Look At Some Sucessful Characters. Why They were sucessful?

How To Write a PROPER Story

Now to take a look at two characters created by the masters! :) These characters are drama characters in which I found to be quite unique and...well acted.

Sun Ah (Don't Hesitate): I congratulate the actress on some amazing acting. Her characters obsessive over her husband, and will do anything in her power to stay with him, making her seem somewhat crazy. In all honesty, she really is! Her character is unlike any other, she's evil, and unfortunately very demanding. I congratulate the actress on some amazing acting skills!

Jun Pyo (Boys Over Flowers): A very unique character. Self centred and VIOLENT. Though not overly. Even though he has a good education he doesn't know how to speak english properly...which gives us some funny humour moments. This characters was well acted and WELL put together!

WHY are these characteers sucessful?

Each one of these characters is not cliche. We talked about this word before, cliche is an original idea that has been used way too often. This applies to not only characters, but plotlines, settings, situations, etc. 

These characters were sucessful because they were created as unique individuals, as if they were REAL people. Each individual has something important to say to the world, something important that they feel they need to stand for. They are not like the cliche characters. 

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Hey everyone! So I am at the cottage for eight days O.O But I will be writing there, so when I get back expect MEGA updates :)

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DemonDays
#1
Chapter 10: Aww Whatever the reason is that you will be leaving, I hope it will make you happy:) Thank you for all the wonderfull tips and lessons~! ^^
InfinityRhapsodyl
#2
Chapter 10: whoa.. actually I enjoying reading this.. but have not a lot of time.. so I'm still in the chap 2..
whoa..
peachysoo
#3
You have some helpful advice, but the grammar and spelling mistakes that litter a few of your chapters take a lot away from what you are trying to tell your readers. It's great that you are trying to help others and give some good advice, but when your work is littered with mistakes, it takes away some of the credibility you are trying to build up with this story.

I'm not trying to be a grammar Nazi, because I'm not one, but it would help if you could check over your chapters for spelling mistakes and at least make sure you have the basics of grammar down like knowing when to capitalize your sentences. Especially when you often switch between capitalizing and not capitalizing your sentences. If you stuck to doing just one of them, it would have been okay (and I don't mean using all caps for words to provide emphasis, I'm meaning some sentences have the correct capitalization, while others do not), but you didn't and for someone like me, a lot of times I can't take what you are trying to say seriously.

So I'm not trying to be a hater or anything here, but I suggest fixing up what you have written a bit, because not only would it make you seem more professional but also give you some extra credibility points for those that may want to potentially use this. The ideas are good, but how it's presented may make some people question your advice, even if it's well thought out and actually good advice.

I can understand that there may be a few mistakes here and there, because not everyone is perfect, but going through and making sure everything is at least spelled correctly and basic grammar rules are followed for the most part will definitely help you in the long run.
DemonDays
#4
Chapter 9: Even though the update was short you covered it well ^^ Maybe you have silent readers?
DemonDays
#5
Thank you so much for this, tutorial(?) !! This is turning out to be so helpful :D
Kyungiiie93
#6
Wow *clap clap*
This is actually really helpful!
LOL I was just going through your stuff and got interested in this XD
sanjana_kalyanpur
#7
Chapter 1: http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/278862/superstar-nichkhun-victoria-you-luhan-ocs-romanticomedy
can u pls tell me how the story is? and give me some tips..
everything is in a dialogue form
pls tell me how it is!
thanks! :)
ampharoses
#8
i praise you xD
My main problem is.. i'm too impulsive 0_o i write the first chapter of the story, then i COMPLETELY lose interest in it and stop writing it, especially apply stories. But i feel obligated to keep writing because they all worked so hard on their applications ....... ._.
anyway...
the big drama writing project seems cool, i would love to join but the only problem is that I KNOW i'm just gonna get lazy and never do my part T-T its awful, its SO hard for me to dedicate more than 20 minutes on writing per day... unless its a oneshot or something... o_o
kagaki #9
These are very good tips :)