crying.

 

She was grinning like a hapless fool.

 

 

 

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cloudofloveliness
#1
Chapter 7: This is a good read. I loved it! The length was okay^^
kavs_6k
#2
I was effing crying a bunch when I was reading this, whenever I read this kind of stories, sad songs are ready. I was listening to "A Bitter Day" & "Goodbye" from a drama OST as I read through this literary art piece of yours. You were indeed a great author and this deserves more subs. I got carried away by this story like the other readers. It's 1:35 am here in the Philippines and yet, I have managed to read this story. The story that makes me cry. To be honest, I was ignoring this story before I decided to read this, and I was hesitating to continue as I am in the foreword and guess what, I'm satisfied to what I have done!

You did a great job here ^^

With lots of love,
kavs_6k
kyoongsprout
#3
This made me cry.
kyaaannie_k
#4
I have to say that this story was quite amazing/beautiful/sad/super angsty but I loved it. Since I was a bad person, I also looked at the comments right when I found this story. And I found out Sehun died. ;( natural instinct of a reader= look at comments before reading story. Resolution: readers (me) are stupid. LOL :)
Because I was a bit in a hurry, I skimmed your story quickly, so at the end, I still didn't realize that sehun died; I thought he just left. When I reread the story again, I finally realized that sehun died and the last couple of chapters were memories :'( such beautiful memories. I can't descide who is better between Sehun and Kai in my bias list, but today I was leaning towards Sehun. At first, I thought Sehun was a bit selfish, but I thought it would have been better if Hana ended up with him because of the way he cares for her- Sehun seemed very gentle while Kai (Jong In) seemed carefree, outgoing, and playful. Even though Hana loved Sehun, I think that her personality was more like Jong In's- playful but she was also very caring. Normally I dislike stories where one of the characters die, but this story was well written and just perfect with the memories as the ending, leaving bittersweet memories for us readers. The ending is just the best: having an awesome dream, and waking up to find that part of it was real. I'm glad that Kai/JongIn had a silent peaceful ending after Sehun died, and both Hana and him want Sehun back regardless of their past. Buti am curious about how the scarf got there- but that would be better if the reader used their imagination ^.^ I can't express my gratitude so THANK YOU X INFINITY! Please continue writing Exo angst stories ^.^ and sorry for my looooong comment I get carried away a lot :) THANK YOU AUTHOR! >.<
Yuriey
#5
sehun's...gone....? T_____________________T
i~ wahh. dunno what to say. it's a good story, albeit a heartbreaking one. I like the "memories" chapter. sweet :) all in all, I love this ^.^
xXrawrbearbearXx
#6
This is gonna sound cheesy, but I cried so much reading this :(
I really enjoyed this!
shouldntdodat #7
Yourfaceispretty: oh stop you're making me blush! Glad you enjoyed it and cheer up haha~
YourFaceisPretty
#8
I read the story like last night.... And I seriously had to sleep with a broken heart.



Thanks author, I'm still broken hearted now... but that's like.... okay.




I LOVE YOU.
YOU NEED TO BE FEATURED.
shouldntdodat #9
Liarliaryoureonfire: *fans you* oh dear...sorry for the unexpected surprise! We're glad you enjoyed it though! ^^