Beautifully Yours [GD fanfic]

Description

An aspiring writer finds love in the form of the unlikeliest person.

Jung Hee- Main Character- Very outgoing,school council member, and quirky, but clueless. Aspiring writer.

Ji Yong-  Very cute, but cold on the outside. Very reserved. But he has a hidden side to him that he never shows (surprise).

So Eun- Jung Hee's best friend, has a major, major crush on Taeyang. Doesn't admit it, but it's obvious.

Chin Ho (Council President)- Very shy, has a crush on Jung Hee.

Foreword

You can imagine yourself in the main character's shoes! 

Aand shoutout to all GD FANS!

GD for life! smileyheart

vasuchan
So now Ji Yong wants to improve himself for Jung Hee! This is called true love. Gaah.

Comments

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deardiaryyou #1
gd is s hot
aanasoCool #2
too messed up 4 me... But i looooove it.... =3
fanfic_lover
#3
Ahh...
Both of them being so oblivious...
RonRoxx
#4
TOP likes Bom...isn't it...??
RonRoxx
#5
Jung Hee Jealous...Jung Hee Jealous....!!! yippeee....!!!!
shawolistic #6
' everything, just kiss her'
BEST LINE EVER!! B)

so far, so good
although it would have been better if you would do away with the mini notes. If you have anything to clarify then put it altogether under the Author's note section :D
I am loving the way your letting GD's character grow
vasuchan
#7
Thanks so much for your feedback! This is my very first fanfic, so I'm kind of a newbie. I'll improve on the character description!
shawolistic #8
I LOVED THE FIRST CHAPTER!!!! <3 <3
kyaaaahhhh!!!! *_*
i would love it if you explain your character a bit more.
the details were kind of pouring in with a bang. i mean all of a sudden she was the student council member. that kind
but i loved how you portrayed GD!! i like my GD all obnoxious!!!
I am love this form of writing with little punch lines strewn around.
you have a little grammatical error going around but it suits with the type of the story you are writing ^_^
shawolistic #9
Oh! it would be better if you describe your description more! due to AFF's format readers only see the description first so u hv to give a broader idea about what kind of story they are in for.
Secondly your character chart, make it a little more attractive, like put in pictures and stuff
I am not a huge fan of pictures but it will definitely increase your views :D
RonRoxx
#10
WOW...what a reaction to a SLAP....!!!!
awesome