Reviewer: kyaagirly

The TItle: If I were a random person who happened to stumble across your fanfic, looking at the title, I don't think I would've understoood what the title meant. It was sort of confusing. (3.5 points)

The Plot: There isn't really a fixed plot of what's supposed to happen, but I guess you can sort of get the jist of what this story is supposed to be about. However, it doesn't give out too much info, which leads the reader to think of what's going to happen in the story, which is good. Also the topic you chose for this story is very unique, compared to the many other stories that i've read so far.  (9 points)

The Context: I really liked how you had some reference notes and footnotes at the end of your fanfic. You style of writing was very descriptive and detailed. I like how you stated a few words or phrase at the end of each paragraph. Lastly, your choice of words impressed me. Your use of vocabulary and terms made your story seem more professional like and that amazed me. (9.5 points)

Character Development: The character didn't really change much throughout the story. She mostly had the ideas of wanting and not wanting the baby. Her feelings didn't reallly change. However, I do like how you put those traits and thoughts in action. They are what sorta brings the character's feelings out. (7 points)

Plot Development: Your plot was very impressive. It led from one stage to the next, like from before labour, to actual labour, and after labour. it was very well written and organized. All of that led to the ending which was stated in the end and it depicted a very nice and touching message at the end. (14 points)

Overall: Your fanfic was superb ! Great job ! This topic is very distinctive. I actually like the stories that are not always about love and romance and drama. So I had some interest in your fanfic. I hope you continue writing. :D

Total Amount of Points: 43/50

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I hope you are satisfied with my review. Thanks for requesting ! (: -kyaagirly